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Posted: 17 years ago

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yes, pari do continue.... 👏 👏 👏

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darkness4ever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

hey pari.. this first time me logging into this site.. i was refered by one of my friend.. and i am huge fan of kayamat and i was just checking out stuff and i begin reading your ff.. which sounds extremely good... i think u should continue writing coz it's good and i mean.. it really... 👏 however, plz try not ruin the story coz i am just a new here and i am starting this by reading your ff so i have hopes... well... waiting for the next part... keep up the excellent work.....

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pari911

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: darkness4ever
hey pari.. this first time me logging into this site.. i was refered by one of my friend.. and i am huge fan of kayamat and i was just checking out stuff and i begin reading your ff.. which sounds extremely good... i think u should continue writing coz it's good and i mean.. it really... 👏 however, plz try not ruin the story coz i am just a new here and i am starting this by reading your ff so i have hopes... well... waiting for the next part... keep up the excellent work.....

thanks for liking it... and let's hope i won't let your expectation down & infact any other members who read it.... i'll try posting the next part fast....

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pari911

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Ayesha and Neev eagerly waiting for an answer from Milind and Prachi.
Part 2
After a long pause and rolling of eyes on thought of working with Milind, Prachi finally says
"Hey since you say it, I will help you guys out."
"And you, Milind?" asked Neev
"Ok, chill dude, I'll do it for you" Milind finishes his words and utters to himself "Even if that means tolerating Prachi"
The utterance of words was heard by Prachi, Neev and Ayesha so everybody asks together "Did you say something?" In a great shock, Milind replies "Oh, me no no of course not I didn't say anything."
"Ok, so listen guys. I'll send you all the details of the how the project should go and if you have any questions just ask me. It would involve you taking care of the setting up sound system, send email through portal of our management department to all students, deciding on the food arrangements and refreshments. The sales of tickets, accounts, free admission to permanent members and etc… All the details will be on the PDF file that I would send you. I don't think you two will have any problems with it, it is very straight forward. And the work you will have to team up and separate and work together to make event successful." Finished Neev after a pause continues as he got no responds from Prachi and Neev "Are you guys clear? Tell, me if you guys are fine with it because I won't be here for next two week, I will be in U.K."
"Oh you never told me you are not going to be here" interpreted Prachi
"Ok listen, I got to go really fast I have to go to the mall, I was suppose to meet Sukriti there so talk to you guys later" said Ayesha and went off hurriedly.
"Yes, that's why I am giving you two this responsibility" said Neev
"Oh perfect, I am going to tolerate her for next two weeks" said Milind to himself
"Did you say something?" asked Prachi
"NO I didn't"
"Stop talking to yourself."
"Why do you care if I talk to myself, at least I am not talking to you. Stop having problems with what I do because it's no of your business."
"Correction, is needed here, I don't care what you do, I personally, wouldn't even think about you if I had nothing to do so don't feel special. However, when ever you are around me you don't talk to yourself and behave decent, do you understand me Mr. Milind Sharma?" Prachi finished what she had to say and ran off without even giving reply to Neev who was about to talk to her and Milind more on the upcoming Garba and Bhangra Event.
"Milind, listen. Wait up man" called Milind who started walking furiously after listening to Prachi.
"Man, I don't if I could do this for you. I mean it's alright, but you know I don't get along with Prachi. I hope you understand yaar. It's just…" Milind didn't finish his sentence so Neev says "Ok, do you mind working with Ayesha and Prachi so you wouldn't be working with Prachi alone but also with Ayesha. From what I understand, you can get along with Ayesha Right?"
"whatever, man I frankly don't care. And I don't want to work in it. Why don't you tell Ayesha and Prachi to work together. I mean you don't have problem with that right?"
"Let me see, if Ayesha agrees then I would bail you out alright"
Neev, starts punching numbers into his cell phone, 636….. The phone started ringing and ringing and ringing ….. after a long time, Ayesha picks up the phone and "Tera problem kya hai? Stop bothering me."
"Listen, Ayesha. It's me Neev, I am in trouble, and you need to help me. Tumhe Prachi ke saath Garba aur Bhangra event ko sambhala na hoga. You would be working with Prachi. Please say yes, you are my only hope, in return I would do anything. I promise." Finished Neev waiting for Ayesha to reply.
"Hu.mmm… let's see. I thought Milind was helping Prachi, why do you need me then? Plus, I am handling way too much load of ISA so how can you expect that I would say yes. Sorry, Neev you need to find someone else who could help Prachi."
"Because, little darling, Milind does not want to work with Prachi"
"Oh I was the last person you called because your other friends would not agree to help you. Am I right?"
"Ayesha please, don't hang up. I am sorry, plus, I would do anything for you if you agree to it" said Neev
"Ok then, you are promising me that you would do whatever I would like you to do."
"Sure meri maa"
"Ok, then count on me and please don't worry, this event would be spectacular because Ayesha kar rahi hai."
Both hang up and Neev says to Milind "Hey listen man, you don't worry. Ayesha agreed to work with Prachi"
"Great! So see you later" said Milind
"Wait up,"
"Now, what do you want?"
"Can you help Ayesha and Prachi if they need any help I mean, you know just like taking care of the crowd or in any security thing… such sort of thing"
"Ok fine, fine.. tum to mere piche hi pada gaye"
"Perfect, I have no worries now" said Neev.
Neev and Milind both went into their own direction.

