FALLING FOR YOU short ff last part PG 39 (12/11) - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: may268

9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1,000000000000😳😆

becoming so impatient to read the next part😃
Not good😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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(A small information, planned to write long ff but yesterday got sponsor form , will be busy in my immigration processing, so will end in few more parts with only michi scenes, hope u like it, once again thnks a lot for all ur sweet comments)

Part 2

Mean while in Milind's house:

Blue for milind mother premlatha, mishraji died two year before

Red for milind

Morning mom,

Morning beta, when did u return last night?

By 12 I think

What? By 12 how many times I have to tell u, your father had earned enough money for u and your grandchildren, then whom you are working for!

Mom, please you know about me, I want to make a mark like papa, in business.

Ok, leave that, do you think about your future life partner

Mom, please not again!

What not again, I have been telling you about this for past six months, and your are not even listening to me, see I am getting old and I too want to meet some holy places by giving my responsibility to someone, and your not taking care of yourself, so better choose your partner yourself, or I am sorry beta other than this no other option, you have to marry mallika!

What! Mallika!!! your friend's daughter, no way!

This is final milind (she left the dinning room)

Milind arrived office fully tormented,the important meeting too called off in the last minute. Getting more furious, he made a call to Ali his only college friend and business partner.

Blue- Ali, Red-Milind


What happened buddy, you sound upset!

As usual mom, started persuading me to marry, today it gone worse and she ended up by asking me to marry mallika.

What problem in this (ali sounded naughtyly)

Be serious idiot, I told you about her before. She is nothing than a grown up child. How can I marry her?,

Then,how about the other girls in your relations,

Oh God!, don't talk about them, all are rich spoiled brats, I need a girl who cares me and loves me and not thinking about how to spend the day in clubs, parties and beauty parlours.

Ok, ok I understand your problem, then better find someone like that,

Ali! You know about me, and I have crossed that age dammit!

Yeah! Yeah! U silly book worm, look at me loved a girl in college and got settled with son and daughter with her,And u wasted most of the time in library, seminars and presentation in colleges and after that in business, meetings and etc, you boring person, who'll dare to come near you!

Ali please! help me buddy,

OK will think and tell, till then don't brake your head.

In the mean time, Prachi arrived milind's office and knocked the door. Having a serious conversation with ali in phone, milind ignored the knock.

Getting furious, Prachi opened the door and walked in forcefully, which made her to slip due to carpet, hearing the opening sound of the door milind turned towards the door and seeing her falling he came forward to hold prachi, but prachi's force made him to loose his balance and fall flat on the floor with prachi on the top of him, prachi felt his cheeks under her lips ,she made a fast attempt to get off from him not realizing milind still holding her by waist, which made her to fall once again on him landing her lips in other cheeks, milind stared straight to her brown eyes, taking a deep breath of her freshly shampooed hair and her sweet perfume.After a little scramble prachi steadied herself, (she expected sowmya boss as an old man around 40, but not a handsome young man in late 20's, and that too falling on him with an awkward position, she struggled herself to start, and finally)

Blue- prachi, Red- milind


How dare you Mr. Mishra?

What, I don't think holding a falling pretty girl will be a crime!

I am not talking about this,

Then!

Let me come to the point! I am sowmya's elder sister prachi.

So!!!!!!!!

And I came here to warn you to stay away from my sister, and don't u dare to take her for a date,

Why?

How can u do this, she a small innocent girl,

Its finalized,and i can't help in this

(prachi raised her hand towards his cheeks, which got hold my milind,)

What, are you doing, going to give something here!

(touching his cheeks and with a naughty continued)

I guess u had already gave something on both

(feeling talking with him is useless and not wanting to continue further prachi walked towards the door)

Wait a minute!

What?

Why can't you warn your sister?

I tried a lot, but she is stubborn in this and not obeying me,

Then, how do u think I will agree with you, ok I will give u one more option, I need a girl to accompany with me,it doesn't bother u or ur sister!

What?

Yes, I don't mind if u come with me, in behalf of ur sister.

Mister!!!, (prachi called with gritted teeth, she came to warn for her sister and he is calling her)

Don't get angry,Choose any option the choice is your's

You have time till Friday morning.


press like button if u like this part
waiting for ur comments😛
Edited by mehanandita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: may268

becoming so impatient to read the next part😃
Not good😆


posted dear, being impatient is not good for health and brain
and be cool dear,
thnks for inspiring me
hope u like it😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Loved it
I knew this would happen.....LOL
Thanks for fixing this
I think soumya isn't going to be happy
when she hears that her sister is going on the date instead
Update soon
I am loving this FF.......LOL
Different in a way
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: may268

Me first!!!!!!!!!!!!!


congrats,
hope u like it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: may268

Loved it

I knew this would happen.....LOL
Thanks for fixing this
I think soumya isn't going to be happy
when she hears that her sister is going on the date instead
Update soon
I am loving this FF.......LOL
Different in a way

Adding to this😆
I love your writing😳
You're so awesome😆
The first time I cliked the like button 😳
that was for your update😃
It really deserved it😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: may268

Adding to this😆
I love your writing😳thnks dear, have to do with one more two rough copy
You're so awesome😆u r kidding me right
The first time I cliked the like button 😳thnks dear, i feeling high
that was for your update😃
It really deserved it😳enough dear have praised a lot, started sniffing😆😉



Thnks a lot for ur sweet comments dear, 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

oh what is this,

what happens if Sowmya knows that she her sister will be spoiling her plan, Prachi going with her boss.......................

hope Prachi promises her to allow her to go US in return,,,,,,

needed a lengtheir and quicker update from next time

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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: shravu

oh what is this,

what happens if Sowmya knows that she her sister will be spoiling her plan, Prachi going with her boss.......................she is interested in US and not with milind, so nothing to worry

hope Prachi promises her to allow her to go US in return,,,,,,wait and see

needed a lengtheir and quicker update from next timeu need more length than this, ok, will surely try in next part, but being not well experienced like u people, cant able imagine more than this,

thnks for commenting 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

interesting update,but so small.Please write a short FF as u decided with long updates like we needed.(provided,if it does not disturb ur work).Meeting,convesation between milind and prachi was nice.milind behaves like a true businessman,if not sowmya then its prachi.nice dealing.better than before. i.e sowmya with milind.waiting to see how prachi is going to explain this to sowmya after talking about morals of life to her sister.

very nice,thanks for updating.please continue soon.

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