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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
sorry for late comments went to MIL house

as usual great update dear,
loved interaction between prachi and neev ayesha
prachi is so kind in this too, poor soul has no one to say her own,
nice to see alaap changed and married sukriti
but felt bad for milind,
very well described in a single part,
wonder how michi is going to meet
and how their relation progress

continue soon dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: mehanandita

sorry for late comments went to MIL house<br><br>as usual great update dear,<br>loved interaction between prachi and neev ayesha<br>prachi is so kind in this too, poor soul has no one to say her own, <br>nice to see alaap changed and married sukriti<br>but felt bad for milind, <br>very well described in a single part,<br>wonder how michi is going to meet<br>and how their relation progress<br><br>continue soon dear<br>


thank you Meha. Michi will meet in the next part. Hope you will like it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83


Writing now! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
Hmm may be in an hr.. if I finish. Hope to post it today itself. It's 4 pm for here... so still have a lot of hrs ahead.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

"Hey, Soumi. What's up, babes?" Prachi answered her mobile using the earphones.

"Prachi, where are you now?" asked Soumya from the other side of the call.

"I am driving home. I was dropping Maamaji to the airport as he was flying to Japan this morning. What's the matter?" wondered Prachi as Soumya sounded a bit anxious.

"I missed my bus yaar. I had told you about my interview at MM ad agency, right? The final round is at 9, this morning. And here I am waiting for the next bus. And today is this stupid taxi strike. Would you be able to drive me there, Prachi?" Soumya requested.

"By all means. Are you at the bus-stop near your house? I will be there in.. say.. 15 minutes." Prachi said calculating in her mind the time it would take for her to reach by Soumya's house. As Soumya told her where exactly she was, Prachi drove up to there. Hoping that they would reach in time, Soumya got into the car. Prachi had taken a U-turn and took the shortest route possible to the destination. Soumya had told Prachi that Proteek Dasgupta, who was their nerdy classmate was also in the competition for the job. She had also told Prachi that she was desperate to get this job since her future co-sister suggested her it's better she has a job before marrying or else the orthodox in laws wouldn't let her apply for jobs.

"I am sure you will do better than that PROteek. By the way, how do you know he is selected for the final interviews too? Are you in touch with him?" Prachi asked in curiosity as Proteek though boring was intangible too.

"My cousin Arnav works in the same company. He gives me all this inside information. It seems the boss is quite strong headed too" Soumya detailed.

"Don't worry darling. You will get the job" assured Prachi.

Soon, Prachi's mobile beeped with a SMS. Prachi indicated to Soumya to check it and the message was from Ranveer ,which read: Before you make it a hot news around the world against me, let me tell you I had no ill intentions. So, I hope you bury the matter as it is. I was carried over by your beautiful face, but only realized later that your mind isn't anywhere as beautiful.

Prachi got furious to hear the message that Soumya read it out for her. She had asked her to reply back as: Don't act as if you were innocent. How beautiful your mind would have been to pinch my ass.

Ranveer had immediately replied as: WTH? I pinched your ass!!? I even apologized to you when my watch pricked your a** while dancing, let alone me pinching, DAMN!!

It suddenly crossed Prachi's mind that there was a possibility that Ranveer wasn't lying. She thought over it for a moment, while Soumya too had thought Ranveer might be telling the truth. Prachi recollected those moments with Ranveer in the party though she hated them. Somehow she could now feel it would have been a prick that she mistook as a pinch. She had asked Soumya to reply as: It's possible that I would have mistaken the prick for a pinch. BUT (Prachi had asked Soumya to put "but" in caps), you did try to pull me into a kiss, though I tried to pull back so much. I would never want to be kissed by those pink lips of yours.

Ranveer had again replied quickly: Bandar kya jaane adrak ka swaad? (How would a monkey know the taste of ginger?) My ex-girlfriend loved me for my pink lips. I thought you and I were dating. Yes, I was carried over by your beauty. If only I knew I was in front of a.... leave it, all I want from you is that you keep shut your twisted brain in my matters.

Ranveer's message did make Prachi feel she had made a mountain out of a molehill but also annoyed her that he compared her to a monkey. Nevertheless, she had no regrets over ending the relation with him that she had found suffocating. She finally asked Soumya to reply as: It's not in my nature to go bitching around about people. I do apologize for mistaking the prick for a pinch and for slapping you in front of everyone. But I am not apologetic about terminating this relationship, as I am pretty sure you would have never clicked as my boyfriend. Wish you the best of luck in future.

Ranveer's instant reply read: Thanks for terminating. It was sooner the better. I too wouldn't want a menacing girlfriend like you. Best of luck to you, more to those men, who are to cross path with you.

The matter took a backseat, as Soumya seemed worried that she was late for her interview. Prachi tried to go over other vehicles, and drove as fast as she could and finally when they reached the MM ad agency it was 9 15 am. Prachi had wished Soumya the best for the interview and told her that she would wait for her in the reception and then they would go and meet Ayesha afterwards. Once Soumya entered inside the head of the company's room, Prachi had called Neev and briefed him about her SMS conversations with Ranveer. Talking to Neev made her feel a lot better as Neev had understood her stand this time and asked her to forget the matter and get over it. He had also apologized to her for hooking her up with Ranveer without thinking whether they would get along or not. Prachi had taken a deep breath and tried to look around to avert her mind. She noticed that the receptionist of the office was a middle-aged lady on a wheel chair and seemed to have an artificial leg. Prachi soon got into a conversation with her who had described to her how strict was her boss when it came to work for whom she sometimes also worked as a secretary.

