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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahib29

Wow Nice part 😳...and dono VMs bahut aachi hai 😳👏

yaar kaash robbie essa serial meh bhi karta 😆..anyways serial meh pata nahi kab aayega yee din ..lekin abhi Tumhari FF read karke mann ko tasali de dete hai 😳😆

anyways Very nice starting ...continue sooonnnn 😃

Manpreet




Thank you Manpreet that you liked the first part and also i'll post the next part soon. 😛


Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you, to everyone for replying back! And I promise that you guys will love this part.

Part - Two - Cute scene between Robbie and Kasturi in Robbie's bedroom.

God Dam It!

I had Robbie perfectly trapped in my plan, but all of a sudden – my plan failed in humiliating Robbie in-front of his family, but no Anita…..some how Robbie escaped from this plan, but how….

Anita: Maybe you have seeing someone else enter into Kasturi's room or else how would Robbie be in his room….

Nikhil: Wait a minute….

Raunak: What?

Nikhil: What if somebody is helping them against us?

Anita: It could be….Raunak

Raunak: But who can it be?

Anita: I don't know, but I have a feeling its Massi-Ji

Nikhil: It could be Massi-Ji or someone else – who is closer to Robbie and Kasturi...

***

While these three were talking; someone else was also listening to their convo and texting Robbie at the same time. Sometimes Robbie blamed himself for not listening to Kasturi when she was yelling and screaming that Raunak is faking his illness and this was all an act, but…but…how can I have been so dumb in falling for Raunak's evil game.

"Sir, please don't blame yourself" Said by Kasturi, who was drenched wet from the rain (by now you can tell Kasturi came in through the window like Robbie did earlier or else he would have been caught if – if Kasturi didn't see Raunak through the mirror or else we both have been caught, but thank god I left my window open said by Robbie, who was looking at Kasturi)

Kasturi: Sir, please don't look at me like this

Robbie couldn't help himself from falling on his knee and saying sorry to Kasturi for not listening to her when she was screaming and yelling that Raunak was faking it all, but noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooo, at that time my friendship for Raunak was important than you.

I'm so sorry Kasturi…..

Please forgive me for letting you go to him when you were screaming and crying at the same time saying that you won't go and look what I have done.

Kasturi also couldn't help herself from falling on her knees and wiped Robbie's tears and said "Sir, don't blame your self because nobody knew the truth I knew and now its our turn to give back what Raunak have given us"

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Robbie held Kasturi by her arms and said "Yes! Kasturi, its time to give back Raunak what he have done to us and for this we will need help, but not from our family members cause they won't believe us because in-front of them we are wrong and Raunak is right. But now it's high time that this all change for good so our future is safe and secure for our kids if we decide to have one.

Kasturi blushed at Robbie's last comment because she was also thinking the same that soon or later they should start their family planning, but not until they show Raunak his right place and that place is in jail.

Robbie asked Kasturi what she was thinking, but Kasturi didn't say anything, but walked over to his wardrobe and pulled out of his shirt because she was catching a cold from her wet sari. Robbie waited for Kasturi to return in his shirt even Kasturi was excited to be in her husband's arm, but also scared at the same time because of Raunak and his evil plans, cause he can't see her happy or Robbie Sir happy.

Massi-Ji was sitting in her room thinking that she should stop Kasturi and Robbie right now from taking their marriage to the next step, but than second thought she can't change destiny and destiny wants Robbie and Kasturi to consummate their marriage.

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I think I'll stop right here cause next part is kinda romantic 😉 😆

Signing off

Nisha Virani





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Posted: 17 years ago
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😲 C-nite sooo soooooooooooooooon???? Areee if the serial had atleast quarter of this FF's pace then RK wud have got 3 kids by now🤣🤣🤣

Sure thing yaar, I am waiting here... Post next part soooon and pleaseeeeeeeee write lengthyyyyyyyyyy ones so tat we readers get the feeling of reading a novel or a story rather than just a post😳

BTW, Iam dying with laughter here imagining Kas coming to Robbie's room thro window🤣

Krishi

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: knumnum

😲 C-nite sooo soooooooooooooooon???? Areee if the serial had atleast quarter of this FF's pace then RK wud have got 3 kids by now🤣🤣🤣

Sure thing yaar, I am waiting here... Post next part soooon and pleaseeeeeeeee write lengthyyyyyyyyyy ones so tat we readers get the feeling of reading a novel or a story rather than just a post😳

BTW, Iam dying with laughter here imagining Kas coming to Robbie's room thro window🤣

Krishi



Yes! So soon cause there is a going to be a twist soon or later 😉

Nisha

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ Krishi OMG you are too funny 🤣 🤣 🤣

Great part.....and yeah its moving fast 👏 😆 😆

Update soon!......or else Krishiwill become impatient! 😆

Kay
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome dear keep up d gr8 work!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nisha ,
just read ur ff ....really good

like that u started there where everyone wanted robbie to do something but instead he turned into a statue
i think u have a wonderful way of writing ...and this is so opposite the serial ...how fast their romance is progressing ...but im not complaining ...hope u make the next part sizzling hot 😆
Keep up the good work and welcome to the forum

Veena 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Kay

@ Krishi OMG you are too funny 🤣 🤣 🤣

Great part.....and yeah its moving fast 👏 😆 😆

Update soon!......or else Krishiwill become impatient! 😆

Kay



Indeed its moving fast, but there is also a saying if everything is going right than its a beginning of a storm 😉

Who knows what kind of storm can come into Robbie and Kasturi's life? 😆

Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: livelygal

awesome dear keep up d gr8 work!!!



Thank you so much sweetly and I promise that I'll keep up the good work. 😛

Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: veena2007

hey nisha ,
just read ur ff ....really good

like that u started there where everyone wanted robbie to do something but instead he turned into a statue
i think u have a wonderful way of writing ...and this is so opposite the serial ...how fast their romance is progressing ...but im not complaining ...hope u make the next part sizzling hot 😆
Keep up the good work and welcome to the forum

Veena 😊



Thank you so much and I promise you will like the next part 😉

Nisha

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