Surprise Shot || Check Yes Juliet

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Well, Meera, I told you I would post it! (And surprisingly, Bhav did not say anything about her 'inclusion'. πŸ˜†) And here it is! I don't know why you people are all in tragic-y moods (Well, actually, so am I. My next shot will be tragic.) but this one isn't! It's far from it. And I had loads of fun writing it. So guess what?! You could hate it and I wouldn't care!

Okay, I would care. So if you hate it, tell me why!

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Check Yes Juliet,
Are You With Me?
Rain Is Falling Down On The Sidewalk,
I Won't Go Until You Come Outside.


Meera rushed into the station but stopped short as she saw the train begin to pull away. Her eyes widened as she realised she was missing her train. Getting a hold of herself quickly as she knew better than to just gape and gawk and moan at her situation rather than do something about it, she chased after the train.

She managed to grab hold of one of the bars at the doorway of the cabin, even as some of her friends hung out of the windows and called for her to pull herself onto the train. Thanking God that she had opted for sneakers rather than the flip-flops she had been eying, she continued to run along the train, not gathering the strength to pull herself onto it with only one hand. The other was not managing to get a good grip on the bar at the other side of the door.

A hand reached out in front of her, and she grasped at it quickly. It tightened around her own, and pulled her in. She stumbled slightly as she entered the cabin and fell against her saviour. She looked up in his dark eyes, and blushed slightly at their proximity. Both looked at one another silently for a few awkward seconds before bursting into laughter.

"Prem, agar tum nahin hotey, toh aaj train choot jati,"
Meera thanked her best friend.

"Come on Meera, mere hotey hue, tum kabhi piche reh sakti ho kya?"
he teased.

Still chuckling, he put an arm around her and pulled her into the cabin where the rest of their friends were waiting.


Check Yes Juliet,
Kill The Limbo.
I'll Keep Tossing Rocks At Your Window,
There's No Turning Back For Us Tonight.


"Shit!"
Sometime later, Nonee rushed into the cabin they had taken control over, interrupting the raucous music with her rather panicked cursing.

"What?"
Adi asked his sister, frowning at her as her dramatic entrance had caused Bhav to pull away from her half-asleep position on his chest.

"The conductor is on his way!"
There was much scrambling as those with tickets began ruffling through bags and purses, and among feathers (courtesy Preet and Shabz) for their slips of paper.

Meera screeched as she was pulled into the toilet. She was just about to scream when a hand covered her mouth and Prem leaned in and told her to shut up. Her eyes were wide as she gazed at him, wondering just where her more mild-mannered best friend had disappeared to. Prem rolled his eyes, knowing exactly what she was thinking.

"You don't have a ticket, and if you get caught, you can't go with us,"
he explained, as though to a small child as he let her go.

"And the others?"
Meera shot back, annoyed.

Prem raised an eyebrow. "They're better liars than you," he said drily.

Meera rolled her eyes. "And what do you plan to do then, Prem? You do realise the conductor will check in here," she crossed her arms across her chest.

Prem smirked, taking out something with a flourish even as the conductor rapped on the door and his annoyed voice filtered through. Meera watched in astonishment as Prem opened the door slightly, and his annoyed voice reached her ears. She did not need to look at him to know that there was a scowl on his handsome face as he reproached the conductor for his interruption of 'business'. She turned slightly pink when Prem pulled back into the toilet, smirking at her again, and she realised just how small the toilet was.


Lace Up Your Shoes,
(Ay Oh, Ay Oh)
Here's How We Do.


Preet and Manav exchanged mischievous grins, even as Mayank frowned in disapproval at their juvenile behaviour. Both knew that he was not really against their plan, it was obvious from the slight twitch of his lips that he was fighting back his smile. In unison, they reached out with feathers in their hands and brushed them lightly against the two slumbering girls in front of them. Nonee and Shabz awoke with shrieks, colliding with one another and falling in a heap onto the ground. Preet and Manav collapsed into giggles (there was no other word for it), holding one another up. The girls glared at them, and then at Mayank, who had emitted a chuckle as well. He hastily covered his face with his book as Maddy adjusted herself against his shoulder, still fast asleep. Bhav and Adi looked up from where they were sitting together, before smiling indulgently and settling back into their discussion of the works of Poe (something that had had Radz rolling her eyes, burying her nose back into her worn copy of The Lion, The Witch And The Wardrobe).