As Prachi sat going through the messages in her mobile, deleting them, particularly the ones from Ranveer, she heard the firm foot steps of a person. The very rhythm of the steps caught her attention and she had raised her head in an inquisitiveness to visualize the owner of the foot steps. As soon as she saw the man walking towards the receptionist, Prachi couldn't take her eyes off of him. Tall, dark, handsome, with fiery eyes and a determined appearance, the man had made Prachi wonder if this was the image of her dream man. She had almost felt like whistling, watching her favourite movie star making an entry as a hero. Prachi's lips had widened in a grin and she covered her mouth with her hand to stop giving away any sound and hoped that the man doesn't notice what she was doing. The man hadn't even noticed her existence there and he had walked to the receptionist to say "Mrs. Kundra, send the appointment letters to Mr. Proteek Dasgupta. I don't want to employ the girl, got a feel that she is another Mallika in the making. I will be back in an hour, have a meeting with our rival company". Saying so, the man had smirked. Putting his shades on, the man had walked out running his fingers through his slightly long curly locks, while Prachi's breath stopped for a few seconds.

A moment later, Prachi saw Soumya walking towards her with a lacklustre face. Prachi estimated in her brain that Soumya hadn't got the job while Proteek who was walking behind her with a broad beam on his face had succeeded. "Hello, Prachi" had said Proteek getting back to the dumb expression he would generally have on his face. Prachi had passed a small smile towards him as a gesture.

"I knew he would do something like that. Don't feel bad Soumi. The man is rude and I think he is a bigot, sexist. Of the 15 people we have in this office, all are men, except for the handicapped Mrs. Kundra. I think he hates women. You know we had another girl called Mallika in the same job, and he fired her without any justification and even accused her of eying on him. I think he is tolerating Mrs. Kundra just because she is old and doesn't have a leg. Or else he would have fired her too" Arnav had consoled his cousin, who had failed to secure the job, as he sat in the nearby caf with her and Prachi. Arnav had been attracted to Mallika and was quite upset with his boss that because of him Mallika no more was seen in the office.

"Oh, is it the man who walked out when you were coming back from your interview? He was actually telling the receptionist to give the job to Proteek and not the girl since he saw a hint of Mallika in this girl. I think he was referring to you, Soumya. But how dare he think like that about you?" Prachi spoke with rage.

"Proteek and I were the only candidates. I am sure he was talking about me." Soumya cringed.

"Don't worry hun. You will find a better job than this. Why do you want to work for a chauvinist?" Prachi said putting her arm over her friend.

"Even I am thinking of changing my job, you see. I am tired of following this Milind Mishra's orders. He makes me work like a donkey giving me deadlines over deadlines" Arnav added.

Prachi had dropped Soumya to her house and their plan to meet Ayesha was cancelled as Soumya was not in a mood. Driving back to her home, Prachi kept on thinking about the man she had seen today by the name of Milind Mishra. She couldn't help lament why such a good looking man needed to be such an arrogant bigot. It also somehow bothered her that the man hadn't even noticed her while talking to the receptionist though her eyes were fixed on him.

'Why on earth, has he occupied my thoughts?' wondered Prachi as she went to the bed that night. She had been constantly thinking about him for the whole day, with his image flashing in the screen of her mind without her control. 'It's probably because he has been unfair to my dear friend Soumya' Prachi had contemplated and wished there was a way she defeated him in some way. As much as she tried to distract herself, his figure roamed free in her feelings and she had gone to sleep with his thoughts manipulating her thinking process.

"Please don't leave me, Prachi. I want you so much. I can't live without you" Milind had begged. Prachi woke up with a start covering her mouth with both her hands looking around. Though she felt relieved that it was a dream, she just couldn't believe her own dream. She had dreamt that Milind was begging her on his knees not to leave him. Suddenly grinning like a fool at herself for the dream she saw, Prachi went to sleep still thinking about nothing but him.
Edited by ShubS - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Shubs..! Prachi toh gayii on first sighting of Milind..😆!! I hope Soumya gets the job..so Prachi ka aana jana laga rahe ge in MM's office..😉! Love the texts (sms) between Ranvir and Prachi. Ranvir is quite sharp in his responses! LOL! I also liked how Prachi was quick to apologise when she thought she could be wrong to have misjudged him. Fine quality. :)

Edited by $weet Ema - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Me first..now off to read.



Congrats for being first! Looks like it's just you and me in the forum today!😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Thanks Shubs..! Prachi toh gayii on first sighting of Milind..😆!!

Yes he has affected her pretty deep.😛

I hope Soumya gets the job..so Prachi ka aana jana laga rahe ge in MM's office..😉

Hmm, sure Michi will meet often, let's see how!

! Love the texts (sms) between Ranvir and Prachi. Ranvir is quite sharp in his responses! LOL!

Ranveer is burnt!! He had to be sharp as his cheek still hurts.. lol

I also liked how Prachi was quick to apologise when she thought she could be wrong to have misjudged him. Fine quality. :)

Yes, she does apologize quickly..😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
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So Prachi seems to be infatuated with Milind although she is trying to make herself believe that she is angry with him. I wonder whether she will now make him fall for her inorder to avenge what he did to her friend and later find that she has really fallen for him. By then Milind will find out about her original plan and get angry/upset with her, concluding that she plays with guys' feelings. Maybe Ranveer (who may be his friend or acquaintance) also confirms this to him at some point in the future. Well that is my prediction for this story.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Opti

So Prachi seems to be infatuated with Milind although she is trying to make herself believe that she is angry with him. I wonder whether she will now make him fall for herinorder to avenge what he did to her friend and later find that she has really fallen for him. By then Milind will find out about her original plan and get angry/upset with her, concluding that she plays with guys' feelings. Maybe Ranveer (who may be his friend or acquaintance) also confirms this to him at some point in the future. Well that is my prediction for this story.




You are right Opti Akka... on a lot of things. I still hope to surprise you with something. 😊

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