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Posted: 16 years ago
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plz ppl do read my this fan fic, i am sure u ppl will love it and i dont believe in stretching the story so it will run fast😊
prem:doctor, main thek to hu na
heer:ofcourse , u r all right, yeh davaiya main lekh rahi hoon yeh le li jaga
prem:thanks doctor
heer: ur welcome
AFTER FEW MINUTES
prem:(knocked at the door)doctor main apna mobile yahan par bhool geya tha
doctor:yeh raha aap ka mobile
prem:aap,leken main to kisi aur doctor se mila tha
doctor:par yahan to sirf main he hoti hoon
prem:par.........
heer:are didi ab aa bhi jao na
prem:hai ,yehi to yahan par thi jinhon ne mera check up kiya tha
heer:are baap re
doctor:yeh to meri sister hai
heer:didi inko ghalti lagi hoge, bhala main kaise koi check up kar sakti hoon
prem:yeh sahi keh rahi hai, mujhe he ghalti lagi hai(heer ki tarf dekhte hua)
heer:(prem ki tarf dekhte hua)didi chalo na
NEXT DAY AT SHOP
heer:(sunglasses pehente hua)hai sonal ,kaise lag rahi hoon
sonal:WOW, bilkul malika arora ki tarha hot
heer:thanks for the compliment
sonal:ab bus bhi karna, pura adha ghenta hogeya hai tumhari tareef karte karte
IN LIFT
heer:thanks god usne didi se kuch kaha nahin, agar mil jaye to use thanks keh doon
sona:waise tumne davaiya to sahin lekhi the na
heer:are sonal kuch bhe nahin tha, bus yeh high class log zara sa kuch ho jaye to doctor ke paas a jate hai
prem:bilkul sahi keh rahi hai aap
heer:(shocked)aap
prem:waise app kahi se bhi doctor nahin lagti
heer:actually, i am really very sorry
prem:(muskarate hua)oh thats ok!
SHAADI PAR
heer:(wearing shining pink lehenga, and hair open)aa rahi hoon na baba
(get slipped)OOOOoooooooopps
prem:(pakarte ha)r u ok😛
heer:(prem ki tarf dikhte hua)
prem:(heer ki tarf dikhte hua)
sonal:are heer lagi to nahin
heer:(khamosh,prem ki tarf dekhi ja rahi hai)
sonal:heer, sun rahi ho na
heer:(suddenly)ha, main sahi hoon
prem:aap yahan
heer:meri dost ki shaadi hai
prem:u r looking beautiful
heer:thanks,woh....
sonal:ab chal bhi
prem:(heer ki tarf dekhte hua)
LIGHTS OFF
prem:(singing song)main hu chand aur tu hai chandani zara nazarein to mila
heer:( sharmate hua)😳😳
heer:(singing)HHhhhhmmm.........hhmmmmmmm....


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PrincessPatel77 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
nice sounds really intresting!!!!!!!!
update asap

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Posted: 16 years ago
#3
Hey
interesting
nice part 1
do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#4
thanks ppl will continue it tommorrow, and a very intresting scenes are on the way, but a very few readers, whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi dear *sorry dont know urs name*
its really nice start.continue soon.wait 4 the next update soon.
pm me when u update if u can.
luv
Fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AFTER TWO MONTHS
prem:(on phone)aunty heer se bat karni hai
aunty:bilkul nahin, aaj heer ki mehndi hai aur shaadi se pehle na to koi baat kar sakte ho aur na he mil sakte ho
prem:aunty main to apko buhat modern samajhta tha, ap kahan in purani rasmoon ko manane lage
aunty:sorry beta, abhi tumhe kuch din intezaar karna pare ga
sonal:kitni khoobsorat mehndi lagai hai
heer:prem ka phone aya
sonal:ha ha taqreebun teen baar to phone kar chuka hai leken tumhari mom ne eik baar bhi us par tars nahin khaya
heer:mom bhi na, mobile bhi leliya
sonal:pareshan mat ho, mera mobile to hai na
heer:oh yes!
sonal:yeh lo mobile, main dekhti hoon ka kahin aunty ka koi jasoos to yahan nahin phir raha
heer:(mobile par)hello!suna hai janab teen bar phone kar chuke hai par unke hone wali saas ne unhe apki hone wali patni se baat nahin karne de
prem:to aakhir yaad a hi gaye
heer:dulhe to apni dulhan se milne ke liye uske ghar ki dewaar bhi tap lete hai leken aap jaise sust dulhe bus mobile par number he dial karte rehte hai
prem:to aise baat hai, to dekho main adhe ghante main tumhare paas puhancta hoon
heer:really
prem:yeh(phone disconnect)
heer:hai sonal, tere jija ji deewar tapne wale hai
sonal:kya, yeh kya keh rahi hai tu
heer:(haste hua)apni shaadi ko yaadgar banane wali hoon
AFTER HALF HOUR
prem:(apne app se)are kya zaroorat pari thi tumhe yeh kehne ki ke tum deewar tap lo ge
heer:(window se)are sonal tere jija je deewar tap rehe hai
prem:shukur hai deewar ka eik hisa to paar hua,(girte hua)OOOooooooohhhhh
heer:oh my god
sonal:kya hua
heer:wohi jo kaha tha, gir geya hai
aunty:are damaad ji deewar tapne ki kya zaroorat thi,yeh ghar aphi ka to hai ,gate se a jate
prem:(tang par pati bundhe hua)woh aunty...
heer:mumy papa bula rahe hai
aunty:main aati hoon
heer:agar dewaar tapni nahin ati thi, to pehle batate na
prem:eik tarf tumhari mom jo ab mujhe keh rahi hai ke gate se a jana tha aur eik tarf tum jo mujhe dewaar tapne ka keh rahi thi
sonal:jija je zada chot to nahin aye na
prem:zaada nahin leken waise apki dost ne zada kasar nahin chori thi
heer:aap haldi doodh piye, jald sehetyaab ho jaye ge
prem:r u all right
aunty:beta bus kaam buht hai ghar main ,kuch chaiye ho to bata dena(jate hua)
prem:(huste hua)acha to HALDI DOODH kyun kaha ja raha tha
heer:BYE! ab kal mile ge(jate hua)
prem:are heer........
sonal:jija je zaada betabi achi nahin hoti, dekh liya na pehle kya hua
prem:of course, u r right

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Posted: 16 years ago
#8
where my fan fic readers hv gone?
Zeenish_Khan thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#9
thnk u😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#10
nice going..plzz continue.. i would luv to read more:)

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