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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#731

Munee, i am asking you the same question I asked you in the other FF.
Yeh tum kya likh rahi ho?😭
There was so much horror, pain, disgust..
While I applaud your writing skills, I am deeply sad for Prachi. I was anticipating the worst as I was reading, but I am glad Prachi escaped without that devil succeeding in all that he had planned. But still what she went through was so horrible. So is Shashank blackmailing her to marry him as he stil holds those pics?

Munee please end this torture soon. In fewer parts and with quicker updates..And I want Milind to know about all this before Shashank dares to play with Prachi's life again. If you are not letting him know, or not making Prachi tell him, I will write him a letter... I tell you.

And Aalaap.. he is a shame in the name of a brother. It was unbelievable he could bet his sister.. but then I remembered Pandavas who had bet their wife. 😡 I am tempted to swear on such men... 😡😡😡

thanks Munee.

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fahimataq

@fahimataq

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Posted: 16 years ago

#732

Munee this update was very painful to read..very sad indeed. Your writing is absolutely fantastic, the emotions prachi felt..the whole scene just got to me..im still feeling like this And this is my very calm comment cos i read it earlier and it left me swearing very badly at S im gonna call hum You Know Who thats how disgusted i am at the man 😡 Uff Prachi yaar im feeling for her from the bottom of my heart..how strong is she to still move on and be angelic the torment she has been thru is too much. I give it to her and Inder trying to save his daughter😭 Was just the fab scene....Alaap😡 Im too disgusted cant even start to describe how i feel, i think he is the bigger monster than you know who..betting his sister 🤢 I can only imagine Prachi''s feelings..never understand. You better give her a VERY happy ending i wont be satisfied otherwise Hope the Milsi does sumthing bout the pics nd all and you know who...i want you to torture him death would be too easy...can only pray sumthing like this doesnt happen to anybodys daughter. Loved the update..ws too good. Brilliant work pls update soon ..im too eager to know whats going to happen.

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rosie

@rosie111

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Posted: 16 years ago

#733

hi you did brillient job writting this part i feel sorry for prachi i hope milind will teach him a lesson thanks for the update

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Saima

@sailat@PA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#734

such a gory-esque update!! :(((( am eagerly awaiting Milind's rxn?!! thanx for the speedy update-y!! 😳😳 am a lil outta sorts coz of the update!

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: lizzy_de

Shanshank uncle Sandip S the same person who had wanted to hire Milsi to kill Inder shah.And becoz of Milind his plan was ruin.and Milsi almost kill him.

Yes Lizze he's the same person S and S quite a duo here aren't they...😊

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: sailat@PA
such a gory-esque update!! :(((( am eagerly awaiting Milind's rxn?!! thanx for the speedy update-y!! 😳😳 am a lil outta sorts coz of the update!

Ah Saima I can well understand your emotions it's ok take your time.😊

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: (**sia**)
wel munee...since so many r after ur life...why shud i be duin the honour? as they wil du that for me😉..like shashank dd for SS😆

dn u find me wicked than u think?😈

Yes darling you'r wickeder than I thought you would be....😊

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: jinc118
You must know how well you've written this by the reactions you got. I don't think i would have reacted the same if you had written it differently because its not the first time such scns have been witnessed...on movies etc. But the horror was truly tangible...i wanted to just curl up and hug myself...sachi Munee...thats how scary you described it and kudos to you. And i still feel the fear Prachi went though. I will not comment on Alaap he is not worth it. But Inder.😭 What a sad fate for a wonderful man like him. I think that was the heartbreaking part cause whatever followed that was just horrifying. Kya karte ho Munee...bachche ko darra diya. Normally i'd get upset and immediately transfer that into anger and bash whoever it is ...but i still haven't gotten over the fear in Prachi. I am going to request that this monster be made to feel a 100 times the fear that Prachi felt. Its not enough to hurt him physically....he should know what it is to be afraid...to be made to feel helpless...and to want to kill yourself. He should also go to those extent...that will be justice. Please Munee do that for me. Overall the update was so powerful that i am still reeling...and didn't even miss the other characters because i was so engrosed.

JC my sweetheart if I hadn't known you better I'd have expected a full blast from you but I knew you'd understand the need for such a visual conception. The fear had to be justified the magnanimity of it explained thus the scenario. I've never shunned from describing the feelings and thought process I could not do injustice to this very crucial part of the story. Yes Alaap was total scum but Inder fate was sad the daughter he loved so dearly was snatched away just for a mere bet. I will try my best to do justice to Shashank I promise.😊

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@-JC-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: blind horizon

The fear had to be justified the magnanimity of it explained thus the scenario. I've never shunned from describing the feelings and thought process I could not do injustice to this very crucial part of the story.

Munee now i really feel like calling you ustaad (which i know is your self proclaimed title😆 but i mean in true sense)...cause i think you'r a master at this art...and i'd get to learn a lot form your writing. Hmmmm...i still need to do justice to so many characters.😆 Its going to be a long task... SIGH.

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soul76

@soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: jinc118

Munee now i really feel like calling you ustaad (which i know is your self proclaimed title😆 but i mean in true sense)...cause i think you'r a master at this art...and i'd get to learn a lot form your writing. Hmmmm...i still need to do justice to so many characters.😆 Its going to be a long task... SIGH.

Lol no I didn't name myself ustaad my chelis did and that's a totally different realm I rule the underworld don.....!!! 😆 I love the tapori language so much and truly love it when Milind speaks it seems so natural on him. Am looking forward to your next update on Rishtey.

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