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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaswetta

Thanks Bh for this lovely fanfic. Keep up this good work.please try to translate their dialogue in english as you did earlier,i felt lost in the 2nd thread,most of their dialogue were in hindi.
Thanks.

I know it's such a tiring job really specially with the electricity playing hide and seek. I'll try doing the translations. Thank you for liking it so much.😊
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Part 62

As Milind fed portions of fried egg to Preeti she continued to babble in her view talk to her father about the countless events he had missed out on. From what she rambled he understood her doll had undergone a major accident she had brought it to him for examination, it had lost an arm and soon father and daughter were hunting for it all over the room. "Dolly....Papa" she would repeat urging him to find the dislocated limb finally after a long search it was recovered from behind the dressing table and was fitted deftly by a keen Milind. The smile Preeti's face bore after watching her prized possession become whole again was enough to make Milind realize it was a job well done. "Tankoo Papa" Preeti had cried in jubilation kissing his cheeks in elation "khush meri jaan" Milind had asked seating her in his lap and she had laughed in mirth a fitting answer to his query. Kissing her on her forehead Milind had allowed her to spend quality time with the doll placing her on the massive bed as he packed his belongings in a travelling bag when he heard someone knocking on the door. He looked up to see his father stand in the doorway Milind had stared at him quizzically "Aapko kab sey knock kerney kii zarurat parney lagi Baba?" he had questioned in surprise. "Jab sey tuu apnon ko paraaya samajhney laga tab sey, mujhey laga shayad tuu bhuul gaya main abhi tak zinda huun" Baba had replied calmly walking in the room resting his eyes on Milind's open suitcase. Milind had looked away not being able to meet his father's challenging gaze "ab nazrein kyun chura raha hai. Yehi sikhaya tha mainey tujhey.... zindagi sey bhagna?" his father was in no mood to forgive him today. " Baba woh.." he muttered "Kiya woh, yeh kiya laga rakha hai jab man kerta hai chala jaata hai jab dil kerta hai waapis koi zimmedaari iss ghar kiii taraf banti hai ya nahin teri. Teri aulad hai na yeh" Baba had pointed towards Preeti who now gawked at her father with frightened eyes. She could not understand her father's silence while her grandfather dished him a sound verbal lashing.


He probably had been bad her little brain had thought, wouldn't have drunk his milk the reason her grandfather scolded him, grandpa scolded her too when she didn't drink her milk . " Kitna farz nibhaya hai tuuney iski taraf? Pichley do din sey ghar sey ghayab hai na khabar na telephone kis tarah ka kaam hai yeh tera jabkeh tuu Delhi gaya bhi nahin" Baba was furious Milind had tried to form an excuse but little had he known Premlata had infact told him the truth. She wouldn't have had he not caught her weeping looking at Prachi's photograph, then too she was reluctant to give it all away but he had threatened to call Milind that very moment and if need be go trace his whereabouts himself. "Kaam tha Baba" he had replied avoiding eye contact with his father burying his face amidst the array of clothes that he kept ripping down from the hangers. "Kitna jhoot boleyga Milind or kis sey apney baap sey" Baba's angry voice had resonated in his ears and he had stopped in mid step dropping the clothes in his bag defeatedly. "To kiya kerta Baba marney deta Prachi ko. Buhut bura huun na main Baba sab ko dukh deta huun isi liye to dekhiye na kabhi khud sukoon nahin paata. Jitna bhi kerun kam hai, jo bhi kerun ghalat hai. Sach kehtey hain aap jhoot bolta raha main aap sey khud sey sab sey." Milind could not hold his tears back anymore he felt ashamed of himself of lying to his own father making him believe it was for his own good how could he been so damn selfish. Kneeling on the floor he had folded his hands in front of the old man "Maaf ker do mujhey Baba maaf ker do" he had never felt so guilt ridden in his entire life. He had lied to his father forced himself to believe this was the ultimate reality when it had all been a hapless dream. Baba had clasped his hands lovingly in his own and kissed them amorously. "Kiya ghalati kii tuu ney bewaquf jo ro raha hai" in return Milind had narrated the entire staged act he had been enacting along with Prachi since the past few months. Preeti had crawled across the mattress and had slid off the bed running up to her father she hugged him wrapping her arms around his neck wiping away his tears. "Nayi Papa nayi..." she whimpered terribly upset to see him broken kissing him repeatedly and in turn he had embraced her warmly hot tears finding their way down his cheeks. Baba unable to see Milind forlorn and dejected had made him sit beside him on the bed while Preeti sat on his knees. "Baba mainey aap sey jhoot bola keh main or Prachi pati patni hain, sirf is liye keh aap meri shaadi key baarey main sochna chor dein" he had confessed contritely to his father wiping his face clean. He had expected his father to lash out at him at this revelation curse him call him a callous and cold hearted human being on the contrary Baba had simply smiled.



