ff: ''a many splendoured thing', update pg. 102 - Page 24

u r superb dear............very unique style of writing

Originally posted by: estee

@nitya, fari: 'kay, i'm putting up half of the next ''chunk'' *ya, only half, darnit! Half is totally fine! something is better than nothing right? 😛 i seriously think prem-heer have gone overboard this time.. i really daren't put up the whole thing just now. Nice Idea! I need time to absorb what ever Prem and Heer are going to do before I can read more. If I don't, then I'm going to go phrazy!!(lol..that sounds funny) if anyone screams and sues me for non-pg-13-ness, remember i am going to wholly and squarely blame you. deal? Deal! We're all over the pg-13 rating anyways..we can handle non-pg-13-ness!😛If it has Prem and Heer..I can handle anything!😆

and nitya. prem's not just human, he's a gentleman -- like me (well, me if i were a guy... 😆)You estee..are a gentlewoman 'a woman who knows the thoughts of the holy couple! That makes you kinda like an all-knowing being(aka god!) doesn't it? <---btw..that's me bowing . so, no, i'm afraid that he's not gonna do: -->

oh, but i must admit -- i would love to meet a version of prem who would do such things! he looks soooooo cool! 🤣He does look cool doesn't he...he'll probably do it to DJ chachi next week!! oooo..me is really excited now... 🤔 actually now that I think about it..Prem is too sweet to do that to anyone. Even DJ chachi.

What you can do is write another FF and make Prem a super-human!

nice idea..isn't it?!😛

🤣

estee, estee,

EStteeeeeeeeeeee Yaar kyun tang karti hai .... why did you leave it there .... please update soon *If possible*

well err..u better come out with the rest of the story Missy!!

Wah wah! Anu is quite a poet!

EEEEEEEE😲 Why do you even have a doubt about being banned. I would have banned you for sure if you hadnt updated....😡🤣 Du'h...its not even a question to be asked...seriousliiii.....

and about the "HALF"😲 chunk.....




OMGGGGGGGGG....WHAT WAS THAT???!!!!!! Your warning SHOULD have been taken seriousli...

And bang my head...i did NOT take it seriously.......i shud have known......sheeeshhh....☺️
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
and yaaaa....its so true...he is ready to do anything for her without any thoughts...she wanted the fire and he just gave it away..... ok.....m ophiciallyy DEAD.....tah tah....off to heaven...i wonder how manyth time is this..🤔

and such besharminess in the club?????? 😳 ohh...i know....it was FOR heer....and how cud prem think anything more or lessss?!!!

But i feel for him...the guy does all the thinking....and heer....she is not at al thinking man....🤣🤣 and vice versa 😳 him artist???!😲 no wayssssss.......dis is already crossed pg-13...other way wud hav gone pg-18.....seriousli...🤣 but i hope she starts thinking.....he needs a company to "think" 😆

i loved the updt.....sheesh....i know why u chose it for just half updt...😆😆 ishmarty pants....😆

but anyways....this is d first thing i read in the morning....and u killed me wid it....off to read it again....dis time lemme focus on their thots or the other things tht i missed while i was bzy imagining the scene in the first go.....u meanieeeee.....

and yaaa....i'l ban u if next chunk doesnt come up on time!!!

Luv Nans

How the HELL am i gonna catch up??? HMPH.

Slow down E!!!! *ducks eggs from every1* ok,ok.... i know!!! don't slow down.....😔 Me will catch up slowly

i won't do injustice by not dissecting the whole story in my reply😆
But lemme tell u d2cp.... u are FANTASTIC ⭐️

Oye E, 🤗

Come on sweetie, we need an update now!! That was quite magical and quite a cliffhanger you left us at. These two are so in tune with each other. Just dont make Prem put on his thinking hat and start staying away from Heer. Please don't. But I trust your Heer. She just needs to understand what she is feeling. And I hope its not too difficult for her to trust her heart with Prem after all that she has gone through.

Why can't these two have a life without scheming cousins and relatives and meddling moms (albeit good naturedly) interfering? Loved how the entire staff knows whats up with these two. I am waiting to see how Harman and Preet will react to Prem Juneja's attraction to the gorgeous architect.

I am supposed to start making lunch and I am here drooling over ur Prem and Heer.

Update soon E.

Love,
Ash

awesome update esteee.
loved premeer scenes very much.