Breathing ... (Unusual Video Dedication)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome gal..... could you now make one from Prachi's perspective too? 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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You know Kit, I think am done with mixes, until some new scenes come up!

And for Prachi's perspective... when I feel it from within I will surely make...right now... nothing's on my mind on those lines.. 😊 Will surely keep it in mind that you asked for it! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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^ That's ok 👏

BTW, did you pen the lines before each video mix?
Edited by krangara - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: krangara

^ That's ok 👏

BTW, did you pen the lines before each video mix?



Yes , all of them.... 😊 Aww, I should have mentioned it eh in the post.. that they are copyrighted! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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O.k..Sareeta...Here i go again..This one is unique... 👏

But this was not what i was expecting at all(but in a good way though)..I had imagined something entirely different.😳.May be b'cos i was expecting something along the same lines as the previous one...But this was really good...very different but something i really enjoyed watching again and again...(I watched it more than a few times to get the lyrics 😳 )

The starting was awesome the music and the scenes of shaboo walking around..with that gait of his....perfect for the music.. I loved the begining...

But my Favorite part is below,

The lyrics that really suited the scene according to me atleast are the below lines"I am hanging on every word you say ..And even if you don't want to speak tonight..That's alright, alright with me" when he has arms raised to call out to her but then he doesn't.....so well suited for those lines... Man...i wish i was there when he acted out that scene...I will become his fan for life..😳


when he has tears in his eyes and the lines..."want nothing more than to sit outside Heaven's door and listen to you breathing Is where I want to be" are playing i want to go and console shaboo so much...i feel his tadap for his love...and his pain...perfect once again....

Oh! Man! when he is drinking.....Sareeta....i would not mind being the one to console him during this time...the lines are so suited for his mindset that you cannot fault it at at all.."past the shadows Of my mind into the truth" those lines are realling haunting...

Another one of your superb creations but i would say truthfully that i liked and enjoyed this one too but loved the last one... 😳

👏



Edited by panache - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wokay...im back...u just cant seem to get rid of me can u ?? muhahhaahaha

taliyaaan taliyaan....this is for u madame...i will now istart..this song sounds vaguely familiar....i must have hrd it befor (looks shocked)...and let me tell u...i think this song suited his emotions perfectly..how i think this happens i will state in the following steps 🤣:

1. when he starts off on the stairs...pausing each time..as if looking for some sign of her..but not finding it...trudges along...then pauses again...shaayad abhi ho. then comin to the room to find it empty....all the while trying to say where are you ??

2.trying to find his way back to sanity again...this seems so apt...driven insane by her then by lookin for her..waiting for her...and doesnt know what he'll do when he gets theres...so true...cos shes not there.

this line i really loved...
take a breath and hold on tight...spin around one more time.
i dont know why....but it just made my heart leap into my mouth...i think it was the hold on tight and spin around one more time....

when u said i'd see another face of tht drive with this song..i was wondering...gussa hi hoga...but at a diff level...but this time when i saw that part..it was sadness...!

3. this part i fell off my chair...do u kno wht ur doin to the floor of my house ??

when he puts out his arm....and it goes like cause i am hanging to every word you say...and even if you dont want to speak tonight its okay....i died...

the pain in his eyes...complimented by the lyrics (btw hes still holding his suitcase =) )

to listen to you breathing..thats where i want to be...and hes looking with tears in his eyes....and he then shuts his eyes and it echoes...where i want to be..thats right...
the words listen to you breathing....uffff....it is totally milind...

fundoo coordination (reason im using fundoo is i no longer want to use brilliant).

4. then comes the most awesome verse...now this was what made me truly feel that its next week and he knows prachi didnt betray him...im going to quote

"I'm looking past the shadowsOf my mind into the truth and
I'm trying to identify,
The voices in my head,God which one's you?"

this is what it will be naa...when the truth hits him...bam....
shadows of my mind...and hes drinking...cursing himself (each time i see this drinking scene it evokes a diff emotion in me.) last time it was like how could she do this to me...now its like....why didnt i listen to her ?


Let me feel one more time
What it feels like to feel alive
And break these calluses off me,One more time"

just come back to me...what its like to feel alive..(officially a corspe me)...one more time...pleading...one more time....haiiiiiiii

5. now the next three verses are the same...but this time instead of heavens door...he says...i want nothin more than to sit outside YOUR door and listen to you breathing.

u've picturised thts alright to him crying at the table..as if to say...thts alright...but im still in pain...blew me away.

6.i dont want a thing from you...and he takes a violent swig of his bottle of appy...the pitch matches his actions...mujhe kuch nahi chahiye...just bloody come back.
and his flitting around the room to i bet ur tired of me...hai..this scene is like anokha treasure...
and he picks him self to assert...i just want to be here now. amma...take a bow.

7. the second last listen to you breathing...thats where i want to be...and he runs his hand over his face...*hoooting*

then paavam is drinking...:(
and then standing on the stair case singing thats where i want to be...im in love with this line.
last four scenes where hes drinking shows so much of his pain...come back aunty...!!! and he runs his hand thru his hair....im blind now !

i think this became a lil long...loll....hope u liked my comments....i loved this video mix...the songs brilliant ur work is brilliant

Edited by apapap - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sareeta,

Got a chance to see the mix just now... Its awesome 👏 ..

'Listen to u breathing is where I want to be' is just too much.One beautiful line and yet so painful .. Dont know how he's gonna survive with out his girl near him ...

Thanks hun
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Anju
Edited by lvsgm - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: lvsgm

Sareeta,

Got a chance to see the mix just now... Its awesome 👏 ..

'Listen to u breathing is where I want to be' is just too much.One beautiful line and yet so painful .. Dont know how he's gonna survive with out his girl near him ...

Thanks hun
😃

Anju


Thank you soooo much Anju! That line is awesome aint it ... its what made me wanna do the mix first! Nickelback and Lifehouse have been my favs and Shabbir has been a fav since NB days and I jus couldnt resist making a vid mix with both! 😆
I know after the scene on Thrusday, its gonna be painful to see Milind without his pari beside him! Oh my heart goes out to him and to his angel!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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@panache aka Sangeeta - Hey, thanks a ton! You know , after reading your comments about expectations, I was kinda baffled and I do remember PMing you as well! 😊 It wasnt as much the fact that you expected something diff, but more of did I disappoint and I am glad to know that I didnt ! Phew thatz a relief!

I know Fallin' would your fav and why not...! It was my favorite... it was like it had my soul in it... when I made it ... it was like my idea of what a man and his love for a woman was! Totally... and I jus loved the whole idea of how he wishes for her !

Am so glad you enjoyed the mix! The lyrics ... about being outside heavens door and hear her breathe...was the clincher... I jus knew I was doing the vid mix on this man Shabbir... the moment I heard the song! The song has been a favorite but ... when I heard it this time.... I jus couldnt resist another vid mix! 😊

@apapap aka Priya - Aah , my dahlin fellow Shabbir Pankhi! Good to see back in swing! All comp problems seem to have been put to rest eh?!
Boy it wasnt until I read the essay did I realize that I was missing the essays so terribly... I re-read it like about 7-8 times .. U know how I am! 😆
Trust you dahlin to dissect ( ok, I jus am at a loss for another word) to my video and analyze it and I love to read your interpretations and most importantly your reactions to each of them... and tell u what ... I jus wait for the time when U say u fell off your chair! I jus love the vid mix having that effect on you! 😆
Thanks a ton babe for writing in that absolutely lovely comment , with such patience !! Its makes my effort seem in a strange way worthwhile.. that ppl notice!

Thank you everyone who watched the video and related to it! 😊

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