FF chap 3 :: NP and MA path to love Pg. 2

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heya guys this is my first FF ever.. so pls do comment and tell me how it is.. oh and i've added a few new characters.. lemme introduce you to them

rani ~ prachi's friend
rahul ~ neev's friend
everyone else is the same oh and forgot someone our very own MA!! well nothing special about them.. (jks)

Abhieshek ~ miland's friend
Sukriti ~ ayesha's friend and miland's sis.. (sry, couldnt think of anyone! so i thought that ayesha and sukriti are pretty good friends.. so yehh)

anyways here we go.. (oh NP-MA havent said how they feel yet)

prachi, prachi.. Ma prachi kahan haii? neev asked premlata entering the shah mansion.

neev wo apni dost rani kia hay

okay ma jab tak may prachi kay kamray may intezar karta hoon.

neev! neev! premlata shouted but neev had already went upp..

neev upstairs
Hmm.. yeh prachi bhi na.. neev sitting on her bed.. he get's bored so he tries calling his friend rahul didnt asnwer the phone so he strarted searching prachi's room.

yehh prachi bhi na bohat boring hai.. he looks in her drawer and finds a book.. yehh kia hai? maine kabhi nahi dekha? he opens it and read it..

MA (chawl)
Miland tu yahan kia kar raha hai?

kuch nahi.. lo yeh apna kahna ka! sukriti kehti hai ka tu kahna nahi kahta.. she throws the plate on his lap and walks away..

miland holds her hand... miland mera haath chor.. ayesha says angrily.. miland then makes himself eat wid her hands.. (sry.. just missed it soo muchh.. saw it in today's episode..😛)

rani's house
rani abb mudje jana hoga mainay mama say kaha tha kay may jaldi aajoun gi..

okay prachi bye..

shah mansion..
neev read the book 'mudge nahi pata yeh kyun hua lakin mudge lagta hay kay mai neev to chanay lagi hoon..

kyun? kyun? shayad wo bhi mudge! nahi prachi aisa maat socho.. nahii.. hum baas dost hain.. lakin may prachi shah neev shergill say pyarr karti hoon.. bohot,,!'

just then prachi enters her room.. and NP look at each other..

will NP be one? will neev accept prachi? what happens b/w MA? read more 2find out.. i hope u guys liked it it was my first FF ever.. pls comment and should i continue..? 😳 😳

~*~ CHAP 2 ~*~

Recap: neev read's prachi's book, and prachi just walked in.

hi neev, mama nay bataya kay tun yahan ho!

she sees the book in his hands and is dead shocked.!

prachi yeh kia hay? yeh sab tumne kyun likha? orachi tum meri sirf achi dost ho aur kuhc nahi.. may tumse kabhi nahi pyaar kar sakh tha. and leaves.. (sry guys.. u must be heartbrokenn.. but if u know how die hard NP and MA fan i am u would stillread this 😆 lol)

poor prachi is heartbroken she lies on her bed and cries wid chaha humne tujhe 😛

[[chawl]]
miland abb mudge jana hoga!

ayesha leaves and comes home! ma tu nai kahna kaya?

ayesha, ayesha merainder ka phone aya.. ayesha wid tears in her eyes runs outside.. miland sees her and goes after her..

ayesha, ayesha kia hua? kuch nahi miland abhi tu mudge akela chor day.. AYESHA BATAO!! ayesha slaps miland and runs away..

neev is walking on the path (remember neev is a big flirt, going back to d old days) he sees some girl and starts flirting wid her but instead of seeing the girl's face he sees prachi's face and is confused.. he goes 2 some other girl and also sees prachi's face.. he sits on d bench and thinks to himself..

kyun? prachi ka chehra kyun meray maann? kia may bhi prachi ko chanay lago hoon? neev is confused about his feelings towards prachi.

The next day
ayesha koi door pay knock kar raha hai shayad mera inder aagay.

