FF:Destiny's Children (Pgs 1 to 5) Also ck Pg 84

NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#431

L=50. This is one long FF.. With sub-parts included have you written about 200 parts or what?

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: michifanreal
L=50. This is one long FF.. With sub-parts included have you written about 200 parts or what?

Yes,Shubs, it is one long fic indeed! Never thought that I would end up writing such a mammoth piece when I started it three months back. But then I did not anticipate that I would have so many characters either. Dont know how many sub parts there are in total but am planning to conclude with Part L. There will be three more sub parts to this one before the epilogue.

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#433

Well Niharika is her usual self here too isn't she tagging along with Ayesha's parents. Aw Neev the sweetheart restraining from intimacy before marriage. Nice part glad to see Milsi in control

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: blind horizon
Well Niharika is her usual self here too isn't she tagging along with Ayesha's parents. Aw Neev the sweetheart restraining from intimacy before marriage. Nice part glad to see Milsi in control

Thanks Munee. Wrote this part in a hurry and was trying to cover too many things in it so felt it was a bit stilted but I couldn't help it since the count down to the end of the fic has begun. Included that bit about Neev because I wanted to show the transformation in him.

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jyothi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#435

wow tatsvgr8 but i felt this part was litlle hurried gr8 part shah mishra grp sounds amazing cont soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
wow tatsvgr8 but i felt this part was litlle hurried gr8 part shah mishra grp sounds amazing cont soon

Yes, Jyothi I did hurry through this part because there were so many little things which needed to be covered but I was not in a mood to get into the details. I want to get to the most important part of Michi babies arrival and Neesha wedding soon enough so that I can finally wind up this fic.

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