Prem lifted his head off Meera's lap, blearily taking in the scene, Nonee and Shabz having started an argument with Preet and Manav (again). They were flinging feathers at one another, and a pillow landed on Radz. Briefly, Prem wondered where that pillow had come from before deciding that it did not matter, and settling back into Meera's lap. She continued to comb her fingers through his hair. He did not have to look at her to know that she was grinning at their friends, especially now that Radz had been disturbed. The four troublemakers were going to get it from the hot-headed girl, and the only one of them capable of calming her was the one they had all taken this trip for. He felt rather than saw Meera sigh, before pulling out her phone and dialling Ravjot's number.

He peeked through slitted eyes as the phone reached Radz and Ravz berated her friend over it. He shifted, and Meera hit him on the head.

"Stop fidgeting, you idiot,"
she hissed. "It hurts. You're not all that light you know."

"At least I'm not a moti like some people,"
he teased, before he heard her outraged gasp and felt himself get pushed off her lap and onto the floor of the cabin. He grunted once in pain, before settling himself on the floor, putting his head on someone's bag.


Run, Baby, Run,
Don't Ever Look Back.
They'll Tear Us Apart,
If You Give Them The Chance.
Don't Sell Your Heart.
Don't Say We're Not Meant To Be.
Run, Baby, Run.
Forever Will Be,
You And Me.


"Prem,"
Meera began, unnervingly calm. "Did we just miss our stop?"

Prem looked down at her, and then out the door as the train pulled away from the station. They could see their friends waving at them frantically, and could hear their shouts for them to get off the train.

"Meera, take my hand," Prem instructed.

"What?"
Meera looked at him in shock.

"Trust me,"
he coaxed. Meera had never been able to say no to those imploring brown eyes and so she slipped her hand into his. He gripped it tight, and then he told her to jump. With a shriek, she did, and they landed (luckily) on soft grass. Tumbling down a short slope, they stopped just short of the tracks as the train picked up speed turned out of sight. Breathlessly, Meera laughed.

She lay her head on his chest, hearing his heart race as she was sure her own was. Their friends rushed towards them, calling their names frantically. They were both laughing helplessly by then, tears pouring down their cheeks due to the adrenaline and the hilarity of the situation.

Sitting up, Prem helped his friend up as well. Maddy engulfed the two in a tight hug before taking a step back and hitting both. She glared at them then picked up the bag she had dropped.

"Ab chale?"
she snapped.


Check Yes Juliet,
I'll Be Waiting.
Wishing, Wanting,
Yours For The Taking.
Just Sneak Out,
And Don't Tell A Soul Goodbye.


They had hitched a ride on a tractor, much to the amusement of the city folk (which, granted, all were, but sometimes some of them acted – well, not very refined would be the polite way to put it). Radz had a hard time getting onto the tractor, and Preet was too busy laughing at her to help her up. Adi was helping Bhav, and no one was paying her much attention. She pouted, brightening when Meera held out her hand. She hoisted herself up with Meera's help and both went flailing backwards. While Radz fell onto the driver (a man who introduced himself as Rajveer; Radz blushed when she recognised him as Yug's elder brother), Meera braced herself for impact but instead felt Prem catch her.

The rest of the group 'ooh'ed as Prem smirked down at the blushing girl in his arms.

"Prem, let go,"
Meera ordered, embarrassed at the situation. Prem shrugged and did as she asked. She fell on her behind. The group laughed and she glared at Prem. "You just wait," she muttered darkly.

"I will be, sweetheart,"
he teased.


Check Yes Juliet,
Here's The Countdown.
3, 2, 1, Now Fall In My Arms Now.
They Can Change The Locks,
Don't Let Them Change Your Mind.


There were loud squeals of delight as they reached Yug's place and found Ravz waiting outside for them. The girls grabbed each other into one big group hug. The guys rolled their eyes, sticking to handshakes and 'man-hugs'. Ravz led her friends into the house, chattering excitedly about her upcoming nuptials. Meera tossed a look over her shoulder, dropping her bag as she did so.

