V.V.IMP!!..Your suggestions for the story! - Page 13

Originally posted by: jyothi25

triv darling sweetheart baby sweety cutiepie my angel...............please tell that destructives to show atleast very romantic honeymoon scenes before that horrible track dear pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...............so that we have something to droll please................ u will tell na?..........

Ok so I am writing this story keeping in mind that all the other characters are not available to BT as of now like Ashlesha, Rishabh and Sanjana'..

If they show that the doctor lie or somehow Veera convinces the j-zoo that Nihaal is responsible for everything (may be bribing doctor to lie). So Veera says that both Heer and Nihaal have bribed the doctor to lie, Nihaal tries to justify himself but in vain. But thinking that how precarious the situation is he takes the blame on himself and says that Heer had nothing to do with it. He says that when she was listening to the conversation then he Nihaal was doing naatak and not Veera. That is why Heer was taking his side but he cannot let Heer go against her love and family just to fulfill his wish to get rid of Veera. Heer is shocked to hear this but she knows that Nihaal has done this so as to save her and Prem's and Preet and Meher's relationship. Although she goes with the Juneja's to the Juneja mansion but she vows to prove Nihaal innocent.

At home Heer confronts Meher about what she heard when Nihaal and Veera were conversating. Prem overhears them and thinks to himself that Heer would never feed such lie to Meher atleast and he was also not ready to believe that of all people Nihaal can do such a thing because one thing was for sure that Nihaal loved Veera dearly but being a brother he can't ignore the bruises that Veera wore.

Later in the evening everyone was in the hall. Prem in fornt of the whole family asks heer for forgiveness says he shouldn't have shouted at her without knowing the whole truth. Heer was surprised by this gesture of his but little did she know that he just wasnted to see veera react to that. Veera and Gayatri both were annoyed but rest of the family bore a smile on their faces. Gayatri was like "tu kyun maafi mang raha hai kya uska farz nahi banta tha ki wo saari sacchai pata lagake phir Veera se baat karti"an then veera starts throwing her tantrums "Bhaaiyaa aap aisa kaise kar sakte ho Heer bhabhi ki galti hone par bhi app unka saath kaise de sakte ho, Nihaal inka bhai hai"' " haan hai bhai to', Veera Nihaal Heer ka bhai hai Heer khud Nihaal nahi hai tu kya chahti hai ki hum Nihaal ki galti ki saza Heer aur Meher ko den". "Agar aisa hai to iski saza mujhe bhi milni chahiye". Then gaurav's faking and drama cums out in front of the family. Everyone sides Prem and everyone respect Heer more now , except Veera. Later Veera fills Gayatri's ear in her own way against Prem .

Prem 'Heer : Heer knows that it wasn't Prem downstairs because he is never very vocal about all these things. She questions him, he tells her that he loves her immensely so he can't bear if someone raises a finger on her but this time the situation is different, he has his own sister on the other end. Heer could very well sense his inner turmoil. Prem also confronts her regarding her conversation with Meher and shows his annoyance that she could have told him too, he might not have believed her fully but alteast would have tried to find out the truth. (emotional scene)

Vikas hurts himself'.. they go to the hospital'.. Kuldi overhears Maya talking to the doctor who aborted giving her money. Corners Prem in the hospital tells her everything says she will go tell ma. Prem says no you will stay out of this I don't want your insult again. Prem goes to Maya to talk to her regarding this warns her and advices her. He also goes to Veera tells her that she better go back to Nihaal and asks him for forgiveness and start a new family otherwise this will be the end of her relation with this house. Veera has no option left. Though before going she talks to Maya who has another plan but it will b executed later. She told j-zoo that she is going back bcuz she loves Nihaal and she had been treating him very badly (like a servent) that's why all this happened. Prem confronts Heer about all this "Heer main kaise apni behen ko wo zillat de deta'.. ye baat sirf mere, tumhaare aur kuldi ke beech rahegi". Heer supports him and is glad that her brother's marriage is saved.