"Ab khayaal aaya sach bataney ka" he had inquired plainly and Milind had felt himself sink in a pool of penitence. "Kiya kerta Baba...... us waqt yehi sahi laga mujhey. Jaanta huun ghalat kiya sab ko dhoka diya.. yahaan tak keh khud ko bhi...or Prachi" he had paused then unable to tell Baba what he felt for her. "Pyaar kerta hai tuu uss sey Milind?" Baba had inquired resolutely with firm conviction in his suspicion. Milind had not answered rather had placed Preeti on the bed and had resumed to packing his clothes again "Main kuch puuch raha huun Milind tujh sey?" Baba had asked irritatedly. "Kiya faida Baba main pyaar kerun na kerun kissey farq parta hai" his hands worked deftly as he pulled out his drawers emptying them in the case. He was getting overworked pacing the room scouring it for his belongings. "Ussey to pyaar nahin mujh sey, hota to yuun apni zindagi khatam nahin kerna chahti.... mujh sey baat kerti... eik baar to kehti na Baba keh ussey meri zarurat hai" Sifting through the papers he pulled out a sheaf the ones he needed to work on that night, even if his world was crumbling to pieces the real world was still very much moving around him if he did not move too he might just fade into nothingness. As he tried to walk away Baba had held him by his arm turning his wet face towards him "Tuu kiya samajhta hai jaanta nahin tha main keh yeh sab naatak hai?" and Milind had met his gaze in wonderment "Baba aap sab kuch jaan... jaantey they" he stammered "Phir itney din kuch kaha kyun nahin?" he questioned in consternation. "Kyun kehta kuch jabkeh mujhey tujh per bharosa tha, Prachi per bharosa tha... jaanta hai Milind Prachi hii woh larki hai jissey Sukriti kii shaadi waali raat main hospital chor aaya tha" The suitcase had fallen from Milind's hands and clattered noisily settling on the marble besides his feet.


How could he forget his father's constant chants to go check on a girl he had gotten admitted in the City Hospital. Milind had asked the driver to check on her and had himself gone to the hospital but by then Prachi had left. He could never have imagined Prachi to be the girl his father had rendered help that night. "Baba kiya aap ko Shashank key baarey main pata tha?" he had inquired in anguish... why had his father not enlightened him on anything earlier, why was his family hell bent on alienating him. "Mujhey Shashank key baarey main kuch nahin pata tha Milind pata hota to tujhey batata nahin kiya?" Baba had gently touched his cheek. "Prachi tujh sey buhut pyaar kerti hai Milind, mainey khud suna tha karva chaut kii raat woh teri tasveer sey baatein kertey huey ro rahi thi.... ussey apna ley Milind nahin to badnaami or dukh key ilawa kuch nahin raheyga usskey paas" he had tried to coax Milind help him realize that distancing himself from Prachi would only make matters worse. "Baba aapko ghalat fehmi hui hai woh nahin kerti pyaar mujh sey .... or zabardasti to Milind Mishra ney kii nahin kisi per aaj tak phir Prachi to zindagi hai meri." In a firm and decisive tone he had clarified his take on the issue till Prachi accepted that she loved him he was not ready to accept her as his. He did not recall a single situation where Prachi had confessed her need for him how could he then impose himself on her, that would be wrong. Having cleared his front to his father he had not cast a second glance at his surroundings but had sauntered out crossing the threshold with quick steps. He had avoided to look back lest he be weakened in his resolve to leave his life behind him.