Neev in his bedroom.
Neev talking to himself "Perfect, ISA is settled, my bags are packed and only thing is left is to call Prachi and let her know that Milind is not working with her anymore, Oh she would be delighted." Neev starts dialing her phone number.

Prachi in her bedroom, working on her project hears the phone ring so she picks up the phone "Hello?"
"Hi" says Neev
"Who?" asks Prachi
"It's me Neev, kya yaar tum bhi mujhe nahi pehchanti ho?"
"Oh, I couldn't recognize your voice"
"I hope you don't forget me in two weeks while I am away"
"Of course not, I usually, don't tend to forget my friends."
"Really?"
"Yes, really. You don't believe me. Why do you think I am helping you?"
"Let me take a wild guess, because you love me and can't see me in state of worriness."
"Neev, please, stop kidding and come to the point." While Prachi started blushing.
"The reason behind my call is that I am leaving in 3 hours and I have sent you the PDF file which explains all the stuff that needs to be done and how you should go about so please check your mail."
"Ok, is that all?" asked Prachi
"And one more thing, Milind is not working with you anymore, Ayesha says she will try and help"
"Ok, what happened? Did Milind quit because of me?" asked Prachi
"I don't know, if you want to know you could call him and ask. But one more thing Milind would be at the event looking over things you know for security and safety purposes. I hope it's fine with you." finished Neev
"Ok, I don't have any problem with him but I think he holds problems that's why he quit."
"Ok baba, stop fight about it."
"Anyhow, happy voyage" said Prachi
"Thanks, by the way are you going to miss me?" asked Neev
"Neev, what if dad listens to this?"
"So you are going to miss me right?" Neev started to play and fool with Prachi
"Wrong, no… I am going to miss you. Is that what you wanted to hear?" Prachi played along with him.
"Oh you smart lady, you are not going to miss me. Well, I hope I find some girl in U.K. I hope the girls there understands Neev's feelings…"
"Neev," now Prachi started to get irritated
"what?"
"Go you will be late and of course be safe"
"ok fine, I will hang up"
"bye then take care"
"Bye Prachi"

Neev and Prachi both disconnects the phone and simile for the friendship that they hold. No one can live without each other.

Prachi is thinking about her life. Prachi ponders upon the relationship that she shares with Neev and how she views Milind and the rest of the world around her at this point of her life.
Oh Neev, why do you have to go now? I mean I took this responsibility thinking that you would be here but instead you are going, leaving me all alone. I don't know how this event will turn out but I hope I don't let myself down. Thank God at least Ayesha is helping out. How can Ayesha manage all this things together? I hope Ayesha gives me hand at it. Well, she said she will so I think she won't break the promise. But I wonder why Milind bailed out like that. Did he want to work on the event all by himself or he did not want to work with me. Whatever it might be I will try finding out the reason behind it. I don't think I should do that. I mean I don't care about him. And why should I care for him? Although, I don't see any reason for him to do such thing. I mean in Highschool, he was a fine with me and all that. All of sudden since this last 2 years something has gone wrong with him. He does not even listen to me. We keep on fighting to each other without any reason. God help me. I hope everything turns out be ok.
Suddenly, there was a knock on the door. Prachi shook out of her thoughts and started walking towards the door.
Coming up next:
Ayesha and Prachi making arrangements for the event. Neev is in U.K worrying about his I.S.A. Milind's irritation with Prachi and his thoughts…..