MAA! baaas kar tumhara inder kabhi nahi ane wala. may inder our uskay parivaar say nafrat karti hoon.

ayesha goes and opens the door it's miland. miland tu abhi yaha say ja! miland starts using his abusive ways on ayesha she pushes him away.. miland sorry may baas naraaz thi our tu mera pecha nahi chor raha tha.. then she tells him everything..

shopping mall (prachi ayesha @ d same store)
uhh.. abb bata sakh thi hain kay sarees kahan hai? prachi asked the owner of d store the owner tell her and prahci leaves..

ayesha walksin d store and asks the same thing as prachi that time prachi was paying for her saree.. the owner tells her ayesha that their all sold out for d week and says yeh madam ne akri leyli.

ayesha feels sad and walks away just then prachi says..

excuse me madam agar app ko yeh saree chahiya to u can buy it..nahi theekh hai tu lay lay..

but prachi consists and ayesha buys it..

hiim prachi shah..

ayesha is shocked.. shayad yehh inder ki beti.. nahi yeh koi our hogi.

hi im ayesha sareen..

will ayesha know that prachi is actually her siste? and will neev tell prachi he feels the same way? find out next time..

well thats it for now.. will ocntinue l8er.. pls comment 😳

Edited by animerocks - 18 years ago

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Mages thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue yaar..
in kayamath both jodis break and hardly any scenes
but in your fan fic is all about our jodis NP and MA
just continue yaar
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome fanfic!!! 👏 its nice to read NP and MA scenes nowadays 😳 since both jodis are broken up 😭 cont. soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good starting.. plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aww.. thnax so much guys..

will continue really soon! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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k guys.. .it's updated..

Edited by animerocks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no one else is reading? only 3 ppl..?

come on ppl is it that bad..? 😕 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is really very awesum yaar 👏 pls continue it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatima4ever

it is really very awesum yaar 👏 pls continue it

awwww... thanx so much fatima.. u made my day 😊 😊

k will continue very soon! 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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~*~ CHAPTER 3 ~*~

recap: ayesha prachi meet @ d mall

PA exiting d mall

ti akeli aaye?

haan.
chalo may chor deti hhon
koi baat nahi
tu ne mudge apni saree di to abb may tu ko ghar chor nahi sakh thi?

acha, theekh hay lakin tumhe meray ghar pay ana hoga.
prachi mudge jana hoga, zid maath karna.
acha. thanx ayesha, mai chalti hoon okay bye

prahci goes inside and sees neev there
hi neev prachi goes running upstairs to her room wid tears in her eys remembering d other day.

neev follows..

prachi mudge tumse kuch kehna hai..
neev jo bhi tumne kehna tha wo tum ne keh dia.. abb kia baki hai?

orachi suno tho but prachig oes in her room and lock d door. premlata sees all this..

neev kia hua?
kuch nahi ma mudge prachi say kuch kehna tha lakin wo to meri baad nahi sun rahi..kuch karo na ma pls?

acha neev mai kuch karti hoon tum abhi yahan sa jao.

ayesha going home
prachi shah, prachi shah. yeh prachi shah shayad inder shah ki beti to nahi..? nahi aisa nahi ho sakh tha.

while on d road ayesha is thinking about all this she accidently bump into a car. (it neev)

ehh, tumhe nazar nahi aata?
uh.. sorry. ayesha realizes her mistake and leave..
yehh ajj khal ki ladkian bhi na 😕

ayesha reaches d chawl

ayesha, ayesha?
kia hai sukriti
bhaiya ki tabiyat kharab bohat kharab hay
kyun kia hua? ayesha is scared, trembling.. she runs to see miland..
MIIIIILLLLLANNNNNDDDDD!!!!!! tu theekh to hay na?
ayesha agar mudge kuch hua to...
miland tujhe kuch nahi hoga
ayesha i ---- love--- love--- you---
miland?! he faints.. 😕

miland outh! outh! ayesha screams tears running down her cheeks her face all red.. they take him to d hospital.. ayesha styas at d chawl.

nahi mai miland say pyaar nhi karti our kabhi kar bhi nahi sakh thi. jo meray ma k saath hua wo meray saath.. nahi miland aisa nahi kar sakh tha lakin phir bhi,,

shah mansion
prachi, prachi darwasa kholo.. mai hoon neev chala gaya.. prachi opens d door and premlata goes in.

prachi kia hua?
mama jab neev yahan aaya tha to.. she tells premlata everything..
prachi neev ko tumse kuch baat karni thi, lakin tum nay..
mama baas.. mudge kuch nahi suna..

dekh prachi jo baat neev ko kehna hai wo shayad tumhari zindagi ko badal day.. prachi is confused..

miland is really sick.. ayesa is confused to trust miland or not and prachi doesnt know who 2 listen 2 her heart or her mom? find out next time. pls comment 😳
Edited by animerocks - 18 years ago

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