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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Insomniac

Just like all your other FFs this one sounds as though it will be great too. Sorry for never commenting before, I've only plucked up the courage to reply.

All your FFs are a good read but my favourite is probably ''Kaisa yeh Pyar hai".
Please contiue soon!!

😃😃thanks dea i m so glad u like readin my ff..........well its nice to get comment from silent readers as well really boost us to do good............ok so gald u like kaisa😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART-1
Milind u jerk get up,shouted Prachi as she kicked him hard on his ass.
Milind shout in pain,Damm you Prachi Shah wat the hell is your problem cant you let any one live in peace for a day atleast.
Ya let you jerk live in peace who has ruined my sleep,now stop arguing with me.Just get up the landlady is about to come any moment.
Landlady,he asked confused.
Yes you fool landlady Mrs.Sharma.........your love your darling,she said irritated.
But why is she coming,asked an equally irritated Milind.
I guess she wants to marry you and be the mother of your child,how the hell should i know.She called to inform she is coming thats it.
Thats it,God women atleast when you take calls you should take full information,didnt anyone teach you that,said Milind.
Oh!really sorry,No one taught me so...........So next time when your girlfriend calls me i shall hand you the phone,then keep asking her reasons.Now Get the hell out of your bed and go freshen up,shouted Prachi.
Milind stared at her for quite long.
Listen,you can stare me all day as it is Sunday but now go get ready.
Milind slowly pushed the blanket,and went to freshen up.All the while Prachi decided to clean the mess he created in his small room.Soon after all was done she went and looked at the paper hunged on the fridge.Sunday Prachi's turn.So she immediately went and prepared tea for both of them.
She took the tea for him in his room.She entered...........
Godddddddd......damm women,didnt anyone teach you,You should knock before coming to someones room.
Someone who someone,as far as i remember this is hubby's room and i can come and go freely as i wish.
Oh!i wish i knew before marryin you that you were a devil in disguise then i would never married you.I thought i will have a angel wife,wat did i know i would suffer all my life bringin in a devil with me.
Oh!Ya rite,devil me poor baby had to go so much because me,You idiot how dare you call me devil.If it wasnt for this devil who would cook,wash and iron for you.
Madam,as far as i remember these all are done by me,you only make tea thats it.So stop giving me those long lecture on being a good wife..........You lucky to get a hubby like me who does all this without a complain.
Well what are hubby for?She slowly pulled her cheeks,you so cuteeeeeeeee my hubby.
Well i wish i could say the same about you.
WHATTTTTTTTTT????screamed Prachi.She slowly took the pillow beside her and start hitting him hard.
Prachi,stop it stop it,but as she didnt listen to him,he joined the fun and hitted her hard.Soon both were out of breath,lied near each other in arm distance breathing out quick.
Milind,she called out.
Hmmmmm........said Milind.
I wish i had married you for real sometime.
Well honestly.........he looked at her in her eyes for long,and turning the other side said gently.........Wishhhhhhh i had tooo but i m so glad i didnt,saying so he laughed out loud.Makin her even more angry.
You dog,saying she again started hitting him.
And this is how Mr and Mrs Milind Mishra were.
Ok i hope u enjoy it😃😃
Edited by bidnai - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
😃😃Congrats dea😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
nice start!! love how they have their routines and life designed😃
wht do u mean by married for real?😕 are they faking as husband and wife.. or tht hmmm something else altogether?
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really great update👏

loved the friendly relation between milind and prachi
pls continue soon
cant wait for next update


keep on rocking
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Posted: 16 years ago
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bids darling very nice FF👏

ur hubby-wife relation is just too cute😳

loved their tiger-kitten fight😉😆

by the way plz clear about the doubt that y they have married to each other ???😕

plz continue soon sweetie😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well certainly a completely different story to what we are used to, here they start of unhappily/happily? married!!
Your Prachi doesn't hold back does she? she seems just as ruthless and confident as Milind.
Looking forward to seeing how this story progresses, I'm sure you will make it one of your best - No Pressure (just joking)😆😆
Good title.
Thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Ok................Paying guests. Playing Husband and wife to have a rented apartment. ...........Good story. Cont.
Congrats on your new FF.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
very nice start dear.looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivgauri

nice start!! love how they have their routines and life designed😃
wht do u mean by married for real?😕 are they faking as husband and wife.. or tht hmmm something else altogether?
continue soon

😃😃Thanks alot dea..........yes dea 😊😊..........Well shall reveal it soon😉..........Well i shall reveal it soon dea😳😃.........Yes dea shall do it soon😉

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