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Posted: 15 years ago
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once upon a time there was a girl who used to watch alot of tv. she watched it so much that she turned blind.

then her parents throw the tv from their house forever.....
then the girl goes on a hunger strike.
she refused to eat or drink

her parents felt really bad so they bought her a new TV and apologized for throwing the old one away
Then she start listening to her favourite shows n one day realize that she can feel without seeing anything

And then, one day she hears a voice that catches her attention instantly, she thinks she has heard it somewhere


And then She realizes that its was just dreaming about it.. it wasn't real ... it was just a stupid dream...


Then next day her friend told her about a new show of Sarwar Ahuja on Zee tv


She remembers, it is the same Sarwar Ahuja who is also playing a blind man in an earlier show Jyoti on NDTV,and she had turned blind watching it.


She is now eager to meet Sarwar for some tips on blindness

She decides 2 go 2 mumbai 2 meet Sarwar

She goes to Sarwar's house to ask him how to use your mobile when you are blind, coz he's always talking on the phone in Jyoti 😆

in Sarwar's house..the maid doesn't allow her 2 come inside n meer Sarwar

It is because the maid herself has a crush on Sarwar Ahuja😍 and wants him to become Shiney Ahuja 😈 par wo hai ki maanta hi nahi 👍🏼

The girl decides 2 go to the studio where Sarwar gonna shoot

Niharika goes to the studio coz she want to tell Sarwar about his maid's intentions and follows the direction hearing Sarwar's voice, but trips over in the studio and falls

Seeing this Sarwar helps her get up & after listening 2 her story he says "I'm sorry Niharika to hear that you're blind but you're mistaken I'm not blind neither do I have a maid...😕who told u that I have a maid..."

Niharika is totally taken aback, she says "I know you're not blind, just playing a role, but if you don't have a maid then who is the woman I met at your house? She told me she's your maid. If she isn't your maid, then who is she?"

hearing this Sarwar gets shocked & says "that's impossible, many years ago i had a maid but she had already died 3 years ago, i live alone in my compartment..."😲

Niharika tell him, "I have heard the voice loud and clear", Sarwar tells her "come to my house with me and show me, this is serious". He sounds nervous and so Niharika hesitantly agrees

they both go 2 sarwar's house...niharika told sarwar 2 ring the bell....sarwar said-i hav no maid...i locked the house n keys r wid me.............he take out the keys n opens d door....he said-come niharika....I live alone in my compartment...i hav no maid...no one is there in the house..niharika was shocked

Niharika is shocked because she hears someone saying "Sarwar saab, chai banaa doon?". Sarwar asks her, "Are you hesitating because I live alone? Don't worry, you can trust me". "No , not at all, just that I don't think you are, I just heard a voice asking you for tea" Niharika explains! Sarwar gets irritated "Now you're taking the joke too far Niharika, Its strange but I can't see anyone. Never mind, come in and have something, I'll drop you to the station later". Niharika thinks, either Sarwar's lying or her ears have gone wrong too !!!

Sarwar gets something to eat for her and then drops her to the station but Niharika was constantly thinking about that, She sits in the waiting-room while Sarwar goes to get her ticket. And she hears a man saying, "Don't now how long shall I wander like this?".She asks him "Where do you want to go?". He replies in a surprised tone, "What? Can you hear me? Finally someone can help me". Niharika cannot understand "What do you mean?". The man replies, "you don't know? I am Dead, and you can hear dead people"

On hearing this Niharika gets afraid & screams 4 help. Sarwar comes running & asks her what happened. She tells him that somebody is there. Sarwar says this is a station, there r lots of people, whom is she talking about? She tells him what she heard & Sarwar thinks she's lost it, thus decides 2 take her 2 a psychiatrist who is a good frend of his (Sarwar)...

Niharika agrees to go coz even she doesn't believe in this ghost thingy, but the man's voice keeps telling her "You aren't believing me but you'll realise it soon, and this is not a coincidence, the guy with you really needs your help, and you may find this helpful, you'll know the one you are hearing is a ghost when his or her voice sounds like an echo like you're hearing mine, remember this... you'll believe me sooner or later". Sarwar asks her,"Shall we go Niharika, Dr. Rajiv is waiting for us". Niharika is even more confused now but she goes with Sarwar.

After talking to Niharika Dr. Rajiv talks to Sawar alone. Dr. tells Sarwar probably due to her vision loss Niharika is depressed & she's imagining things. He advices Sarwar not to let her be alone for few days. Getting out from the chamber, Sarwar suggests Niharika to stay in his apartment for a couple of days, till she gets better. Confused & worried Niharika agrees reluctantly as she remembers the man at station's words "the guy with you really needs your help"..

Sarwar's feeling more awkward than Niharika in taking her to his home for obvious reasons, but his concern gets better of him n they arrive back to his house. Niharika hears the same voice and tries not to react, but this time hears an added statement "Go away right now, you can't stay here". She decides to find out more when Sarwar leaves in the morning and sits down in Sarwar's living room. Sarwar tells her "Don't worry, You can sleep in my room, I'll arrange a separate place for myself" and asks her hesitatingly,"Would you like to eat something? You must be hungry, and I need to give you the medicines Rajiv prescribed"


Niharika says " I am sorry to bother you like this.." Sarwar assures her saying " Its not a big deal. You just get better & things will be fine. As of now, what would you have? I stay alone, so mostly I eat out. I'll bring something for you.😊" Niharika says "I can cook myself..at home I did. I'll make something for myself. ..and you 🤔 😳 Surprised, Sarwar says " ermm..ohk" umm..I have a little work outside..so...I need to go out. I'll be back within an hour or two.. you sure you can manage? Niharika softly replies "hmm.." Sarwar says "see ya" and leaves, closing the door behind him. Niharika wonders where the kitchen is and tries to find her way to the kitchen by feeling the wall. At the end of the wall Niharika's hand touches a door.

She opens the door and gropes to find the kitchen, she manages to find eatables in the fridge, but then? She has to add the spices by smelling and tasting them, 😆 coz she doesn't know what is kept where. But she is still thinking about the voice though she doesn't hear it anymore. Just some minutes after she's done, Sarwar enters and asks her, "OMG? there's a power cut, how did you manage to work in the dark?" Niharika smiles slightly and says,"Sarwar you forgot right? I am having a power cut for life, its always the same for me." Sarwar realises his mistake and says Sorry, but Niharika tries to lighten his mood, "But that doesn't mean I can't feel too! Its really hot, and even the fan is not working 😉" They both laugh and sit down to eat.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

once upon a time there was a girl who used to watch alot of tv. she watched it so much that she turned blind.

then her parents throw the tv from their house forever.....
then the girl goes on a hunger strike.
she refused to eat or drink

her parents felt really bad so they bought her a new TV and apologized for throwing the old one away
Then she start listening to her favourite shows n one day realize that she can feel without seeing anything

And then, one day she hears a voice that catches her attention instantly, she thinks she has heard it somewhere


And then She realizes that its was just dreaming about it.. it wasn't real ... it was just a stupid dream...


Then next day her friend told her about a new show of Sarwar Ahuja on Zee tv


She remembers, it is the same Sarwar Ahuja who is also playing a blind man in an earlier show Jyoti on NDTV,and she had turned blind watching it.


She is now eager to meet Sarwar for some tips on blindness

She decides 2 go 2 mumbai 2 meet Sarwar

She goes to Sarwar's house to ask him how to use your mobile when you are blind, coz he's always talking on the phone in Jyoti 😆

in Sarwar's house..the maid doesn't allow her 2 come inside n meer Sarwar

It is because the maid herself has a crush on Sarwar Ahuja😍 and wants him to become Shiney Ahuja 😈 par wo hai ki maanta hi nahi 👍🏼

The girl decides 2 go to the studio where Sarwar gonna shoot

Niharika goes to the studio coz she want to tell Sarwar about his maid's intentions and follows the direction hearing Sarwar's voice, but trips over in the studio and falls

Seeing this Sarwar helps her get up & after listening 2 her story he says "I'm sorry Niharika to hear that you're blind but you're mistaken I'm not blind neither do I have a maid...😕who told u that I have a maid..."