Sapna had let the nurse pierce her skin with the needle drawing a sample of her blood for tests she sat numbed too tired to react at any sensation or feeling. She had been crying for the past five hours and now felt as if she'd finished off every last drop of water in her body.The nurse was the one who had spotted Ali spill tears over her unconscious form the day before. "Sach madam jii bara hii acha hai aapka husband yeh jaantey huey bhi keh ab aap kabhi maa nahin ban sakti bara hii udaas tha aapkey liye, ro bhi raha tha jii" she had informed a white faced Sapna conspiratorially. Sapna had stared at her ashen and shocked what had she just said, she, Sapna was a barren woman... why... how.... when. Her mind started swirling her child had gone and now she could never have another she clutched her hair in her hands desperately. "Tumko kis ney bataya?" she had questioned the nurse who was terrified with Sapna's change in demeanor and was suddenly aware that she had committed a grave mistake. "Doctor saahab ney ji sab ko pata hai..." she had further crushed her hopes on it being a rumor. "Jao yahaan sey..." she had ordered the nurse who stood adamant "Bandage to ker luun jii aapki." "I SAID GET OUT...... GET OUT!!!!" she screamed hysterically the nurse had run away then afraid that her revelation could cost her a job. Sapna had thought she had shed the last of her tears little had she known there were a lot more to follow, she sat stoned as transparent droplets fell fast from her eyes. What wrong was it then she deserved this, she had earned all this punishment it was God's wrath a paltry return to her sins. She did not deserve to live how could anyone as criminal as she breathe any longer... no she should end it. With such thoughts flashing through her mind she furtively searched for some mode of assistance. Yes her eyes gleamed as she spotted the scalpel amidst the nurse's set of tools she had been generous enough to leave behind in her haste to flee. Picking up the well sharpened object she had slit her wrists in contentment, a fitting end to a miserable life. Laying back against the pillows she had watched as blood squirted out from her arms dyeing the starched sheets crimson. The pain had finally aggravated to an extent of becoming unbearable, she hoped it would finish for good now.


Prachi had awoken to see herself surrounded by machines of different sizes she wearily stretched her hand to find it taped to a tube with an IV stuck in it. She moaned slightly awaking Ali "Tum uth gayi Prachi shuker hai Khuda ka" he had smiled at her. She tried to sit up and was helped by Ali "Tabiyat kaisi hai?" he had asked trying to keep the conversation light though they both knew the big question was Milind and his whereabouts. Milind had not contacted Ali neither had informed him on his thoughts about his decision to switch abodes. Ali had been busy shuttling between Prachi and Sapna the latter having driven him away he had thought it best to leave her on her own for some while. Hoping to wheedle some sort of information on Milind Prachi had lifted her eyes to Ali's bedraggled form "Bhaiyya... Milind... kahaan hain?" she had inquired. She realized he knew the truth moreover she feared he wouldn't forgive her for keeping it from him until and unless she relayed to him the chain of events that had forced her to maintain silence over the issue. Ali had shifted uncomfortably in his seat how was he to tell her that Milind was a broken man all because of her. That he had vowed never to love anyone else never to believe in fate and never ever to act as a generous benefactor to any living soul on the planet. "Theek hai.... kaam sey gaya hai" Ali had muttered avoiding her probing gaze. "Mujhsey naraaz hain?" she had asked again and Ali had found it best to be honest about the scenario lies hadn't got them anywhere. "Haan... tumney ussey Shashank key baarey main kuch nahin bataya. Shayad Prachi... ab woh pehley waala Milind nahin raha" Ali had further piqued her dissappointment. "Kiya woh sab jaan gaye... meri tasveerain bhi?" she had gasped in anguish. "Haan sab malum hai ussey" Ali had fixed his thoughful gaze on her "Tum ney ussey pehley bata diya hota to.... khair" he would've carried on had the doctor not entered the room panic stricken. "Mr Ali your wife, she's tried to commit suicide slit her wrists please come fast" Ali's face had turned pale as he sprinted out of the room after the doctor. Prachi had attentively watched as the duo left hot on their heels her mind a complete muddle.



