|Radz'Ramblings|| 50th shot. [page 18] - Page 4

Originally posted by: shabo24

I really wish Veera didn't die. *sighs* Just when she turned good. Creatives bhi na.... You actually liked Veera? You? Will wonders never cease. 😆

Loved this shot! Specially how you described the sister's knowing Nihaal's feeling for Veera. And then slowly, the transitions you described happening in their relationship was awesome! :) Thank you! I'm glad (and a little surprised) that you did. But I shall take it happily, that you read a VeeraNihaal shot and commented! 😆

The song ROCKS! *thumbs up* Oh, I love the song too. It's brilliant. 😃

--shabz

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😳

*edited*

I've already told you how much I've loved this Radz...just the simplicity in Veera finally realizing her and Nihaal's relationship in the true light was what made it even more beautiful! 😊 Thank you! And thank you for all the help! *hug* 😃

The song itself is awesome! 😃Tell me about it! I've been obsessing over it for the longest time. 😆

Can't wait for more! 😳 I have another outtake all planned, for sometime soon I think. 😉

Meera😳

Originally posted by: noneeM

Yay! My Spot!

Love:-Nonee

I'm back. So, I'm kinda doing this in reverse. I'm reading the outtake first. But the great thing is that I have a treat waiting for me. In the form of DTHM. Cool! I do hope you enjoy that too. 😉

So, back to the outtake...

I never ever thought that I would feel the things I am feeling right now, after reading a Veera one shot. But then, the credit goes to the author as usual! But you know what A! this is exactly the way they ought to have handled Veera's character, they should have shown her redemption, instead of showing us a glimpse of what could have been and just senselessly, as she was on the verge of redemption, killed her off. I know! God, they could have written such a wonderful story with Veera trying to redeem herself, after admitting to her family what she had done. It would have highlighted some cracks in PremHeer's relationship, and allowed them to mend, it would have allowed Veera and Nihaal happiness, because Nihaal would be on her side, and it would have allowed Gayatri to see the error of her ways. And we could have seen the realistc story of a family moving on from such a situation and growing stronger for it. But instead, they kill Veera, and throw Nihaal in jail. *shakes head* Somebody should write a story. 😆

Brilliant writing as usual, A! I really really liked the way you've shown Veera taking the journey of love with Nihaal. It touched my heart to read of a vulnerable Veera, a Veera scared of rejection. I could relate to the character, which is seriously A, just because of the wonderful way you have potrayed the character. Wonderful. I loved it. Thanks. I'm glad! And maybe, you will like the Veera bits in DTHM then. 😉

And my favourite line in this one is ..."He knew every little thing about her, as she did about him, and he cared about the small things."

Big hug A 🤗 Back at you! *hugs*
Love:-Nonee