FF:Destiny's Children Pt XIV(2)(16/12) - Page 73

Originally posted by: chillingal16

hey opti di...

loved the way that

milsi realised that anu's mum made milsi realise what prachi is trying to do...

he is finally getting his act together!

cant wait for the next part...

hoppe u continue soon!

Originally posted by: gawker

awwww, the doll and the teddy bear cuddling together. in my mind i'd like to *cover them both with a warm blanket* . that was so beautiful and heartwarming. thanks opti.

Originally posted by: jinc118

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Thoda jaldi nahi ho gaya? I was a bit surprised by Prachi being assertive suddenly. I mean they just had an almost fight a day ago and the next morning when Milind returns and thanks her she doesn't even wonder whats going on. OK leave it.

Unlike your Prachi who is the enigma of the century, mine is pretty simple. Prachi has seen his mood swings and has accepted them by now. Morever, she is feeling equally guilty to have blown up Milind's money. she did not think of it that way earlier but realised it after he mentioned it. They did not have a proper reconcialiation because of Anu's illness and then the rains but Prachi has already forgiven him. As to the thanks, she thinks it is for taking care of Adi. She did not know about Baba then. As to her being assertive, that stemmed from her concern for his health.

that part where Prachi tells him to take a shower...lolz...just sounded like she was a medical dictionary.😆 before you think i am making fun...i am just saying it was funny. Don't go changing anything.🤔

I knew you would say this but I risked it because I wanted to underline the concern she had for him. If she just tells him to take a bath, the guy may think that she considers him stinky. You'll never know with grumpy prejudiced Milind, would we? So this way she explains to him why she wants him to shower first even if he feels exhausted. Anyway the fear of leptospirosis was runing high during that mammoth rains in Jul 26, 2005 in Mumbai. Thought I'll incorporate that.

I also must admit that i liked my grumpy Milind. 😒 I am going to miss him.

JC, I am not as much a tease as you.While I like grumpy Milind, I hate to drag the story and test people's patience, particularly my own. Anyway no plans to hold on to this FF for a year. So I am moving to the next phase of their relationship.

But i guess now i get to enjoy a naughty naughty Milind as would Prachi.😃 Oh he doesn't mind if she clings to him eh?☺️

Well, lets see how naughty Michi are with each other. To tell you the truth I suck at penning naughty scenes because my sense of humour is not really tuned to it.

One request...since this is the happy part of their life and you planning on bringing in some sort of trouble for them...lets make the happy part really slow moving and long...😃 What say?

Cant promise you that since I am not the slow kinds but I think I'll incorporate as much happy scenes as possible. In any case in my fic, even after the so called trouble, there will be may more cute moments. In fact they will be better.Atleast I hope so.