"Get that for me would you Prem?"
she called, smirking at him as she did so.

He sighed, glaring at her, but still running forward to pick up Meera's bag. The rest of the guys snickered, whispering about how Prem was whipped to one another. His annoyed yell for them to pick up their pace only furthered their amusement.


Lace Up Your Shoes,
(Ay Oh, Ay Oh)
Here's How We Do.


Meera made her way down the stairs, letting her hand trail the banister, soaking in the results of a weekend's worth of hard work in the details of the decorations. Her hair fell in waves down her back, her deep purple anarkali-churidaar flattering her frame. She did not notice the eyes that had not left her form since she had reached the top of her stairs, but she did notice the snag in the carpet when her heel got caught and she almost went tumbling down. It was only Prem's quick reflexes that saved her from supreme embarrassment.

She grinned wryly at him from her (rather comfortable) position. "You always seem to be saving me."

"Maybe you're finally falling for me,"
he flirted. She turned pink and looked away, not being able to meet his eyes.

"Could you,"
she took her hands off him. "let me up?"

Prem (who had just realised what he had said) nodded quickly and moved to help her on her feet. The air between the two was charged with awareness, and both were hasty in their escape to separate corners of the room.


Run, Baby, Run,
Don't Ever Look Back.
They'll Tear Us Apart,
If You Give Them The Chance.
Don't Sell Your Heart.
Don't Say We're Not Meant To Be.
Run, Baby, Run.
Forever Will Be,
You And Me.


Prem kept searching for the familiar figure in purple throughout the party. He had admired the way she had looked when she had walked down the steps, but had not been able to compliment her (or at least, that is what he told himself about why he was so eager to spot her).

Through the throngs of people, he saw a flicker of purple. He paused. Now that he knew where she was, what was he going to say?

"Oh crap,"
he muttered to himself, running a hand through his hair.

"Prem, kya kar rahey ho tum?"
Meera's exasperated voice shocked him. She reached out and pulled his hand away from his hair. "You barely manage to bring yourself to look presentable, and here you are, messing up your hair," she shook her head.

Prem looked at her, stunned. Her perfume wafted up, teasing his senses. He gulped. She looked at him in concern. "Prem?"

"Huh?"
He jerked away from her touch. She looked hurt, but covered it instantly. "Woh, main-" He closed his eyes briefly. Her hurt vanished, but she was still hesitant when she touched his shoulder.

"Are you okay?"


He smiled at her wearily. "Don't worry so much, Meera," he told her. "You'll get wrinkles."

She made a face at him, before ordering him to get her a drink for the comment. Laughing, he made obeyed her commands with a slight bow.


We're Flying Through The Night.
We're Flying Through The Night,
Way Up High,
The View Up Here Is Getting Better With
You By My Side.


Prem wrapped his hand around Meera's waist, drawing her close to him. He no longer worried about what to say, or how to act. She was in his arms, and he had reached a conclusion. Meera was not his best friend. There was no way she could be. Not with how he felt about her. She was so much more than that.

Meera's grip on Prem's shoulder tightened as she took another step closer towards him, this time without his guidance. She did not look at him, but Prem knew that she was worrying her bottom lip, and there would be a faint tinge of pink on her cheeks. Her pink lips would be holding a faint smile, just like she knew that he was gazing down at her with that intense look in his dark eyes, the smouldering one that he had begun to direct at her for many weeks now. His gaze would not waver from her, not until she looked up. So she did.

And he did not look away. This time, she got caught in that gaze. It was impossible for her to look away. She found that she did not really want to as they swayed to the music.


Run, Baby, Run,
Don't Ever Look Back.
They'll Tear Us Apart,
If You Give Them The Chance.
Don't Sell Your Heart.
Don't Say We're Not Meant To Be.
Run, Baby, Run.
Forever Will Be,
You And Me.


"Try not to miss the train this time Meera,"
Shabz told her friend.

"Shut up," she shot back. "And go flirt with Preet."

Shabz shrugged and flounced off. Meera rolled her eyes. Prem chuckled behind her, and she jumped slightly, not expecting him to sneak up on her.

"She's right you know,"
he told her. "If you're not careful, you might miss the train."