Niharika is totally taken aback, she says "I know you're not blind, just playing a role, but if you don't have a maid then who is the woman I met at your house? She told me she's your maid. If she isn't your maid, then who is she?"

hearing this Sarwar gets shocked & says "that's impossible, many years ago i had a maid but she had already died 3 years ago, i live alone in my compartment..."😲

Niharika tell him, "I have heard the voice loud and clear", Sarwar tells her "come to my house with me and show me, this is serious". He sounds nervous and so Niharika hesitantly agrees

they both go 2 sarwar's house...niharika told sarwar 2 ring the bell....sarwar said-i hav no maid...i locked the house n keys r wid me.............he take out the keys n opens d door....he said-come niharika....I live alone in my compartment...i hav no maid...no one is there in the house..niharika was shocked

Niharika is shocked because she hears someone saying "Sarwar saab, chai banaa doon?". Sarwar asks her, "Are you hesitating because I live alone? Don't worry, you can trust me". "No , not at all, just that I don't think you are, I just heard a voice asking you for tea" Niharika explains! Sarwar gets irritated "Now you're taking the joke too far Niharika, Its strange but I can't see anyone. Never mind, come in and have something, I'll drop you to the station later". Niharika thinks, either Sarwar's lying or her ears have gone wrong too !!!

Sarwar gets something to eat for her and then drops her to the station but Niharika was constantly thinking about that, She sits in the waiting-room while Sarwar goes to get her ticket. And she hears a man saying, "Don't now how long shall I wander like this?".She asks him "Where do you want to go?". He replies in a surprised tone, "What? Can you hear me? Finally someone can help me". Niharika cannot understand "What do you mean?". The man replies, "you don't know? I am Dead, and you can hear dead people"

On hearing this Niharika gets afraid & screams 4 help. Sarwar comes running & asks her what happened. She tells him that somebody is there. Sarwar says this is a station, there r lots of people, whom is she talking about? She tells him what she heard & Sarwar thinks she's lost it, thus decides 2 take her 2 a psychiatrist who is a good frend of his (Sarwar)...

Niharika agrees to go coz even she doesn't believe in this ghost thingy, but the man's voice keeps telling her "You aren't believing me but you'll realise it soon, and this is not a coincidence, the guy with you really needs your help, and you may find this helpful, you'll know the one you are hearing is a ghost when his or her voice sounds like an echo like you're hearing mine, remember this... you'll believe me sooner or later". Sarwar asks her,"Shall we go Niharika, Dr. Rajiv is waiting for us". Niharika is even more confused now but she goes with Sarwar.

After talking to Niharika Dr. Rajiv talks to Sawar alone. Dr. tells Sarwar probably due to her vision loss Niharika is depressed & she's imagining things. He advices Sarwar not to let her be alone for few days. Getting out from the chamber, Sarwar suggests Niharika to stay in his apartment for a couple of days, till she gets better. Confused & worried Niharika agrees reluctantly as she remembers the man at station's words "the guy with you really needs your help"..

Sarwar's feeling more awkward than Niharika in taking her to his home for obvious reasons, but his concern gets better of him n they arrive back to his house. Niharika hears the same voice and tries not to react, but this time hears an added statement "Go away right now, you can't stay here". She decides to find out more when Sarwar leaves in the morning and sits down in Sarwar's living room. Sarwar tells her "Don't worry, You can sleep in my room, I'll arrange a separate place for myself" and asks her hesitatingly,"Would you like to eat something? You must be hungry, and I need to give you the medicines Rajiv prescribed"


Niharika says " I am sorry to bother you like this.." Sarwar assures her saying " Its not a big deal. You just get better & things will be fine. As of now, what would you have? I stay alone, so mostly I eat out. I'll bring something for you.😊" Niharika says "I can cook myself..at home I did. I'll make something for myself. ..and you 🤔 😳 Surprised, Sarwar says " ermm..ohk" umm..I have a little work outside..so...I need to go out. I'll be back within an hour or two.. you sure you can manage? Niharika softly replies "hmm.." Sarwar says "see ya" and leaves, closing the door behind him. Niharika wonders where the kitchen is and tries to find her way to the kitchen by feeling the wall. At the end of the wall Niharika's hand touches a door.

She opens the door and gropes to find the kitchen, she manages to find eatables in the fridge, but then? She has to add the spices by smelling and tasting them, 😆 coz she doesn't know what is kept where. But she is still thinking about the voice though she doesn't hear it anymore. Just some minutes after she's done, Sarwar enters and asks her, "OMG? there's a power cut, how did you manage to work in the dark?" Niharika smiles slightly and says,"Sarwar you forgot right? I am having a power cut for life, its always the same for me." Sarwar realises his mistake and says Sorry, but Niharika tries to lighten his mood, "But that doesn't mean I can't feel too! Its really hot, and even the fan is not working 😉" They both laugh and sit down to eat.


Sarwar puts a bit of food in his mouth & surprisingly says " wow! the food is good..you cook well "😛 Niharika blushes at that & says "learnt from mom😳". They continue having their dinner... After dinner Sarwar takes Niharika to a room and says "you sleep here,I'll sleep at the living room" Niharika hesitates "No, No you.." .Sarwar says " I will be fine, goodnight" & leaves the room.
Its past midnight.. Niharika suddenly wakes up..the phone at the bedside table is ringing.Finding the phone she picks up the receiver- "hello.." Someone on the other side says "what are you doing here still now..go away..or else it wouldn't be good for you" Niharika is shocked as she recognized the voice..It was the maid's voice, who was there in Sarwar's house when Niharika had come in the morning..

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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
once upon a time there was a girl who used to watch alot of tv. she watched it so much that she turned blind.

then her parents throw the tv from their house forever.....
then the girl goes on a hunger strike.
she refused to eat or drink

her parents felt really bad so they bought her a new TV and apologized for throwing the old one away
Then she start listening to her favourite shows n one day realize that she can feel without seeing anything

And then, one day she hears a voice that catches her attention instantly, she thinks she has heard it somewhere


And then She realizes that its was just dreaming about it.. it wasn't real ... it was just a stupid dream...


Then next day her friend told her about a new show of Sarwar Ahuja on Zee tv


She remembers, it is the same Sarwar Ahuja who is also playing a blind man in an earlier show Jyoti on NDTV,and she had turned blind watching it.


She is now eager to meet Sarwar for some tips on blindness

She decides 2 go 2 mumbai 2 meet Sarwar

She goes to Sarwar's house to ask him how to use your mobile when you are blind, coz he's always talking on the phone in Jyoti 😆

in Sarwar's house..the maid doesn't allow her 2 come inside n meer Sarwar

It is because the maid herself has a crush on Sarwar Ahuja😍 and wants him to become Shiney Ahuja 😈 par wo hai ki maanta hi nahi 👍🏼

The girl decides 2 go to the studio where Sarwar gonna shoot

Niharika goes to the studio coz she want to tell Sarwar about his maid's intentions and follows the direction hearing Sarwar's voice, but trips over in the studio and falls

Seeing this Sarwar helps her get up & after listening 2 her story he says "I'm sorry Niharika to hear that you're blind but you're mistaken I'm not blind neither do I have a maid...😕who told u that I have a maid..."

Niharika is totally taken aback, she says "I know you're not blind, just playing a role, but if you don't have a maid then who is the woman I met at your house? She told me she's your maid. If she isn't your maid, then who is she?"

hearing this Sarwar gets shocked & says "that's impossible, many years ago i had a maid but she had already died 3 years ago, i live alone in my compartment..."😲

Niharika tell him, "I have heard the voice loud and clear", Sarwar tells her "come to my house with me and show me, this is serious". He sounds nervous and so Niharika hesitantly agrees

they both go 2 sarwar's house...niharika told sarwar 2 ring the bell....sarwar said-i hav no maid...i locked the house n keys r wid me.............he take out the keys n opens d door....he said-come niharika....I live alone in my compartment...i hav no maid...no one is there in the house..niharika was shocked

Niharika is shocked because she hears someone saying "Sarwar saab, chai banaa doon?". Sarwar asks her, "Are you hesitating because I live alone? Don't worry, you can trust me". "No , not at all, just that I don't think you are, I just heard a voice asking you for tea" Niharika explains! Sarwar gets irritated "Now you're taking the joke too far Niharika, Its strange but I can't see anyone. Never mind, come in and have something, I'll drop you to the station later". Niharika thinks, either Sarwar's lying or her ears have gone wrong too !!!