Edited by pari911 - 17 years ago

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Ganga

@monu45

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

hey nice going of the story..... i like the fact that we actually get to see prachi's diary. in way that's how it sounds like her thoughts.... that we get to see her view of the world.... nice .....

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Pori

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

hey Pari
just read ur ff.. its marvellous.. gr8 work.. keep it up and ofcourse cont. soon

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pari911

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Coming up next:
Ayesha and Prachi making arrangements for the event. Neev is in U.K worrying about his I.S.A. Milind's irritation with Prachi and his thoughts…..

Part 3

Prachi was in her room, trying to study for the Economic quiz tomorrow morning. The telephone rang and Prachi picks up the phone and answers it "hello!"
"Hey Prachi, what's up yaar? This is Ayesha"
"Oh, hey"
"So listen up tomorrow afternoon, we need to finish all the junk for the ISA you know what I mean. We need to finish it in advance because you know I have so much work load and on top that I have to do this. So tell me when are you going to be free?"
"well, see I have quiz tomorrow at 12 and before that I have my lecture.. 8 to 11am. So I'll be free from 1:00. How about we will take lunch together in the caf and start working on wards?"
"Sounds good to me. So see you tomorrow."
"Listen, do you know why might Milind did not want to help out in this ISA. What happened?"
"Girl chill, cool it yaar, woh Milind na thoda crooked hai. You know what I mean, he does not think straight, so if I were you I would not worry about it."
Finished Ayesha
"Ok Ayesha, thanks for your help I'll see you tomorrow" Prachi did not want to continue the conversation further.
"ok yaar, take care see ya." Ayesha hung up the phone on the other side.

The next day, Prachi is exhausted sitting in a three hour lecture and stressed out about the economic mini quiz. She does not feel like setting up the ISA event. Prachi's quiz was terrible. She was not sure how she performed in the quiz. She was upset, and there were responsible piled up on top of her. Slowly, she begins to walk towards the caf and in between gets collided with someone, making her binder and textbook fall on the floor.
"What's heck?"
"Sorry"
Prachi bends down to collect her material while continuing the talk with the person she has collide with.
"Man, can't people see where they are going?"
"hey I said I am sorry now chill ok" Now, Prachi looks up to see the recoqnized voice. And to her surprise it was Milind.
"You?" screamed Prachi.
"Yo man, chill I was not trying to kill you. It was an accident.
"Tum? Tum dekh kar nahi chale sakete ho?"
"why mein theka laga rakha hai, dekh kar chale ne ka?"
"You should?"
"I don't want to talk to you"
"Neither do I" said Milind
"Fine, then just go away"
"Who wants to stay here and listen to your crap?"
Having poured out all their anguish towards each other they both headed on the opposite direction. Finally, Prachi reaches the caf, and sees that Ayesha has not arrived yet.
She calls Ayesha from her cell phone but it's unreachable, in frustration, she run toward the office of ISA and starts preparing for the decorations and arrangements. She was angry, hungry, without any sleep, and she was doing everything on her own. Ayesha back fired when she has so much trust on her. She was half crying from inside but she wanted to finish this promise which she made to Neev.
Finally, after few hours she knew what she was doing for the decorations. The equipment was ready so she takes all of it in one cart and starts heading towards the ball room where the huge events occur.

Prachi reaches the ball room; she opens it with her security card and enters leaving the door open. She lays out all the material for decoration on the floor and starts decorating. For the artificial flowers which almost looks so real that she picked one of it and pull it near her nose to smell, so she simile on her childness act. As she was doing her work, there was a shadow on the door which she kept it open. The shadow came forward slowly and stared at her with astonishment and simile. She arranges flowers in a plate for the show.
The next were ballons which she gathered all and tied it together. She climbed to the stairs and tried tying to the one of the hooks. As she tried lift her arm, her pants got caught between her shoes, suddenly as she didn't realized she fell off the stairs …………………………………………. As she realized that she was……………………………………………

Edited by pari911 - 17 years ago

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pari911

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

dear reader.. please post your comments, concerns ... likes and dislikes.. thanks.............

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darkness4ever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

hi pari..u updated after long time.. but still .. thanks for posting it... well next time post it fast.........
it was good update..however,, short...wonder.. who this shadow is? ... hope u have some romantic scene stored for us... .
well keep it up..........

plz post long update next time..
otherwise nice job 😉