FF When love finds a way PREM RETURNs UpDt..Pg44.. - Page 23

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Posted: 16 years ago
Alright everyone..................here's the next long part............Hope u enjoy this one too.....................😊

Prem is confused……………he frees himself from her saying-- Yeh kya kar rahi hain aap?..................Please…………..don't do this………….aap………..aap galat samajh rahi hain…………..main aapka nahiin……………..(Prem says showing his engagement ring)……………kisi aur kaa Prem hoon………….aap…………aapko kuch galat fehmi ho gayi hai………………….😳

Heer looks in utter shock and disbelief at Prem…………….wondering why he was behaving like that…………….and the ring…………..Prem was engaged?!...............Heer was taken aback……………her heart seemd to have been shredded to pieces…………….Prem was engaged?!.................lekin……….lekin………….aissa kaise ho sakta hai…………Heer thought to herself……………….while Prem turns around to leave from there…………….😔

Heer goes after him………….she stops him saying-- Nahiin Prem………….main………..main abb tumhe nahiin jaane doongi…………..bahot………..bahot mushkil se tum aaye ho……………aise………….aise kaise jaa saktey ho……………mujhe………….mujhe tumhaari zaroorat hai(she says holding his hand)………………..Matt jao……………plz iss tarah se mujhe ek baar phir tanhaa kar ke matt jao……………..🥺

Prem sets himself free……………finding himself terribly uneasy…………….uncomfortable……………he psuhes away Heer……………..and walks away…………………not looking back…………….even for once…………..🥺

Heer runs after him…………….her foot slips………….she falls down…………..her head hits a stone…………….and she falls unconcious calling out-- Premmmmmmmm!😭

Prem stops mid way and turning around…………..sees heer lying unconscious on the ground……………..

He says-- Damn!.............Yehi hona reh gaya tha!................

He walks upto her……………in the background begins to play the song theme of hum hain iss pal yahaan……………….😊

Prem walks upto her………….makes her turn around…………..shocked to see her head was hurt………….it was bleeding…………from the place where married women put vermillion on their forehead!...................(Samajh gaye naa guys…………..kya indication hai?)………………❤️😳

He touches her forehead………….trying to stop the blood…………..in the process………..it messes up even more…………..reason?................well………….he was rubbing the blood flowing from his hand on her forehead instead!.................😳

Prem looks at his bleeding hand and says-- Oh no!.............(he makes a painful face………….as even his hand was hurting)………………😕

He picks up Heer in her arms……………and walks towards the Juneja mansion…………………😳

Inside…………..there's no light……………Prem curses saying-- arre yaar…………aaj pata nahiin kiskii shakal dekhke utha hoon……………haan………….uss stupid hotel ke waiter kii…………..idiot!..............😆

He walks upstairs…………..slowly……….making sure he did not tumble over anything…………..

He reaches the room upstairs……………putting Heer on the bed………….he walks upto the dressing table of the room…………..opens the drawer………….takes out a candle…………..lights it up……………….and walks upto the next drawaer……………….opening which he takes out a first aid box……………….😕

He walks upto where Heer was laying down………….he puts the paayal in his hand in his pocket…………….and sits down besides Heer…………..

But he stops……………How did he know……………there was a candle in the drawer…………….and a match box too!?.....................🤔

He thinks-- Mujhe kaise pata kii uss drawer mein yeh candle hai…………..maachis ke dabbey ke saath…………….aur usski saath waali drawer mein ek first aid box!?...............Kaise?!.....................😲

Prem wonders what was happening with him…………….and that too………….why?!...............Kyun?...............He thought………………..

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago

hi i luvvvvvvved this part vry much..yaar while iam involving seriously into the part u made me😆😆when prem thot abt waiter.u r amzing....emoticons u gvn ws grt and i enjoyed it vry much.plzzz continue asap.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx sweta..................Glad u enjoyed this part too dear................next part next weekend................till then take care dear...................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx purplestar22..................Glad u enjoyed this part too dear................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx sugi...................Glad u enjoyed this part soooooooooo much..............well................u actually loved it.................Hope u continue to do the same................Glad I was able to change ur mood dear..................Next part agley weekend pe................Kal se toh its Harshad's turn to entertain u naa!...................Till then take care.................and enjoy!................I'm soooooooooooooo glad its Monday tomorrow.................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part...good update.I liked it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey di
awesum part
poor heeer got hurt
prem is confused
loved it
i would love to make vm on that song
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
tanks for the PM dear. that was awesome 👏 especially the vermilion scene....too good. cant wait to read the next part....continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanx Intellienough...................Glad u enjoyed this part too dear..............Hope u like the coming up track too.................Thanx once again.................😊

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