Sarwar gets something to eat for her and then drops her to the station but Niharika was constantly thinking about that, She sits in the waiting-room while Sarwar goes to get her ticket. And she hears a man saying, "Don't now how long shall I wander like this?".She asks him "Where do you want to go?". He replies in a surprised tone, "What? Can you hear me? Finally someone can help me". Niharika cannot understand "What do you mean?". The man replies, "you don't know? I am Dead, and you can hear dead people"

On hearing this Niharika gets afraid & screams 4 help. Sarwar comes running & asks her what happened. She tells him that somebody is there. Sarwar says this is a station, there r lots of people, whom is she talking about? She tells him what she heard & Sarwar thinks she's lost it, thus decides 2 take her 2 a psychiatrist who is a good frend of his (Sarwar)...

Niharika agrees to go coz even she doesn't believe in this ghost thingy, but the man's voice keeps telling her "You aren't believing me but you'll realise it soon, and this is not a coincidence, the guy with you really needs your help, and you may find this helpful, you'll know the one you are hearing is a ghost when his or her voice sounds like an echo like you're hearing mine, remember this... you'll believe me sooner or later". Sarwar asks her,"Shall we go Niharika, Dr. Rajiv is waiting for us". Niharika is even more confused now but she goes with Sarwar.

After talking to Niharika Dr. Rajiv talks to Sawar alone. Dr. tells Sarwar probably due to her vision loss Niharika is depressed & she's imagining things. He advices Sarwar not to let her be alone for few days. Getting out from the chamber, Sarwar suggests Niharika to stay in his apartment for a couple of days, till she gets better. Confused & worried Niharika agrees reluctantly as she remembers the man at station's words "the guy with you really needs your help"..

Sarwar's feeling more awkward than Niharika in taking her to his home for obvious reasons, but his concern gets better of him n they arrive back to his house. Niharika hears the same voice and tries not to react, but this time hears an added statement "Go away right now, you can't stay here". She decides to find out more when Sarwar leaves in the morning and sits down in Sarwar's living room. Sarwar tells her "Don't worry, You can sleep in my room, I'll arrange a separate place for myself" and asks her hesitatingly,"Would you like to eat something? You must be hungry, and I need to give you the medicines Rajiv prescribed"


Niharika says " I am sorry to bother you like this.." Sarwar assures her saying " Its not a big deal. You just get better & things will be fine. As of now, what would you have? I stay alone, so mostly I eat out. I'll bring something for you.😊" Niharika says "I can cook myself..at home I did. I'll make something for myself. ..and you 🤔 😳 Surprised, Sarwar says " ermm..ohk" umm..I have a little work outside..so...I need to go out. I'll be back within an hour or two.. you sure you can manage? Niharika softly replies "hmm.." Sarwar says "see ya" and leaves, closing the door behind him. Niharika wonders where the kitchen is and tries to find her way to the kitchen by feeling the wall. At the end of the wall Niharika's hand touches a door.

She opens the door and gropes to find the kitchen, she manages to find eatables in the fridge, but then? She has to add the spices by smelling and tasting them, 😆 coz she doesn't know what is kept where. But she is still thinking about the voice though she doesn't hear it anymore. Just some minutes after she's done, Sarwar enters and asks her, "OMG? there's a power cut, how did you manage to work in the dark?" Niharika smiles slightly and says,"Sarwar you forgot right? I am having a power cut for life, its always the same for me." Sarwar realises his mistake and says Sorry, but Niharika tries to lighten his mood, "But that doesn't mean I can't feel too! Its really hot, and even the fan is not working 😉" They both laugh and sit down to eat.


Sarwar puts a bit of food in his mouth & surprisingly says " wow! the food is good..you cook well "😛 Niharika blushes at that & says "learnt from mom😳". They continue having their dinner... After dinner Sarwar takes Niharika to a room and says "you sleep here,I'll sleep at the living room" Niharika hesitates "No, No you.." .Sarwar says " I will be fine, goodnight" & leaves the room.
Its past midnight.. Niharika suddenly wakes up..the phone at the bedside table is ringing.Finding the phone she picks up the receiver- "hello.." Someone on the other side says "what are you doing here still now..go away..or else it wouldn't be good for you" Niharika is shocked as she recognized the voice..It was the maid's voice, who was there in Sarwar's house when Niharika had come in the morning..

"Who are you and.... and what do you want from me?", asks Niharika. "Your help."
Then the ghost appears as a woman in a white sari. Niharika then screams. The maid says: "Please dont shout. i'm a bhatakti hui aatma and i cant rest in peace until i have got my revenge. Sarwar killed my brother who lived here as a servant 10 years ago. Then i started working here as a maid to take revenge on Sarwar 7 years ago. One day Jyoti came here to meet Sarwar who just started acting in Jyoti at that time. That day i served some juice and i mixed poison in one of the glass but unfortunately jyoti got the wrong glass and she died instead of Sarwar. Then Sarwar killed me when he found out that i was trying to kill him."
Niharika was schocked to hear that story. Then she said: "I'm ready to help you."
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WE Have To Trick him he is very cunning. ok yeah but now? The Maid says how else you have to make him fall in love with you. then kill him. but Niharika fanited and woke up an hour later. the maid was still there. WHAT? Fall in love with Sarwar but he is a killer. he will kill me. no i won;t do it. the maid says ok fine. then don;t do it. but if you won;t kill him he will KILL YOU just like he killed jyoti. Niharika finallys says yes. ok fine i will do it. i will make him fall in love with me then i will kill him.☯️
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once upon a time there was a girl who used to watch alot of tv. she watched it so much that she turned blind.

then her parents throw the tv from their house forever.....
then the girl goes on a hunger strike.
she refused to eat or drink

her parents felt really bad so they bought her a new TV and apologized for throwing the old one away
Then she start listening to her favourite shows n one day realize that she can feel without seeing anything

And then, one day she hears a voice that catches her attention instantly, she thinks she has heard it somewhere


And then She realizes that its was just dreaming about it.. it wasn't real ... it was just a stupid dream...


Then next day her friend told her about a new show of Sarwar Ahuja on Zee tv


She remembers, it is the same Sarwar Ahuja who is also playing a blind man in an earlier show Jyoti on NDTV,and she had turned blind watching it.


She is now eager to meet Sarwar for some tips on blindness

She decides 2 go 2 mumbai 2 meet Sarwar

She goes to Sarwar's house to ask him how to use your mobile when you are blind, coz he's always talking on the phone in Jyoti 😆

in Sarwar's house..the maid doesn't allow her 2 come inside n meer Sarwar

It is because the maid herself has a crush on Sarwar Ahuja😍 and wants him to become Shiney Ahuja 😈 par wo hai ki maanta hi nahi 👍🏼

The girl decides 2 go to the studio where Sarwar gonna shoot

Niharika goes to the studio coz she want to tell Sarwar about his maid's intentions and follows the direction hearing Sarwar's voice, but trips over in the studio and falls

Seeing this Sarwar helps her get up & after listening 2 her story he says "I'm sorry Niharika to hear that you're blind but you're mistaken I'm not blind neither do I have a maid...😕who told u that I have a maid..."