What was happening when did Ali get married and why did the doctor inform Ali about her trying to kill herself. What was she missing out on? Intrigued she had pushed away her covers and had pulled herself together. Stepping down on the tiles she felt the cold rush seep in her it felt as if she hadn't been on her feet in ages. Steadying herself she slipped on her slippers and slowly limped out to the corridor. It was deserted but she decided to move on in a faint hope to locate Ali and his wife. She could hear shrill screams emanating from one of the rooms lining the corridor a nurse had rushed in just then "Chor do mujhey, mujhey mar jaaney do" somehow the voice seemed familiar. Her feet were automatically drawn towards the room where chaos persisted as Prachi peeped in she saw Ali hold on to Sapna while she thrashed on her bed in obvious pain. The sheets were painted red while blood poured from the slits she had carved on her twin writs. Prachi had suppressed a scream "Sapna.... Sapna!!" Ali had shouted but the woman was obviously immersed in immense pain. The doctor had injected her with a sedative while a nurse and Ali held on to her pinning her to the bed. Sapna had tried to shove away her captivators but had failed. The blood loss had rendered her weak and soon she had slipped in a semi conscious state. Prachi looked on tears brimming in her eyes as the doctor had then expertly stitched her wrists sealing the slits neatly, after bandaging them he had administered her a new dose of medication and had patted a melancholic Ali's shoulders sympathetically. "Pata nahin kaisey ho gaya Mr Ali but I believe she came to know she could never bear a child again. One of the nurses accidently informed her about it thinking you might have discussed about the issue with her."



Ali had shot a cold barbarous look at the doctor "What sort of a hospital this is where personal information is available to all and sundry. You knew she was already broken due to her child's loss and now this.... this is preposterous and I will complain to the authorities". Prachi had felt the surroundings go hazy Sapna had lost her baby and she could never become a mother again how... why. Putting her palm to her mouth she had willed herself to muffle her sobs her tears though fell freely on her cheeks. "Kyun Prachi kaisa lag raha hai yeh dekh ker?" Milind's voice had resounded in her ear she had opened her eyes to see him standing next to her grim and with drawn. "Milind yeh sab... sab kaisey?" she had stammered "Tumhain bachaney aayi thii woh.... uss raat jab tum Shashank key paas gayeen theen. Kho diya uss ney apna bacha kyunki uskey baap ney ussey maar diya." Milind had informed her in minimal wods. "Teri amanat" he had plunged his hand in his inner coat pocket and extricated the cd handing it to her. "Uss raat sab kuch badal gaya Prachi mera pyaar, tera vishwaas or Sapna kii zindagii...... " saying so Milind had turned around when Prach had called out to him. "Milind Shashank ney mujhsey kaha tha woh yeh cd aapki inauguration per chala deyga" Milind had stopped in mid step and retrieved his steps back to her "Acha or kiya kaha tha ussney?" he had questioned his eyes glazed with an unspoken rage a fire that Prachi realized had consumed him whole. "Milind agar main nahin jaati to.." "To woh merey inauguration ki band baja deta....bas!" he had inquired in a calm tone. Prachi had stared at him through misty eyes "Aapney itni mehnat kii thi Milind or woh sab barbad ho jaati" she had whispered in a repentant tone. "Mehnat to mainey apney pyaar per bhi ki thi uss per apni zindagi kii neev rakhney per bhi kii thi, haan Prachi mehnat kii thi mainey apney aap ko samjhaaney main keh humarey beech pyaar ka rishta hai...... mehnat barbaad, pyaar barbad saala zindagi barbaad or eik nahin buhut saari. Main jaa raha huun Prachi kyun tuu jaanti hai, mera peecha mat kerna deney key liye ab merey paas kuch bhi nahin...... pyaar bhi nahin". With those final words he had left Prachi slide down on the chipped marble of the hospital "Milind" she had called out to him "Milind ruk jaaiye.... MILIND!!!" she had screamed before the world around had gone black altogether.