Preet comes up with the idea of Prem Heer marriage all over again and then honeymoon. Meher-Preet's relationship develops in the process. Harman was tolerating Maya only cuz Prem didn't want her to leave (Harman had overheard Prem and Maya's convo) so as to save juneja ki izzat. Prem and Heer go to honeymoon and Veera and Maya again start talking crap about Nihaal and Heer and Meher. Veera convinces her about saga sautela disparity. When Heer and Prem come back there is another big drama created, Gayatri ma against Prem and Heer for ruining Veera's life yet again but Prem standing there mum, Heer too wasn't saying anything and Harman was on a business trip. Maya and Veera revering in the fact that now they have hit bulls eyes only to find themselves fall falt on the faces when Gayatri bashes them both specially Veera for aborting her child and blaming everything on Nihaal. Says she knew everything ever since Kulraj found out about Veera but didn't say anything thinking sum1 will do that but unfortunately Veera has too many good souls around her. Says Gayatri Juneja has never stood for wrong and she never will and no manthara can turn her into kaykeyi !!!!

After this they incorporate other tracks that has been mentioned by people in here...... I wrote it a bit elaborately in the beginning so that they dutn have to think a lot to set up the scenes initially. Other than this its upto them what to show......... But this will redeem both Prem's character and Gayatri maa's character and that's what we as audience want'.

Note : please shoe more of Prem-Heer and Preet-Meher scenes this would help to stretch the track for a longer period of time and also will be appreciated by the audience.

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MORE PREM AND HEER SCENES PLEASEEEEE!

I tried to write a story….. n this is all I can think…. Not much of a story writer I am but this is all I managed….. btw I shoved in some typical BT stuff as well…..hahaha…. Here it goes…I'm writing from where the epi ended today.....

Prem unable to choose btw his mom n wife!!!

Meanwhile Heer is dropped home by nihaal…. But is stopped entering zoo by gaya3.

Heer tries to tell her truth… gaya3 fumes that Heer is again accusing Veera…n that she has no place here!!!

Heer wants to meet prem…. But is refused the chance…. N every1 leaves.. maya tells heer that prem sided wid his mom….n does'nt want to see her face either!!!

Nihaal takes heer from there but heer refuses to believe maya!!!

Meher is told the truth…. She gets angry at prem n goes to him n tells him he is mean… prem is unaware of all this….. n is shocked dat heer is made to leave home like this!!!

He decides to meet heer…. Maya unaware of all this tells prem that Heer created hungama downstairs n said she'd side wid her bro and insulted every1 n said she does'nt care abt him either!!!
prem gets suspicious…. N confronts meher abt this…. But meher tells maya is lying…. Preet to listens to this…n prem decides to get to the bottom of the business…. N goes to da doc again!!! Who tells him the truth!!!

He is shattered at wat his sis did …… he meets Heer n tells her he knows da truth n both go to doc…. Tells her truth n she also tells them wat lie maya fed her they ask her to come wid them …. And both of them wid nihaal goes to zoo to tell da truth!!!

MaRa play a game again and makes gaya3 believe premeer bribed da doctor!

She buys it n asks prem to leave the house acussing him of showing he is not her son indeed!!! Meet defends premeer n she accuses prem to turn her own son(preet) against her!!! Prem makes Meet live in zoo…. N tells him to take care of family… n tells gaya3no matter wat she thinks he loves her n is always there for her n she is his mom n leaves zoo!!!

Nihaal asks premeer to stay wid him but prem refuses n they get a small house for themselves n starts life there!!!

Prem tries to get a job for himself…. But maya who is not done with them make prem loose his job or does'nt let him get any work! Heer gives him all da emotional support!!!

Meet come to know of wat maya is doing against premeer…. They warn heer abt this who in turn conveys prem wat maya is doing!!!

Irked by all this meet decides to teach maya a lesson…. Also maya does everything to make gaya3 hate meher!! Only lallu n preet support her…. As maya tries to break meet's relation too…. But meet knowing about her …fake as if they r drifiting apart…. But in actual are together and make life difficult for maya in zoo in their own mischievous ways!!!

MaRa starts showing their colours slowly… partying n disrespect towards lallu n gaya3 etc etc… harman is taking care of their business which starts falling slowly!!!