Niharika is totally taken aback, she says "I know you're not blind, just playing a role, but if you don't have a maid then who is the woman I met at your house? She told me she's your maid. If she isn't your maid, then who is she?"

hearing this Sarwar gets shocked & says "that's impossible, many years ago i had a maid but she had already died 3 years ago, i live alone in my compartment..."😲

Niharika tell him, "I have heard the voice loud and clear", Sarwar tells her "come to my house with me and show me, this is serious". He sounds nervous and so Niharika hesitantly agrees

they both go 2 sarwar's house...niharika told sarwar 2 ring the bell....sarwar said-i hav no maid...i locked the house n keys r wid me.............he take out the keys n opens d door....he said-come niharika....I live alone in my compartment...i hav no maid...no one is there in the house..niharika was shocked

Niharika is shocked because she hears someone saying "Sarwar saab, chai banaa doon?". Sarwar asks her, "Are you hesitating because I live alone? Don't worry, you can trust me". "No , not at all, just that I don't think you are, I just heard a voice asking you for tea" Niharika explains! Sarwar gets irritated "Now you're taking the joke too far Niharika, Its strange but I can't see anyone. Never mind, come in and have something, I'll drop you to the station later". Niharika thinks, either Sarwar's lying or her ears have gone wrong too !!!

Sarwar gets something to eat for her and then drops her to the station but Niharika was constantly thinking about that, She sits in the waiting-room while Sarwar goes to get her ticket. And she hears a man saying, "Don't now how long shall I wander like this?".She asks him "Where do you want to go?". He replies in a surprised tone, "What? Can you hear me? Finally someone can help me". Niharika cannot understand "What do you mean?". The man replies, "you don't know? I am Dead, and you can hear dead people"

On hearing this Niharika gets afraid & screams 4 help. Sarwar comes running & asks her what happened. She tells him that somebody is there. Sarwar says this is a station, there r lots of people, whom is she talking about? She tells him what she heard & Sarwar thinks she's lost it, thus decides 2 take her 2 a psychiatrist who is a good frend of his (Sarwar)...

Niharika agrees to go coz even she doesn't believe in this ghost thingy, but the man's voice keeps telling her "You aren't believing me but you'll realise it soon, and this is not a coincidence, the guy with you really needs your help, and you may find this helpful, you'll know the one you are hearing is a ghost when his or her voice sounds like an echo like you're hearing mine, remember this... you'll believe me sooner or later". Sarwar asks her,"Shall we go Niharika, Dr. Rajiv is waiting for us". Niharika is even more confused now but she goes with Sarwar.

After talking to Niharika Dr. Rajiv talks to Sawar alone. Dr. tells Sarwar probably due to her vision loss Niharika is depressed & she's imagining things. He advices Sarwar not to let her be alone for few days. Getting out from the chamber, Sarwar suggests Niharika to stay in his apartment for a couple of days, till she gets better. Confused & worried Niharika agrees reluctantly as she remembers the man at station's words "the guy with you really needs your help"..

Sarwar's feeling more awkward than Niharika in taking her to his home for obvious reasons, but his concern gets better of him n they arrive back to his house. Niharika hears the same voice and tries not to react, but this time hears an added statement "Go away right now, you can't stay here". She decides to find out more when Sarwar leaves in the morning and sits down in Sarwar's living room. Sarwar tells her "Don't worry, You can sleep in my room, I'll arrange a separate place for myself" and asks her hesitatingly,"Would you like to eat something? You must be hungry, and I need to give you the medicines Rajiv prescribed"


Niharika says " I am sorry to bother you like this.." Sarwar assures her saying " Its not a big deal. You just get better & things will be fine. As of now, what would you have? I stay alone, so mostly I eat out. I'll bring something for you.😊" Niharika says "I can cook myself..at home I did. I'll make something for myself. ..and you 🤔 😳 Surprised, Sarwar says " ermm..ohk" umm..I have a little work outside..so...I need to go out. I'll be back within an hour or two.. you sure you can manage? Niharika softly replies "hmm.." Sarwar says "see ya" and leaves, closing the door behind him. Niharika wonders where the kitchen is and tries to find her way to the kitchen by feeling the wall. At the end of the wall Niharika's hand touches a door.

She opens the door and gropes to find the kitchen, she manages to find eatables in the fridge, but then? She has to add the spices by smelling and tasting them, 😆 coz she doesn't know what is kept where. But she is still thinking about the voice though she doesn't hear it anymore. Just some minutes after she's done, Sarwar enters and asks her, "OMG? there's a power cut, how did you manage to work in the dark?" Niharika smiles slightly and says,"Sarwar you forgot right? I am having a power cut for life, its always the same for me." Sarwar realises his mistake and says Sorry, but Niharika tries to lighten his mood, "But that doesn't mean I can't feel too! Its really hot, and even the fan is not working 😉" They both laugh and sit down to eat.


Sarwar puts a bit of food in his mouth & surprisingly says " wow! the food is good..you cook well "😛 Niharika blushes at that & says "learnt from mom😳". They continue having their dinner... After dinner Sarwar takes Niharika to a room and says "you sleep here,I'll sleep at the living room" Niharika hesitates "No, No you.." .Sarwar says " I will be fine, goodnight" & leaves the room.
Its past midnight.. Niharika suddenly wakes up..the phone at the bedside table is ringing.Finding the phone she picks up the receiver- "hello.." Someone on the other side says "what are you doing here still now..go away..or else it wouldn't be good for you" Niharika is shocked as she recognized the voice..It was the maid's voice, who was there in Sarwar's house when Niharika had come in the morning..

"Who are you and.... and what do you want from me?", asks Niharika. "Your help."
Then the ghost appears as a woman in a white sari. Niharika then screams. The maid says: "Please dont shout. I'm a bhatakti hui aatma and I cant rest in peace until I have got my revenge. Sarwar killed my brother who lived here as a servant 10 years ago. Then I started working here as a maid to take revenge on Sarwar 3 years ago. One day Jyoti came here to meet Sarwar who just started acting in Jyoti at that time. That day I served some juice and I mixed poison in one of the glass but unfortunately Jyoti got the wrong glass and she died instead of Sarwar. Then Sarwar killed me when he found out that I was trying to kill him."
Niharika was shocked to hear that story. Then she said: "I'm ready to help you."

WE Have To Trick him he is very cunning. OK yeah but now? The Maid says how else you have to make him fall in love with you. Then kill him. but Niharika fainted and woke up an hour later. the maid was still there. WHAT? Fall in love with Sarwar but he is a killer. he will kill me. no I won't do it. the maid says OK fine. then don't do it. but if you won't kill him he will KILL YOU just like he killed Jyoti. Niharika finally says yes. I will do it. I will make him fall in love with me then I will kill him.☯️

Niharika convinces the maid's ghost and she goes away, but she is still thinking. Many thoughts come to her, If the maid really needs her help, why did she ask her to go? She may be lying because since she couldn't kill Sarwar in 3 years, she might make Niharika kill him. But why shall a dead person lie, what shall she get? And her story though a bit confusing seemed convincing and real too. Then she also remembers the words of the station ghost man, "The guy with you really needs your help". She remembers how well Sarwar had behaved with her, but also doubts him since all this could be deceptive. But what will he get by killing a blind girl? She decides to go with the flow and to make Sarwar have faith and trust in her, and make him spill out the beans. If he's innocent she may be able to help him, and if he's really the killer, she'll help the maid kill him. Then she realises its morning since Sarwar was knocking the door, asking her to come out for breakfast.

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once upon a time there was a girl who used to watch alot of tv. she watched it so much that she turned blind.

then her parents throw the tv from their house forever.....
then the girl goes on a hunger strike.
she refused to eat or drink

her parents felt really bad so they bought her a new TV and apologized for throwing the old one away
Then she start listening to her favourite shows n one day realize that she can feel without seeing anything

And then, one day she hears a voice that catches her attention instantly, she thinks she has heard it somewhere


And then She realizes that its was just dreaming about it.. it wasn't real ... it was just a stupid dream...


Then next day her friend told her about a new show of Sarwar Ahuja on Zee tv


She remembers, it is the same Sarwar Ahuja who is also playing a blind man in an earlier show Jyoti on NDTV,and she had turned blind watching it.