Edited by blind horizon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
Sorry Munne have not been commenting on your last few updates have been busy.
The update was brilliant. So baba knew that Prachi was the girl he admitted in the hospital and that the whole marriage was fake.
The scene between Milind and Preeti was good. She ia a darling.
Poor Milind he is totally broken.
I really felt sorry for Sapna.
It was not fair that he blame Prachi for Sapna's condition. Afterall she had wanted good for everyone. I hope he is the one to catch her when she faints.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Hey Vijaya long time no see where were you?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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MY sis and her baby are here. Have been busy with them. Baby is 2 and a half months old so most of my time is spent with her.
Edited by Darwin - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very smart...wow!!! so, baba was that figure and he does knows everythin from the beginnin..great now he can turn the entire thing to reality😃
loved the way ms. sunshine brought a smile to her papa's face even that is for a spit of a second🤗
Milind's breakdown was heart-breakin...one cant feel his pain really...
about sapna, i dunno wat more to say, she couldv lived a normal life if she could concieve but alas, she couldn, now she has nothin to lose...wonder how she wil be able to survive now...i hope ali does somethin soon before sapna does somethin foolish again😒
Prach: glad she has gained concious and is alitle better too...but wat she has to face after that wasnt no less than the death😒...milind has been right, she is to be blamed in a way...but i knw, she dd everythin just for milind and she wasnt expectin anythin unusual to happen specially not to sapna...hell she ddn have the slightest idea that sapna was involved in any of this...wat i see is that, it was no one's fault, only destiny was playin cruel games with them😭

oh wait, dd prachi fall unconcious? hope she is ok and milind comes back for her and understand her plight

a very heart-wrenchin and a brilliant update munee🤗🤗..very well written and continue soon🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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how can da nurse be so stupidly insensitive! milind's anger is jutifioed, prachi better grovel a bit and learn dat u r supp to share issues wid da ppul u luv!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
gr8 part..
feeling sad for michi,ali n sapna😭😭😭
cont.sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Darwin

MY sis and her baby are here. Have been busy with them. Baby is 2 and a half months old so most of my time is spent with her.



Oh well I can understand hun have a niece too so I can understand children.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very smart...wow!!! so, baba was that figure and he does knows everythin from the beginnin..great now he can turn the entire thing to reality😃
Yes he was that figure and he knew everything yes he'll play his part in bringing them together. 😊

loved the way ms. sunshine brought a smile to her papa's face even that is for a spit of a second🤗
Ms Sunshine loves her papa more than anything...
Milind's breakdown was heart-breakin...one cant feel his pain really...
Yes his breakdown was emotional I hadn't wanted him breaking down completely but enough for the reader to acknowledge his pain.
about sapna, i dunno wat more to say, she couldv lived a normal life if she could concieve but alas, she couldn, now she has nothin to lose...wonder how she wil be able to survive now...i hope ali does somethin soon before sapna does somethin foolish again😒
Sapna's road to life will be quite tough and well Ali will be there to help her with it.
Prach: glad she has gained concious and is alitle better too...but wat she has to face after that wasnt no less than the death😒...milind has been right, she is to be blamed in a way...but i knw, she dd everythin just for milind and she wasnt expectin anythin unusual to happen specially not to sapna...hell she ddn have the slightest idea that sapna was involved in any of this...wat i see is that, it was no one's fault, only destiny was playin cruel games with them😭
Fate has been cruel Milind believes he is to be blamed for Sapna and thinks Prachi does not love him if she did she would've confided in him.
oh wait, dd prachi fall unconcious? hope she is ok and milind comes back for her and understand her plight
Yes she fell unconscious hmm I don't think Milind will be there but then that would make him heartless so yes I'll make him stay

a very heart-wrenchin and a brilliant update munee🤗🤗..very well written and continue soon🤗🤗

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