"Then I'll come back with Radz,"
she informed him. "Whenever she does decide to come back," she muttered quietly, seeking out her friend. Not surprisingly, she was talking to Rajveer, who she had befriended easily. Meera knew that on Radz' side, the feelings were more than those of just friends, but neither girl would say anything, because neither knew if Raj felt the same. Radz was hesitant in the whole 'love-shove thing' as she had once put it.

Prem pouted. "But then I'd miss you so," he declared dramtically.

She giggled, hitting him lightly on the chest. "Leave the dramabazi to your brother and the other nautankis."

"Fine,"
Prem sighed. He grinned at the beauty by his side. "Shall we, my lady?" He held out his hand to her.

Meera knew that placing her hand in his would cause a shift in their relation, one that had been coming for a long time. It was with a glow in her face that she took his hand. "We shall."

Tucking her hand under his elbow in a gentlemanly manner, sending her into peals of laughter, the two walked towards their transport, and the rest of their lives.


Run, Baby, Run,
Don't Ever Look Back.
They'll Tear Us Apart,
If You Give Them The Chance.
Don't Sell Your Heart.
Don't Say We're Not Meant To Be.
Run, Baby, Run.
Forever Will Be,
You And Me.
You And Me.
You And Me.

-||-

Don't forget to comment or press the 'like' button. Or whatever. πŸ˜†

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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after watching new york...this was just what I needed! *hugs Radz* I'll comment sometime tom! 😳 But you've gotta know...I LOVED IT! πŸ˜ƒ Trains...*sighs*

*edited*

Firstly I'm still 😲 that you posted it...but yay for Bhav, *hopefully* not having any issues with her 'inclusion' πŸ˜† but I loved LOVED how happy it was! 😳

Why are you all tragicy now? πŸ˜” I finally got over it...specially cus of your one shot, and now you're gonna be all tragicy! πŸ˜”

DDLJ!!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³ I love you Radz! 😳 It was SO much better than when it actually happened...😊 But seriously ultimately perfect....who wants more when (like you did in the other shot) Prem doing srk-y things for me! 😳

Oh Rinkz...in answer to your question, since in Spanish Eyes, Prem is your bro....than bhabhi works! πŸ˜‰ And besides makes me feel all 😳

Okay so now I've gtg...but I'll add more when I get back! 😊

*edited again*

I'm back...missed me? *preens* Okay so onto Proper comments now! 😳

I love the fact that we took over the cabin! 😳 Could you imagine what it'd be like if we all ever met? 😲 I was thinking of that last night while I was reading this! 😳 Because Bhav has refused to comment on her inclusion...I will! 😳 I love that she was sleeping against Adi! 😳 How adorable is that? πŸ˜›

We snuck on without a ticket? 😲 Bad ppl we are! πŸ˜† Although it did make it a bit more fun for Prem and me! πŸ˜† The entire thing in the toliet was adorable...the retorts were so me, although I'd probably not talk as much when Prem's there, but in this you've nicely left it as friends...so far! 😳

Preet and Manav!! πŸ˜ƒ *giggles* They're so adorable, and then Mayank--πŸ˜† Good little boy, and I love how the pairs have been semi switched around here! 😳 I for sure thought you'd bring in Vikram Aditya for yourself, but Rajveer works too! πŸ˜› since he's Yug's bro...oops getting ahead of myself! πŸ˜† 😳

The way you've described the friendship angle in this whole thing is just so adorable that Ravs is the only one to calm you down, and the way we're all so comfortable with each other, and his head was in my lap??😳 and...I was combing through his amazing hair? *sighs* Not a good thing to read this in the morning!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I love how he shifted and I got maaaad! πŸ˜†πŸ˜›

I like them jumping off the train, it was so cute! πŸ˜† I loved how you described the whole bit of tumbling down the little hill πŸ˜†πŸ˜† And yay for Maddy being over protective!😳

Stupid boys...except Adi, who nicely helped Bhav onto the tractor!😳 The rest of those boys...*narrows eyes* But teehee...it made you bump into Rajveer! 😳 All cutely! πŸ˜› I don't even wanna imagine the blushing it would be to get caught in Prem's arms...and then *glares* he literally dropped me? 😲 How rude! πŸ˜› 😳 I love the subtle teasing and flirting, sho cute! πŸ˜ƒ