She is now eager to meet Sarwar for some tips on blindness

She decides 2 go 2 mumbai 2 meet Sarwar

She goes to Sarwar's house to ask him how to use your mobile when you are blind, coz he's always talking on the phone in Jyoti 😆

in Sarwar's house..the maid doesn't allow her 2 come inside n meer Sarwar

It is because the maid herself has a crush on Sarwar Ahuja😍 and wants him to become Shiney Ahuja 😈 par wo hai ki maanta hi nahi 👍🏼

The girl decides 2 go to the studio where Sarwar gonna shoot

Niharika goes to the studio coz she want to tell Sarwar about his maid's intentions and follows the direction hearing Sarwar's voice, but trips over in the studio and falls

Seeing this Sarwar helps her get up & after listening 2 her story he says "I'm sorry Niharika to hear that you're blind but you're mistaken I'm not blind neither do I have a maid...😕who told u that I have a maid..."

Niharika is totally taken aback, she says "I know you're not blind, just playing a role, but if you don't have a maid then who is the woman I met at your house? She told me she's your maid. If she isn't your maid, then who is she?"

hearing this Sarwar gets shocked & says "that's impossible, many years ago i had a maid but she had already died 3 years ago, i live alone in my compartment..."😲

Niharika tell him, "I have heard the voice loud and clear", Sarwar tells her "come to my house with me and show me, this is serious". He sounds nervous and so Niharika hesitantly agrees

they both go 2 sarwar's house...niharika told sarwar 2 ring the bell....sarwar said-i hav no maid...i locked the house n keys r wid me.............he take out the keys n opens d door....he said-come niharika....I live alone in my compartment...i hav no maid...no one is there in the house..niharika was shocked

Niharika is shocked because she hears someone saying "Sarwar saab, chai banaa doon?". Sarwar asks her, "Are you hesitating because I live alone? Don't worry, you can trust me". "No , not at all, just that I don't think you are, I just heard a voice asking you for tea" Niharika explains! Sarwar gets irritated "Now you're taking the joke too far Niharika, Its strange but I can't see anyone. Never mind, come in and have something, I'll drop you to the station later". Niharika thinks, either Sarwar's lying or her ears have gone wrong too !!!

Sarwar gets something to eat for her and then drops her to the station but Niharika was constantly thinking about that, She sits in the waiting-room while Sarwar goes to get her ticket. And she hears a man saying, "Don't now how long shall I wander like this?".She asks him "Where do you want to go?". He replies in a surprised tone, "What? Can you hear me? Finally someone can help me". Niharika cannot understand "What do you mean?". The man replies, "you don't know? I am Dead, and you can hear dead people"

On hearing this Niharika gets afraid & screams 4 help. Sarwar comes running & asks her what happened. She tells him that somebody is there. Sarwar says this is a station, there r lots of people, whom is she talking about? She tells him what she heard & Sarwar thinks she's lost it, thus decides 2 take her 2 a psychiatrist who is a good frend of his (Sarwar)...

Niharika agrees to go coz even she doesn't believe in this ghost thingy, but the man's voice keeps telling her "You aren't believing me but you'll realise it soon, and this is not a coincidence, the guy with you really needs your help, and you may find this helpful, you'll know the one you are hearing is a ghost when his or her voice sounds like an echo like you're hearing mine, remember this... you'll believe me sooner or later". Sarwar asks her,"Shall we go Niharika, Dr. Rajiv is waiting for us". Niharika is even more confused now but she goes with Sarwar.

After talking to Niharika Dr. Rajiv talks to Sawar alone. Dr. tells Sarwar probably due to her vision loss Niharika is depressed & she's imagining things. He advices Sarwar not to let her be alone for few days. Getting out from the chamber, Sarwar suggests Niharika to stay in his apartment for a couple of days, till she gets better. Confused & worried Niharika agrees reluctantly as she remembers the man at station's words "the guy with you really needs your help"..

Sarwar's feeling more awkward than Niharika in taking her to his home for obvious reasons, but his concern gets better of him n they arrive back to his house. Niharika hears the same voice and tries not to react, but this time hears an added statement "Go away right now, you can't stay here". She decides to find out more when Sarwar leaves in the morning and sits down in Sarwar's living room. Sarwar tells her "Don't worry, You can sleep in my room, I'll arrange a separate place for myself" and asks her hesitatingly,"Would you like to eat something? You must be hungry, and I need to give you the medicines Rajiv prescribed"


Niharika says " I am sorry to bother you like this.." Sarwar assures her saying " Its not a big deal. You just get better & things will be fine. As of now, what would you have? I stay alone, so mostly I eat out. I'll bring something for you.😊" Niharika says "I can cook myself..at home I did. I'll make something for myself. ..and you 🤔 😳 Surprised, Sarwar says " ermm..ohk" umm..I have a little work outside..so...I need to go out. I'll be back within an hour or two.. you sure you can manage? Niharika softly replies "hmm.." Sarwar says "see ya" and leaves, closing the door behind him. Niharika wonders where the kitchen is and tries to find her way to the kitchen by feeling the wall. At the end of the wall Niharika's hand touches a door.

She opens the door and gropes to find the kitchen, she manages to find eatables in the fridge, but then? She has to add the spices by smelling and tasting them, 😆 coz she doesn't know what is kept where. But she is still thinking about the voice though she doesn't hear it anymore. Just some minutes after she's done, Sarwar enters and asks her, "OMG? there's a power cut, how did you manage to work in the dark?" Niharika smiles slightly and says,"Sarwar you forgot right? I am having a power cut for life, its always the same for me." Sarwar realises his mistake and says Sorry, but Niharika tries to lighten his mood, "But that doesn't mean I can't feel too! Its really hot, and even the fan is not working 😉" They both laugh and sit down to eat.


Sarwar puts a bit of food in his mouth & surprisingly says " wow! the food is good..you cook well "😛 Niharika blushes at that & says "learnt from mom😳". They continue having their dinner... After dinner Sarwar takes Niharika to a room and says "you sleep here,I'll sleep at the living room" Niharika hesitates "No, No you.." .Sarwar says " I will be fine, goodnight" & leaves the room.
Its past midnight.. Niharika suddenly wakes up..the phone at the bedside table is ringing.Finding the phone she picks up the receiver- "hello.." Someone on the other side says "what are you doing here still now..go away..or else it wouldn't be good for you" Niharika is shocked as she recognized the voice..It was the maid's voice, who was there in Sarwar's house when Niharika had come in the morning..

"Who are you and.... and what do you want from me?", asks Niharika. "Your help."
Then the ghost appears as a woman in a white sari. Niharika then screams. The maid says: "Please dont shout. I'm a bhatakti hui aatma and I cant rest in peace until I have got my revenge. Sarwar killed my brother who lived here as a servant 10 years ago. Then I started working here as a maid to take revenge on Sarwar 3 years ago. One day Jyoti came here to meet Sarwar who just started acting in Jyoti at that time. That day I served some juice and I mixed poison in one of the glass but unfortunately Jyoti got the wrong glass and she died instead of Sarwar. Then Sarwar killed me when he found out that I was trying to kill him."
Niharika was shocked to hear that story. Then she said: "I'm ready to help you."

WE Have To Trick him he is very cunning. OK yeah but now? The Maid says how else you have to make him fall in love with you. Then kill him. but Niharika fainted and woke up an hour later. the maid was still there. WHAT? Fall in love with Sarwar but he is a killer. he will kill me. no I won't do it. the maid says OK fine. then don't do it. but if you won't kill him he will KILL YOU just like he killed Jyoti. Niharika finally says yes. I will do it. I will make him fall in love with me then I will kill him.☯️

Niharika convinces the maid's ghost and she goes away, but she is still thinking. Many thoughts come to her, If the maid really needs her help, why did she ask her to go? She may be lying because since she couldn't kill Sarwar in 3 years, she might make Niharika kill him. But why shall a dead person lie, what shall she get? And her story though a bit confusing seemed convincing and real too. Then she also remembers the words of the station ghost man, "The guy with you really needs your help". She remembers how well Sarwar had behaved with her, but also doubts him since all this could be deceptive. But what will he get by killing a blind girl? She decides to go with the flow and to make Sarwar have faith and trust in her, and make him spill out the beans. If he's innocent she may be able to help him, and if he's really the killer, she'll help the maid kill him. Then she realises its morning since Sarwar was knocking the door, asking her to come out for breakfast.

