Nayyi Zindagi FF

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi everyone….i've always been a silent reader of this forum. Reading fanfics and the chemistry between afreen and azaan inspired me to write a small Fan Fic. I've recently started watching Khwaish and its got me hooked. Azaan and Afreen are simply rocking. They have a great chemistry together and I love the little romantic scenes between the two.

This is my first Fan Fic. Let me know how you guys like it and if you want me to continue 😊

It starts with everyone at the picnic enjoying and having fun. Suddenly Afreen started feeling dizzy and wanted to lie down. Appa noticed she wasn't feeling well so she told Azaan to get a room and take her up to the hotel so she could lie down.

Appa: Azaan beta, Afreen ko kuch theek nahin lag raha. Use upper kamre me le jao

Azaan: Ji Aapa. Chalo Afreen .

Aapa: Aur Haan, tum dono yahi rah jana aaj raat ko, jab afreen ki tabyat theek ho kal, tab ajana. Yeh rahi gaadi ki Chaabi.😉


Aapa being the way she is, she wanted to get them closer to each other.👏

Like a good little boy, he takes the keys and says ji aapa.

Afreen gets up and both walk towards reception. Azaan makes Afreen sit till he gets a room. The manger gives him the key. As Azaan was about to walk to Afreen, She tries to get up but she couldn't stand up straight. Azaan looks at her lovingly and without saying a word carries her up to the room and makes her lie down on the bed. 😳


Afreen: Shukhriya Azaan

Azaan gives her a look to say im your husband its my duty but doesn't say a word. He gets her water and puts the blanket over her.😳


Outside everyone was singing and playing antakshri and having fun. Everyone had their dinner and were about to leave. Here Sania was looking for Azaan but couldn't find him. She and Naaz went looking for him but Aapa called them back and tells them the love birds are together let them be. You guys come here and enjoy with the family.👏

Sania gets so mad but doesn't say a word, she just keeps looking everywhere to spot Azaan so she could take him away from Afreen but No luck.👏😆

Finally it was night and time for everyone to leave. One after other everyone boarded the bus.


Aapa: Chalo sab aagaye

Sania: wait, abhi Azaan baki hai


Aaapa gives her a look and says Azaan apni biwi ke saath waqt guzarna chahta hai, woh dono kal aayenge.😉👏


Sania's face just goes down and she looked like she just got run over by something😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ohhhhhhhh i luved it plz continue darlin 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3
great job.... its intresting ya continue,,, 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good job 👏

continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good job 👏

continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow wonderful i hope ekta can do something like that but allshe knows is to create misunderstanding i don't know why she cant' let the lovers be always happy
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Posted: 17 years ago
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please continue --make sure details about their touches --accidental or what not 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaya plz continue...cant wait 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved itt!!! do continue soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great job... keep it up 👏

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