Awwww group hug! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ€— (If you haven't noticed yet..I'm SUPER hyper this morning! πŸ˜› No clue why though...πŸ˜•) 🀣🀣🀣 I loved that bit about the bag! πŸ˜† And awww he's not whipped! 😳 He's adorable like that! πŸ˜›]

Ohhhh a deep purple anarkali? *sighs* How pretty! 😳 And yes...clumsy little me! πŸ˜› I do love how he's always the one to save me though! 😊 Makes me happy, and I love what he said, even if he found it weird after! πŸ˜† This had me in splits for some reason, "You barely manage to bring yourself to look presentable, and here you are, messing up your hair," Probably cus he always manages to look presentable!😳 But his hair...*sighs* So thick and soft...I loved how you showed him so...(I can't think of the right word) but you know what I mean when she came up to him at that point--it seemed so natural, that he was confused in a way...of not ruining their friendship..😳

And because I don't want to sound MORE like an idiot, I won't comment on the last paragraph with the adorable dancing! 😳 It seemed like such a natural progression in their relationship though really beautiful! πŸ‘

RADZIE! πŸ˜ƒ Don't worry I'm not mad at you for writing it now! πŸ˜› Specailly since you included EVERYONE! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³ MAde it all the more special! 😳 Thanks! 😳

Love you,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mine! Gotta comment on this one! I promise to make time tomorrow! =D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Im here! Lemme go read and comment. 😎
*Edited*
Firstly, i love this song! *squeals* i always start dancing when its playing. πŸ˜†
Now onto the story...ooh lala, its Meera! *cheers*
Okie, i love it...its so cute, Meera nd my bhai jaan Prem wait...thats Harshad, never mind then. Oy, Meera! Does it count when Harshu's Prem that ur my bhabhi? Or is it just spcl for Harshu? πŸ€”
Ahem anyway, they're soooo cute!! *pinches cheeks* adorable, luv em!
And everyone else...hehe, made me laugh! =]
Radz, reading the series! πŸ˜† That made me laugh since we were jst talkn abt it in the PM and all.
Aww...Manav and Preet [squee] are so naughty, love em! πŸ€—
And Radz with Ranveer! I rlly thought you'd be with either Adi or Mayank. πŸ€”
Basically this whole shot made me smile and go "aww, cute" πŸ˜†
Luv ya
- Rinkz
Edited by ~Rinki~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great , a fun-filled light shot something required after a series of being basket since friday and this comes as a refreshing releif.I really enjoyed myself reading it.
Thank you so much.

Luv atop
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Posted: 16 years ago
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a really cute and sweet shot and really refreshing from the sadness and crap that we're watching on the show right now
it was lovely, keep it up and do write more!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yeah, so not gonna comment on my...inclusion...I smsed you. And if you say a word about it, you're dead. Remember, I'm baking at your place next week. And you don't know what's gonna be in the cupcakes I'll be bringing. *evil smile*
The shot in itself, though, was just super cute. So glad you wrote it, and Meera (I actually typed 'Meher' there...-_-) is probably gonna be super thrilled. πŸ˜†
Love,
Bhav (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I was super thrilled you're right Bhav, but what's with this whole Meher/ Meera thing going on? πŸ˜› I got one of my other friends to help me pick some scenes for one of my vm's and she's like you're kinda like Meher.. and I was like...πŸ˜• Right...😊 And then Shabzie...who thinks the Meher in my ff is kinda like me...πŸ˜›πŸ˜† I wanna understand why! πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
#9
YOU PUT IT UP! *dances*

I know this shot was for Meera, but my personal fave part had to be the NEW couple! Adi and Bhav! ☺️ Nonee man, hurry back from Venice, and greet your sister-in-law. *ducks and hides from BD*

Sometimes I like Meera/Prem better then Heer/Prem. πŸ˜† This part was so cute, and like you read a couple posts above, Meera is going to FREAK over the ddlj addition! Loved the adding of all the seperate people and dude feathers? Random! πŸ˜†

*sigh* This was so cute, a lil masti filled but at the same time, had this calming feeling along with it! Loved it Radziedi! :)

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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You wanna kill me right Shabo? by saying that? *faints*

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