Niharika starts winning his trust & becomes a very near & dear frend of his, then one fine day sarwar tells her that he had a maid who was in luv with him. he rejected her proposal then she had committed sucide. on hearing this, she gets shocked & starts thinking that why did the maid lie then or is sarwar lying 2 her right now??? suddenly she hears the same voice at the station that says "the maid can get sarwar only if he dies bcoz she's a ghost & can never get him until & unless he is a living person. that maid is lying 2 u so that u kill sarwar & she gets him after he dies. save him, save him!!! only u can save him bcoz only u can hear me!!!"
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#37
once upon a time there was a girl who used to watch alot of tv. she watched it so much that she turned blind. Then her parents throw the TV from their house forever..... then the girl goes on a hunger strike. She refused to eat or drink. Her parents felt really bad so they bought her a new TV and apologized for throwing the old one away. Then she start listening to her favourite shows n one day realize that she can feel without seeing anything


And then, one day she hears a voice that catches her attention instantly, she thinks she has heard it somewhere. And then She realizes that its was just dreaming about it.. it wasn't real ... it was just a stupid dream...


Then next day her friend told her about a new show of Sarwar Ahuja on Zee TV.
She remembers, it is the same Sarwar Ahuja who is also playing a blind man in an earlier show Jyoti on NDTV,and she had turned blind watching it. She is now eager to meet Sarwar for some tips on blindness.She decides 2 go 2 mumbai 2 meet Sarwar.


She goes to Sarwar's house to ask him how to use your mobile when you are blind, coz he's always talking on the phone in Jyoti. 😆
In Sarwar's house..the maid doesn't allow her 2 come inside n meer Sarwar. It is because the maid herself has a crush on Sarwar Ahuja😍 and wants him to become Shiney Ahuja 😈 par wo hai ki maanta hi nahi 👍🏼 The girl decides 2 go to the studio where Sarwar gonna shoot. Niharika goes to the studio coz she want to tell Sarwar about his maid's intentions and follows the direction hearing Sarwar's voice, but trips over in the studio and falls


Seeing this Sarwar helps her get up & after listening 2 her story he says "I'm sorry Niharika to hear that you're blind but you're mistaken I'm not blind neither do I have a maid...😕who told u that I have a maid..." Niharika is totally taken aback, she says "I know you're not blind, just playing a role, but if you don't have a maid then who is the woman I met at your house? She told me she's your maid. If she isn't your maid, then who is she?"


Hearing this Sarwar gets shocked & says "that's impossible, many years ago i had a maid but she had already died 3 years ago, i live alone in my compartment..."😲 Niharika tell him, "I have heard the voice loud and clear", Sarwar tells her "come to my house with me and show me, this is serious". He sounds nervous and so Niharika hesitantly agrees. They both go 2 sarwar's house...Niharika told sarwar 2 ring the bell....sarwar said-i hav no maid...i locked the house n keys r wid me.............he take out the keys n opens d door....he said-come Niharika....I live alone in my compartment...i hav no maid...no one is there in the house..Niharika was shocked.



Niharika is shocked because she hears someone saying "Sarwar saab, chai banaa doon?". Sarwar asks her, "Are you hesitating because I live alone? Don't worry, you can trust me". "No , not at all, just that I don't think you are, I just heard a voice asking you for tea" Niharika explains! Sarwar gets irritated "Now you're taking the joke too far Niharika, Its strange but I can't see anyone. Never mind, come in and have something, I'll drop you to the station later". Niharika thinks, either Sarwar's lying or her ears have gone wrong too !!!

Sarwar gets something to eat for her and then drops her to the station but Niharika was constantly thinking about that, She sits in the waiting-room while Sarwar goes to get her ticket. And she hears a man saying, "Don't now how long shall I wander like this?".She asks him "Where do you want to go?". He replies in a surprised tone, "What? Can you hear me? Finally someone can help me". Niharika cannot understand "What do you mean?". The man replies, "you don't know? I am Dead, and you can hear dead people"

On hearing this Niharika gets afraid & screams 4 help. Sarwar comes running & asks her what happened. She tells him that somebody is there. Sarwar says this is a station, there r lots of people, whom is she talking about? She tells him what she heard & Sarwar thinks she's lost it, thus decides 2 take her 2 a psychiatrist who is a good frend of his (Sarwar)...

Niharika agrees to go coz even she doesn't believe in this ghost thingy, but the man's voice keeps telling her "You aren't believing me but you'll realise it soon, and this is not a coincidence, the guy with you really needs your help, and you may find this helpful, you'll know the one you are hearing is a ghost when his or her voice sounds like an echo like you're hearing mine, remember this... you'll believe me sooner or later". Sarwar asks her,"Shall we go Niharika, Dr. Rajiv is waiting for us". Niharika is even more confused now but she goes with Sarwar.

After talking to Niharika Dr. Rajiv talks to Sawar alone. Dr. tells Sarwar probably due to her vision loss Niharika is depressed & she's imagining things. He advices Sarwar not to let her be alone for few days. Getting out from the chamber, Sarwar suggests Niharika to stay in his apartment for a couple of days, till she gets better. Confused & worried Niharika agrees reluctantly as she remembers the man at station's words "the guy with you really needs your help"..

Sarwar's feeling more awkward than Niharika in taking her to his home for obvious reasons, but his concern gets better of him n they arrive back to his house. Niharika hears the same voice and tries not to react, but this time hears an added statement "Go away right now, you can't stay here". She decides to find out more when Sarwar leaves in the morning and sits down in Sarwar's living room. Sarwar tells her "Don't worry, You can sleep in my room, I'll arrange a separate place for myself" and asks her hesitatingly,"Would you like to eat something? You must be hungry, and I need to give you the medicines Rajiv prescribed"


Niharika says " I am sorry to bother you like this.." Sarwar assures her saying " Its not a big deal. You just get better & things will be fine. As of now, what would you have? I stay alone, so mostly I eat out. I'll bring something for you.😊" Niharika says "I can cook myself..at home I did. I'll make something for myself. ..and you 🤔 😳 Surprised, Sarwar says " ermm..ohk" umm..I have a little work outside..so...I need to go out. I'll be back within an hour or two.. you sure you can manage? Niharika softly replies "hmm.." Sarwar says "see ya" and leaves, closing the door behind him. Niharika wonders where the kitchen is and tries to find her way to the kitchen by feeling the wall. At the end of the wall Niharika's hand touches a door.

She opens the door and gropes to find the kitchen, she manages to find eatables in the fridge, but then? She has to add the spices by smelling and tasting them, 😆 coz she doesn't know what is kept where. But she is still thinking about the voice though she doesn't hear it anymore. Just some minutes after she's done, Sarwar enters and asks her, "OMG? there's a power cut, how did you manage to work in the dark?" Niharika smiles slightly and says,"Sarwar you forgot right? I am having a power cut for life, its always the same for me." Sarwar realises his mistake and says Sorry, but Niharika tries to lighten his mood, "But that doesn't mean I can't feel too! Its really hot, and even the fan is not working 😉" They both laugh and sit down to eat.


Sarwar puts a bit of food in his mouth & surprisingly says " wow! the food is good..you cook well "😛 Niharika blushes at that & says "learnt from mom😳". They continue having their dinner... After dinner Sarwar takes Niharika to a room and says "you sleep here,I'll sleep at the living room" Niharika hesitates "No, No you.." .Sarwar says " I will be fine, goodnight" & leaves the room.
Its past midnight.. Niharika suddenly wakes up..the phone at the bedside table is ringing.Finding the phone she picks up the receiver- "hello.." Someone on the other side says "what are you doing here still now..go away..or else it wouldn't be good for you" Niharika is shocked as she recognized the voice..It was the maid's voice, who was there in Sarwar's house when Niharika had come in the morning..