Preet cares two hoots about the business but prem makes him help Harman… so he does… n their going is just fine!!!

Premeer struggling for living bcoz of maya but draws strength from eachother…. Sumhow prem starts a business of his own… be is thru money he earned as gaurav or whatever da way he just starts one!!!

Maya tries every trick in book to make his downfall…. But premeer aware of her evil intensions now foil her plans n their living improves!!!

Maya gets jelous of them…. Shows gaya3 how they have moved ahead n does'nt care abt zoo!!! Zoo and premeer keep bumping into eachother…. Like they did earlier in Business man of the year etc… premeer getting emotional though gaya3 too gets she hides it and shows she hates them!!!

Meanwhile meet starts to show gaya3 wat maya is…. N also veera is reduced to sidekick… she starts suspecting maya of her actual intensions but is helpless to do nything…. Maya gives all da right kicks to her ego…. N veera starts regretting little n misses premeer n nihaal slowly who always loved n respected her!!!

Meanwhile heer gets pregnant n gaya3 who comes to know of this feels immensely happy… wondering y she is feeling so much for a sutela beta… she realizes she misses premeer… n meet makes her realize it more n more…. Maya gets a hang of wat meet are doing by making gaya3 realise abt premeer as well as her!!!

She starts troubling them thru Harman…. Making brothers go against eachother…. Preet leves the business though stays in the house coz of premeer's insistance…. Gaya3 sees how her own children r fighting against eachother n realizes how prem would treated this situation n would've made everything alright for the family!!!

Sh realizes their importance but still builds a wall against them thinking in da past they spoke against veera as she is his sauteli behen!!!

Prem comes to know of wat maya is doing btw his bro's but makes preet stay wid zoo…. N decides it's time for him act sumhow to make things alright!!!

Wid house under maya's control now she is horrible wid every1…. N makes Harman against his parents bro n sister... as preet too left da business the business goes down da drain n prem who in da meanwhile flourished takes over thae company as well as zoo!!!

He along wid Heer come to stay in zoo n also let's all da present zoo immates stay in da zoo as well… they all living in same house but not together!!!

Premeer n meet start making drink her own bitter concotions n starts teaching her lessons… n lots of family and emotional moments wi gaya3 n lallu n all…. Wid gaya3 almost giving in but still keeping da wall!!

Maya is flustered…. All her plots to make gaya3 n harman against premeer n the rest starts failing very badly… also premeer starts giving lallu gaya3 their position and respect back!!!

Maya atlast tries some really big thing against premeer… ummm… say making heer loose her baby…. This is da last straw for prem as all hell breaks loose n he blasts maya… veera who is already in some regret comes to know of wat maya did… n sides wid premeer n tells gaya3 wat all maya did n also confesses her mistake!!!

Gaya3 breaks up!!! But premeer being premeer forgives makes da family whole again!!!

Harman too realizes… n as for maya…. Either she is kicked out…. Or given a chance!!!

But being maya she fumes at them still…. N gets RR outta lock up….

Both of them plan more stuff against zoo…. Makes one of zoo immates like Harman,preet or kiran or veera get accused for some crime… say a fake murder or a business locha lmao… nyways…. So again premeer start fighting to save their family members…. Also nihaal help premeer a lot in all this making veera realize n premeer n meet plans all sort of stuff to get them together!!!

N mayb sanjana can b used next… like prem is let to know sanjana is in coma… n make him feel miserable as he considers it's bcoz of him… he becums all gloomy n losses concentration on his business n all… but heer helps him thru it…. N mayb he'd make sanajan conscious again… but RR n maya will feed sanjana stories against premeer n she tries to trouble them both only later realizing her mistake n goes away!!!

All in all premeer should remain rock solid n together in all this… I don't want premeer kids… but I know u guys will get heer pregnant so I made her loose her baby… bcoz in all this u guys defo will want some loss n tragedy for premeer… so better make her loose baby!!…. So after all these plots n much more think of premeer kids… spare them as of now!!!

OMG I typed soooo much… god I hope it makes sense!!! LOL it's my first time…hehe…