FF: Forgiveness Part12: Pg37: 21/09

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Shabz.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#251

no probs Pam, im sure the wait will be worth it :D

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fatima

@wande

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Posted: 16 years ago

#252

BC, you still have finish this FF? wow I'll have look to see if you haven't gone too far to catch up.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#253

Hey BC

Cant remember if ive commented on this before

The story is great so far

When do you plan on updating?

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KaneBC

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Posted: 16 years ago

#254

Updated! 😊 It's just 2 paragraphs but needed to conclude Part 11. Hopefully Part 12 will be up by tomorrow night.

Thanks for all the comments, will try to get to them soon.

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mi-neepearl

@mi-neepearl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#255

finally the misunderstanding is over!!😃

so glad that they could share the pain that they had built up inside..

it was a very emotional update😭😭..even though it was 2 paragraphs, i still felt it was very long!

the emotions were expressed excellently!!!👏👏👏

will be waiting for next part!😃

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Monu-SunNaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#256

BC..finally! Me so khush.. 😃 Part.11.2...oooof just made me feel so emotional. Prachi managed to talk him around, but not before he hurt himself so badly, I just could imagine Milind punching the wall as anger took over him when his guilt gave way :( The dialogues, just everything..oof powerful stuff! Btw..if its not to much trouble when you update the next time, can you send me a pm to let me know, not active in this part of the forum anymore..don't won't to miss out on updates.. Thanks.

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NosVemos

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Posted: 16 years ago

#257

Hey Pam, How have you been? Glad that you updated the fic, though it's short. It was emotional but I am so relieved for Michi that they got to finally cry their pent up tears- that too in each other's arms, the perfect solution to their pain.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#258

That was a moving part Pam. I sort of imagined it differently although the line "It should have been me" was there in my imagination too. Only I imagined that Prachi would say it because Milind had earlier said he could not stand seeing her. In my imagined scenario the misunderstanding was a little longer but I am glad you did it this way. Michi have suffered enough. The Asha matter has to be sorted out. I am sure Milind will accept the girl as his for he would not want to lose his wife. Waiting to see how things get resolved finally.