"Who are you and.... and what do you want from me?", asks Niharika. "Your help."
Then the ghost appears as a woman in a white sari. Niharika then screams. The maid says: "Please dont shout. I'm a bhatakti hui aatma and I cant rest in peace until I have got my revenge. Sarwar killed my brother who lived here as a servant 10 years ago. Then I started working here as a maid to take revenge on Sarwar 3 years ago. One day Jyoti came here to meet Sarwar who just started acting in Jyoti at that time. That day I served some juice and I mixed poison in one of the glass but unfortunately Jyoti got the wrong glass and she died instead of Sarwar. Then Sarwar killed me when he found out that I was trying to kill him."
Niharika was shocked to hear that story. Then she said: "I'm ready to help you."

WE Have To Trick him he is very cunning. OK yeah but now? The Maid says how else you have to make him fall in love with you. Then kill him. but Niharika fainted and woke up an hour later. the maid was still there. WHAT? Fall in love with Sarwar but he is a killer. he will kill me. no I won't do it. the maid says OK fine. then don't do it. but if you won't kill him he will KILL YOU just like he killed Jyoti. Niharika finally says yes. I will do it. I will make him fall in love with me then I will kill him.☯️

Niharika convinces the maid's ghost and she goes away, but she is still thinking. Many thoughts come to her, If the maid really needs her help, why did she ask her to go? She may be lying because since she couldn't kill Sarwar in 3 years, she might make Niharika kill him. But why shall a dead person lie, what shall she get? And her story though a bit confusing seemed convincing and real too. Then she also remembers the words of the station ghost man, "The guy with you really needs your help". She remembers how well Sarwar had behaved with her, but also doubts him since all this could be deceptive. But what will he get by killing a blind girl? She decides to go with the flow and to make Sarwar have faith and trust in her, and make him spill out the beans. If he's innocent she may be able to help him, and if he's really the killer, she'll help the maid kill him. Then she realises its morning since Sarwar was knocking the door, asking her to come out for breakfast.

Niharika starts winning his trust & becomes a very near & dear frend of his, then one fine day Sarwar tells her that he had a maid who was in luv with him. he rejected her proposal then she had committed sucide. on hearing this, she gets shocked & starts thinking that why did the maid lie then or is sarwar lying 2 her right now??? suddenly she hears the same voice at the station that says "the maid can get sarwar only if he dies bcoz she's a ghost & can never get him until & unless he is a living person. that maid is lying 2 u so that u kill sarwar & she gets him after he dies. save him, save him!!! only u can save him bcoz only u can hear me!!!"

Niharika now knows there was no Jyoti or the maid's brother whom Sarwar killed, the maid wanted Niharika to kill him coz she herself couldn't. She decides she'll have to fool the maid's ghost because, she must have heard, Sarwar telling the story to Niharika, so when the maid comes again, She blurts out even before the maid does, "What does that jerk think? He can fool me? Thank you so much you told me all about him before hand, he was fooling me and wanted to use me and kill me the way he killed all 3 of you. I'll help you to kill him, what shall we do next?" The maid says in a relieved tone to Niharika, "You'll have to get married to him and try performing the marriage in the balcony, When it is done, push him from there, the same way I did, n I be satisfied" and she goes. Niharika tries to call the station-ghost for help because she doesn't want to do this. The ghost comes and tells her, "Get married to him, she wants him to die in the same way she died, because of the person he loves and from the balcony, if you marry him but don't kill him you'll be his protection as a wife is the greatest protection for her husband." Niharika is confused since it is a very big decision to take and she doesn't know whether to marry him or not?

Edited by nikkie - 15 years ago
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She starts Thinking then gets mad and breaks a glass and cuts her hand. then Sarwar comes in the room because of the noise he heard and sees her hand and asks her What Happen? how come you cut hand? oh thats nothing. he brings the first Aid Box and dresses her hand. Niharika is thinking to herself He is so nice i Will marry him and save him form the Maid. ☯️
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once upon a time there was a girl who used to watch alot of tv. she watched it so much that she turned blind. Then her parents throw the TV from their house forever..... then the girl goes on a hunger strike. She refused to eat or drink. Her parents felt really bad so they bought her a new TV and apologized for throwing the old one away. Then she start listening to her favourite shows n one day realize that she can feel without seeing anything


And then, one day she hears a voice that catches her attention instantly, she thinks she has heard it somewhere. And then She realizes that its was just dreaming about it.. it wasn't real ... it was just a stupid dream...


Then next day her friend told her about a new show of Sarwar Ahuja on Zee TV.
She remembers, it is the same Sarwar Ahuja who is also playing a blind man in an earlier show Jyoti on NDTV,and she had turned blind watching it. She is now eager to meet Sarwar for some tips on blindness.She decides 2 go 2 mumbai 2 meet Sarwar.


She goes to Sarwar's house to ask him how to use your mobile when you are blind, coz he's always talking on the phone in Jyoti. 😆
In Sarwar's house..the maid doesn't allow her 2 come inside n meer Sarwar. It is because the maid herself has a crush on Sarwar Ahuja😍 and wants him to become Shiney Ahuja 😈 par wo hai ki maanta hi nahi 👍🏼 The girl decides 2 go to the studio where Sarwar gonna shoot. Niharika goes to the studio coz she want to tell Sarwar about his maid's intentions and follows the direction hearing Sarwar's voice, but trips over in the studio and falls

Seeing this Sarwar helps her get up & after listening 2 her story he says "I'm sorry Niharika to hear that you're blind but you're mistaken I'm not blind neither do I have a maid...😕who told u that I have a maid..." Niharika is totally taken aback, she says "I know you're not blind, just playing a role, but if you don't have a maid then who is the woman I met at your house? She told me she's your maid. If she isn't your maid, then who is she?"

Hearing this Sarwar gets shocked & says "that's impossible, many years ago i had a maid but she had already died 3 years ago, i live alone in my compartment..."😲 Niharika tell him, "I have heard the voice loud and clear", Sarwar tells her "come to my house with me and show me, this is serious". He sounds nervous and so Niharika hesitantly agrees. They both go 2 sarwar's house...Niharika told sarwar 2 ring the bell....sarwar said-i hav no maid...i locked the house n keys r wid me.............he take out the keys n opens d door....he said-come Niharika....I live alone in my compartment...i hav no maid...no one is there in the house..Niharika was shocked.

Niharika is shocked because she hears someone saying "Sarwar saab, chai banaa doon?". Sarwar asks her, "Are you hesitating because I live alone? Don't worry, you can trust me". "No , not at all, just that I don't think you are, I just heard a voice asking you for tea" Niharika explains! Sarwar gets irritated "Now you're taking the joke too far Niharika, Its strange but I can't see anyone. Never mind, come in and have something, I'll drop you to the station later". Niharika thinks, either Sarwar's lying or her ears have gone wrong too !!!

Sarwar gets something to eat for her and then drops her to the station but Niharika was constantly thinking about that, She sits in the waiting-room while Sarwar goes to get her ticket. And she hears a man saying, "Don't now how long shall I wander like this?".She asks him "Where do you want to go?". He replies in a surprised tone, "What? Can you hear me? Finally someone can help me". Niharika cannot understand "What do you mean?". The man replies, "you don't know? I am Dead, and you can hear dead people"

On hearing this Niharika gets afraid & screams 4 help. Sarwar comes running & asks her what happened. She tells him that somebody is there. Sarwar says this is a station, there r lots of people, whom is she talking about? She tells him what she heard & Sarwar thinks she's lost it, thus decides 2 take her 2 a psychiatrist who is a good frend of his (Sarwar)...

Niharika agrees to go coz even she doesn't believe in this ghost thingy, but the man's voice keeps telling her "You aren't believing me but you'll realise it soon, and this is not a coincidence, the guy with you really needs your help, and you may find this helpful, you'll know the one you are hearing is a ghost when his or her voice sounds like an echo like you're hearing mine, remember this... you'll believe me sooner or later". Sarwar asks her,"Shall we go Niharika, Dr. Rajiv is waiting for us". Niharika is even more confused now but she goes with Sarwar.

