FF:Andaaz Pt 33&Epilogue/Pg193&204 (22/6) - Page 15

Originally posted by: optimist

Wow, I have to give it to you. That really threw me completely off guard. Excellent. Didn't expect that twist. So Krish is her brother? That would throw all my crazy predictions out of the window unless there is still someone in Prachi's life but not as her husband. um...I guess you can think of it like that...Have to admit it that I would nt have guessed this twist. But why adopt a small child at this rie old age? you'll find out soon... They do not have any other children other than Prachi? no other children...my fault, should have mentioned that... Like your fiesty Prachi. So it was tit for tat is it (her throwing down of the ice cream I mean)?lol...yeh...I'm hoping its because she feels so much for Shreya that she cant like Milind...Good. Loved it. Waiting for more!

Will update tomorrow..Thanks for your comment hun...

Originally posted by: sailat

.... and much to Krish's surprise, took his ice cream and threw it on the floor. and Prachi thinks she isn't vindictive....haha!! lol...well its all that Mishra boy's fault...this update definitely resolved many matters. i am pretty sure the next couple MP moments will be filled with conflict. Count on them...Thanks, Rims, for the update!!:D

No probs hun!! hope you liked it!!!😊

Originally posted by: chituku

ok me late .luved the update sweety.even i didn't predict this twist krish being prachi's brother and her parents adopting him.luved the last part,prachi throwing ice cream well deserved MR.Mishra. how do u like that hahhaaahahahahaha😊

CHITSSSSSSSSSSSSS!! 😃 glad you liked it!!!hahaha

Rima..couple of thinks that i noticed when i read this part...(for some reason i liked this part more than Part -4)

1. The pain of loosing someone was conveyed beautifully in part 4. Esp the hatred or should i say the refusal on Milind's part to accept Shreya is absolutely what i would have thought of too.....I understand his feelings but above all else i felt empathy towards Shreya (A suggestion, i don't know if you have planned it or not..It would be great if you could write her thought process about her father)

2. Part - 5 - It was mostly what i expected. I guessed that Prachi was not married and it was not her son..but i did not think that Krish would be her brother (That was a damn suprise!). I know everybody said that the last part where she threw the icecream was good...but what i really liked was the subtleness of Prachi's character...for Example when Sukriti shared everything about her life...Prachi did not open up that much about herself...i liked that bit a lot!! the subtleness was really good!

👏 You must be suprised at my long comments for once..... 😆 The reason is that i just simply loved the last 2 parts.....

Originally posted by: panache

Rima..couple of thinks that i noticed when i read this part...(for some reason i liked this part more than Part -4) I agree with you...I like part 5 better, but part 4 I also liked just for Milind

1. The pain of loosing someone was conveyed beautifully in part 4. Esp the hatred or should i say the refusal on Milind's part to accept Shreya is absolutely what i would have thought of too.....I understand his feelings but above all else i felt empathy towards Shreya (A suggestion, i don't know if you have planned it or not..It would be great if you could write her thought process about her father) I hadn't thought of writing through Shreya if that makes sense but I will deff write more about her....will deff give it soem thought though...

2. Part - 5 - It was mostly what i expected. Hun...I've learnt from you...expect the unexpected....😉I guessed that Prachi was not married and it was not her son..but i did not think that Krish would be her brother (That was a damn suprise!). I know everybody said that the last part where she threw the icecream was good...but what i really liked was the subtleness of Prachi's character...for Example when Sukriti shared everything about her life...Prachi did not open up that much about herself...i liked that bit a lot!! the subtleness was really good! Thank you...it was really quiet hard for Prachi not to say anything...esspecially when Sukriti asks her questions...she has a lot to hide and she cant be as open as Sukriti even if she would like to...esspecially because she liked Sukriti and wants to spend time with her...eventually she knows she will tell her things...

👏 You must be suprised at my long comments for once..... 😆 The reason is that i just simply loved the last 2 parts....SURPRISED for sure but Pleasently so!! sure beats a "Nice part..when do you update next" fromy you!! I'm so glad you liked them...coming from you...means ALOT!!!.

THANK YOU so much!! for a second I though you hadn't even read the Fic..glad you have though and its weird for me because I'm obsessed with michi/shachi romantic stuff...I guess its good to try new things...😊

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

THANK YOU so much!! for a second I though you hadn't even read the Fic..glad you have though and its weird for me because I'm obsessed with michi/shachi romantic stuff...I guess its good to try new things...😊 - I do read yours, that to without fail....I mite forget to write a comment but rest assured that i read it always...😃

so prachi was never married? i wonder what happened to the man in her life? waiting for the next part to find out aobut prachi's past! great update 😃

Rima this was an unexpected twist! Krish is Prachi's brother? And Prachi is not even married...But Im quite sure that there is or was someone in her life, but for some reason he went away...And she's still waiting for him...It is his phone calls that she expects and his number that she keeps dialling..Now what I feel is that Michi are going to meet each other more often and fall in love...And at the nick of time, this man in Prachi's life will turn up, leaving her in dilemma...But then Im sure she'll choose Milind! Opti too had a similar scenario in mind...Just that she thought Prachi was also married....
I loved this update!
Will be waiting for the next one!!

Hey Rima, great update. I was pleasantly surprised to read that Krish is Prachi's brother. Very subtly done. I'm just wondering about Prachi's past... I think that the person Prachi keeps thinking of is Krish's father who was someone special to her. I was going to say Neev but then i think you might leave him nameless.

Originally posted by: kim02

so prachi was never married? i wonder what happened to the man in her life? waiting for the next part to find out aobut prachi's past! great update 😃

Yup, Prachi was never married..😊...Um...you'll find out slowly what happened to that guy....Thank you!