Dard Ka Rishta - Note on pg 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dard Ka Rishta - One new Path of life

Hi everyone, this is the first time I'm trying writing a story here. I've been reading all the great stories here and thought I might try writing one of my own while we wait for Milinds recovery in physical injuries and his self respect injuries so I decided to write a small fan-fic about Prachi and Milind. The first part will start with a small one year leap were Ayesha is send to jail for murder of Swarti Kapoor. After Ayeshas court case Neev started to drink non-stop in the memorises of Prachi while Milind is out of country for business meeting for past three months while Prachi is handling Milinds business in Mumbai in his absents. The details I shared with all you is just to set up the scene a little and is there is any type of concern them please don't hesitate to ask any question about this fiction. Also my writing will be mostly done in english because I am not that great at writing hindi.

Part - 1

Scene One: Outside the Courthouse / Neev at a bar

Three female officer handcuffs Ayesha in front of her husband and family while Ayesha keeps on screaming that she is innocent but no one would believe her not even her own love Milind because when she was arrested for the first time Milind was at the crime spot. Even there she tried to convinces Milind that she is innocent but he didn't believe her anymore because with his own eyes he saw Ayesha choking Swarti. Since that day on Milind stayed away from her and now she is all alone in jail even my own husband Neev didn't try to help me because he found out from my own friend Pia that I blackmailed Prachi to marry him.

" Please remove all your jewelleries? "

Pissed off Ayesha took off all her jewelleries than changed into the prisoner's clothing afterward she is on her way to cell number 809.

" Waiter, please give me larger beer "

While the waiter was making Neev's drink Neev notice one of his college friend dancing with Prachi's sister Sowmya. After Neev had his drink he started walking to her (Soemya's direction) when he bumped into someone.

Scene Two: Prachi is waiting for her client Mr. Kabir Khan

Six hours left before her client arrivals for the meeting while Prachi keeps on rechecking over each details on the file. Prachi was busy reading the file when her cell phone starred to ring out loud, finally she picked up her cell.

"Hello, Prachi"

"Hi, Milind"

"So how is your perpetration is going?"

"Milind, I am not sure I can handle a huge project like this without your guides."

"Prachi, I have full faith in you so don't be nervous"

"It's easy for you to say but for me its hard"

"When things get tougher there will be lots of complications"

Knock … Knock

"One sec Milind

Please come in"

"Milind, I will talk to you latter on"

"Bye know"

"Same here but do take care and all the best for your new project in London"

Prachi puts down her cell phone than say sorry to her client for the wait and now both of them started the meeting.

Scene Three: Unstable Neev walked on the street

Each step Neev took were full of danger cause one hand he had a beer bottle even though he was already drunk, but while only one face keep on flashing in his mind.

Neev fell down by his old house and started to whisper to himself in the rain while in the background played a sad version of Kayamath.

Neev talking to himself "Everything is over now because who I use to love is far away in someone else's arm and today I am all alone in this world. When I use to tell her that no one can come between us, but I was wrong first Ayesha came in-between us and now Milind is there like her bodyguard."

Your's Truly,

Radha

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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice yaar...
a mix of kasamh se and khwaish
piya the idiot is in kasamh se
kabir khan is in khwaish

by the way you see khwaish i love afreen yaar she is so beautiful..kabir-afreen jodi is so nice
no comments on pia i hate her like hell

but fan fic is awesome...very nice sad for my neev all drunk on loosing love and sad ayesha in jail for not doing a crime....




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Posted: 18 years ago
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yayyy one more MP fanfic... i liked the starting dear 👏 👏 👏 ... do keep posting scenes sooon....

One request, dont make Neev a devdas yaaa, please make N fans also happy... do something for him tooo.. 😉

Will be waiting for the next parts...keep going..

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! Great start!!
The start is really awesome!
But..Neev is all drunk and sad of loosing his love..and its so sad..
but fan fic is awesome...very nice sad for my neev all drunk on loosing love...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I enjoyed reading the first part please do continue

Your Truly,
Mikey
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow its really very nice yaar
i loved d storyline 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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first part was really nice dear.. bring some one nice for neev too.. He deserves to be happy most.. he has been tossed sround too much...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow... nice start dear.. Im happie that there is no misunderstandin between Miland and Prach [from what it seems by readin] but sad for Neev.. even he deserves to be happie 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I will continue soon as I get time from skool work. Lekin I promise that you all will love the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well written for a starter dear...will wait for an update... 😊

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