After talking to Niharika Dr. Rajiv talks to Sawar alone. Dr. tells Sarwar probably due to her vision loss Niharika is depressed & she's imagining things. He advices Sarwar not to let her be alone for few days. Getting out from the chamber, Sarwar suggests Niharika to stay in his apartment for a couple of days, till she gets better. Confused & worried Niharika agrees reluctantly as she remembers the man at station's words "the guy with you really needs your help"..

Sarwar's feeling more awkward than Niharika in taking her to his home for obvious reasons, but his concern gets better of him n they arrive back to his house. Niharika hears the same voice and tries not to react, but this time hears an added statement "Go away right now, you can't stay here". She decides to find out more when Sarwar leaves in the morning and sits down in Sarwar's living room. Sarwar tells her "Don't worry, You can sleep in my room, I'll arrange a separate place for myself" and asks her hesitatingly,"Would you like to eat something? You must be hungry, and I need to give you the medicines Rajiv prescribed"


Niharika says " I am sorry to bother you like this.." Sarwar assures her saying " Its not a big deal. You just get better & things will be fine. As of now, what would you have? I stay alone, so mostly I eat out. I'll bring something for you.😊" Niharika says "I can cook myself..at home I did. I'll make something for myself. ..and you 🤔 😳 Surprised, Sarwar says " ermm..ohk" umm..I have a little work outside..so...I need to go out. I'll be back within an hour or two.. you sure you can manage? Niharika softly replies "hmm.." Sarwar says "see ya" and leaves, closing the door behind him. Niharika wonders where the kitchen is and tries to find her way to the kitchen by feeling the wall. At the end of the wall Niharika's hand touches a door.

She opens the door and gropes to find the kitchen, she manages to find eatables in the fridge, but then? She has to add the spices by smelling and tasting them, 😆 coz she doesn't know what is kept where. But she is still thinking about the voice though she doesn't hear it anymore. Just some minutes after she's done, Sarwar enters and asks her, "OMG? there's a power cut, how did you manage to work in the dark?" Niharika smiles slightly and says,"Sarwar you forgot right? I am having a power cut for life, its always the same for me." Sarwar realises his mistake and says Sorry, but Niharika tries to lighten his mood, "But that doesn't mean I can't feel too! Its really hot, and even the fan is not working 😉" They both laugh and sit down to eat.


Sarwar puts a bit of food in his mouth & surprisingly says " wow! the food is good..you cook well "😛 Niharika blushes at that & says "learnt from mom😳". They continue having their dinner... After dinner Sarwar takes Niharika to a room and says "you sleep here,I'll sleep at the living room" Niharika hesitates "No, No you.." .Sarwar says " I will be fine, goodnight" & leaves the room.
Its past midnight.. Niharika suddenly wakes up..the phone at the bedside table is ringing.Finding the phone she picks up the receiver- "hello.." Someone on the other side says "what are you doing here still now..go away..or else it wouldn't be good for you" Niharika is shocked as she recognized the voice..It was the maid's voice, who was there in Sarwar's house when Niharika had come in the morning..

"Who are you and.... and what do you want from me?", asks Niharika. "Your help."
Then the ghost appears as a woman in a white sari. Niharika then screams. The maid says: "Please dont shout. I'm a bhatakti hui aatma and I cant rest in peace until I have got my revenge. Sarwar killed my brother who lived here as a servant 10 years ago. Then I started working here as a maid to take revenge on Sarwar 3 years ago. One day Jyoti came here to meet Sarwar who just started acting in Jyoti at that time. That day I served some juice and I mixed poison in one of the glass but unfortunately Jyoti got the wrong glass and she died instead of Sarwar. Then Sarwar killed me when he found out that I was trying to kill him."
Niharika was shocked to hear that story. Then she said: "I'm ready to help you."

WE Have To Trick him he is very cunning. OK yeah but now? The Maid says how else you have to make him fall in love with you. Then kill him. but Niharika fainted and woke up an hour later. the maid was still there. WHAT? Fall in love with Sarwar but he is a killer. he will kill me. no I won't do it. the maid says OK fine. then don't do it. but if you won't kill him he will KILL YOU just like he killed Jyoti. Niharika finally says yes. I will do it. I will make him fall in love with me then I will kill him.☯️

Niharika convinces the maid's ghost and she goes away, but she is still thinking. Many thoughts come to her, If the maid really needs her help, why did she ask her to go? She may be lying because since she couldn't kill Sarwar in 3 years, she might make Niharika kill him. But why shall a dead person lie, what shall she get? And her story though a bit confusing seemed convincing and real too. Then she also remembers the words of the station ghost man, "The guy with you really needs your help". She remembers how well Sarwar had behaved with her, but also doubts him since all this could be deceptive. But what will he get by killing a blind girl? She decides to go with the flow and to make Sarwar have faith and trust in her, and make him spill out the beans. If he's innocent she may be able to help him, and if he's really the killer, she'll help the maid kill him. Then she realises its morning since Sarwar was knocking the door, asking her to come out for breakfast.

Niharika starts winning his trust & becomes a very near & dear frend of his, then one fine day Sarwar tells her that he had a maid who was in luv with him. he rejected her proposal then she had committed sucide. on hearing this, she gets shocked & starts thinking that why did the maid lie then or is sarwar lying 2 her right now??? suddenly she hears the same voice at the station that says "the maid can get sarwar only if he dies bcoz she's a ghost & can never get him until & unless he is a living person. that maid is lying 2 u so that u kill sarwar & she gets him after he dies. save him, save him!!! only u can save him bcoz only u can hear me!!!"

Niharika now knows there was no Jyoti or the maid's brother whom Sarwar killed, the maid wanted Niharika to kill him coz she herself couldn't. She decides she'll have to fool the maid's ghost because, she must have heard, Sarwar telling the story to Niharika, so when the maid comes again, She blurts out even before the maid does, "What does that jerk think? He can fool me? Thank you so much you told me all about him before hand, he was fooling me and wanted to use me and kill me the way he killed all 3 of you. I'll help you to kill him, what shall we do next?" The maid says in a relieved tone to Niharika, "You'll have to get married to him and try performing the marriage in the balcony, When it is done, push him from there, the same way I did, n I be satisfied" and she goes. Niharika tries to call the station-ghost for help because she doesn't want to do this. The ghost comes and tells her, "Get married to him, she wants him to die in the same way she died, because of the person he loves and from the balcony, if you marry him but don't kill him you'll be his protection as a wife is the greatest protection for her husband." Niharika is confused since it is a very big decision to take and she doesn't know whether to marry him or not?


She starts thinking, then gets mad and breaks a glass and cuts her hand. Then Sarwar comes in the room because of the noise he heard and sees her hand and asks her "What Happened? How come you cut your hand?" "oh that's nothing." He brings the first Aid Box and dresses her hand. Niharika is thinking to herself, "He is so nice I will marry him and save him form the Maid." ☯️

Sarwar leaves the room to get some fruits for Niharika. She is pretty disturbed and decides to listen to the radio to lighten her mood. And her favourite song is on air. She suddenly forgets everything and begins dancing, not knowing that Sarwar has returned and was seeing her. When the song's over, he suddenly says, "That's Great, you dance pretty good." Niharika is embarrassed and sits down. Sarwar asks her, "How come you can't see and dance so well? How did you learn?" She replies, "I wasn't blind since birth you see. It happened all of a sudden, 3 years back. One fine morning I woke up to know I couldn't see. My parents thought it was because of me watching TV and Doctors supported them too, but I know, Vision doesn't go away all of a sudden just because you watch too much TV" Sarwar asks her "When exactly did this happen?" "14th September 2007", she replied. Sarwar murmured to himself "God! That was the day when Shanti (Maid's name) committed suicided, and now......" he stops. He didn't want Niharika to know this and start relating her blindness to all this.
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Niharika starts thinking again i have to find out what really happened on September 14th 2007. So she leaves the house and goes out looking for answers.

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