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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys,
tell me if you like this..
For monday I want it to be like this,
So, prem comes at the end of Gurubani and both of them have a crying session....and he tells her the truth....Then both of them leave and its morning.....In the morning when prem wakes up, he doesn't find Heer next to him so, he goes searching for her all over the place....When he comes across Heer, she escapes by making some excuse.....
Heer is all in buggin prem mood so, everytime he tries to come close to her, she finds an excuse to go away from him or someone calls her.....
then prem gets hold of her and say mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...
she is like prem aabhi nahin mujhe bahot kaam hai....
prem: nahi aabhi
Heer: aacha kaho...
Prem: akele mein
Heer: haan ma, prem ma bula rahi hai.....bad mein baat karen
Prem all desperate and frustrated says:
dekhloonga tumhe....kabhi na khabi to kamre mein tum aaogi na....
Heer hears this and smirks.....
Heer is upstairs preparing for a party or pooja or something.....she is walking upstairs in the corridor, just
then prem notices her passing by the room....he drags her in the room, and locks the door......
Heer looking all shy, tries to escape but prem blocks her in his usual style.....
she says: prem yeh kya kar rahe ho, mujhe bahot kam hai....
he starts walking towards her,,,,
then she walks backwards and him towards her.....She goes prem...prem....
he corners her to the wall, while she looks down and he stares at her passionately...
prem touches her face and she is like prem .. koi aa jayega.....
Prem: shhhhhhhh......
Heer all nervous.....looking down and prem carresing her hair.....
prem: tum kya keh rahi thi?
Heer: kya???? mujhe kam....
before heer can finish the sentence, prem puts his finger on her lips
prem: woh nahin......
Heer: tohhhhh....kya?
Heer tries to escape, and he grabs her hand in usual style.....Brings her close to him forcefully and tries to kiss her...... but she escapes, runs out and hides.....while prem follows her....and gives her koi bat nahin, dekhloonga look

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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
aww...itz soo cute😳
i hope we get a lot of these type of scenes next week and in da future😉
cant wait till monday
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Posted: 16 years ago
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let us see what the creatives have in their minds because that is what we get to see
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Posted: 16 years ago
#4
Very Good Fan Fiction Lol , Hope Something Similar Like That Happens.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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seriously sometimes i think people from this forum sud b the creatives...LOL...nice one...😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank you friends, me want to see something similar tooo...I wish it was like, they read the india-forums and chose the best fan fiction and portray that contest....that would be such a reward for all the fans....what say?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#7
oh wow...this would be the perfect scene for Monday ☺️....
280866 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#8
Aw, that would be SO cutee :D great little FF.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh i really wish ur predictiion comes true... it will be so romantic..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was a nice fiction.......good👍🏼

Thanks for sharing 😉

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