~When Silence Speaks~ *Wrong fall* pg34 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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its going really good...you are very talented writer 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi Niki just read d 1st part .luv d way u hav incorporated characters 4m other serials specially Adi 😳 ;interesting FF ;here both r brats & our cute kasturi i wish dis was d case in d serial too.
ur style of writing is superb
update soon ..jaldi se kasturi ko adi se milao ...waitin 4 it

sonali
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG that was wayyyyyyyy beyond my expectations😛 VERY nice first part. Man I couldn't get enough of it😳 and you are asking if you should cut down on the length next time😡 Don't cut it down yaar but you're MORE than welcome to make it even bigger😳 Haila please make Adi-Kasturi meet soon I really can't wait to read the sparks fly😳

BTW why is pallavi Adi's mom???? Sorry but I would rather have parvati/janki as his mom if suyash is going to be his daddy😳

Edited by JK_5 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww thanks to all of you guys. I'm glad you like it.
I hope I didn't bore you lot! 😛

Khyatee; read my pm. Thanks alot yaar. 😳

Sofia; I will do soon. Hope you'll like the second part just as much.

Sonia: aww bless you hunnie! 🤗 🤗 That's such a nice thing to say. Heheh I'm 19 yaar, will turn 20 in November. Maybe it's coz I read alooot. All I need with me when writing is my laptop, some hot chocolate and my scruffy notebook with all my ideas/plots jotted down messily. 😛 lolz

Rock_star (I so need to know your name); thanks hun. 😃

Sonali; why thank you hun. Yea I decided to bring in my fav characters from each of the soaps I watch. Keep reading to find out more. Coz there'll be new characters every chapterish. 😛 😳

JK: lol! You joka. Okies I'll try to make it even longer. I'm glad you enjoyed that. 😳 Adi and Kasturis' milan is coming up very soon. I can only hope you'll like their meeting. 😛
Heheh I decided to have Pallavi as the mother coz she's, well evil. And Parvati is too nice. 😛 But keep reading... you'll find an interesting plot take place soon. Hehehe.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Am speechless, i didnt like it instead i loved it sweetie its amazing 😳 😳 😳 This siggy is dedicated to ur FF 😉
👏 👏 👏

Dedicated to this beautiful FF
Cant wait for Part 2


feel free to use

Luv,

Shagun🤗 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG! Niki did i tell u i am in love with Mr. Vikram Aditya already! 😉😳 Its so hard not to fall in love with Adi and Kasturi-Adi is a stroke of genius! I am sooo looking forward to other chapters! 😳

Amazing sig shagun! 😛👏
Edited by Virgo_Stars - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing totally gd
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
Shagun, I can't thank you enough!! Love youuuuuuuuuuuu!!! 🤗

Nainaaaaaaaaaaaa!! After SUCH a looooooong time!! How have you been?? 😳
Awww bless you. Hopefully the 2nd chapter will be up soon. Got my ideas all set out for it.
Heheh Vikram Aditya Mehra is the best character. I love him myself. 😳

im nobody; (hunnie you so got to tell me your name!!) Heheh thank you hun. Will do.

Shaz: thanks hun. Will do soon.

muqualp: OMG I'm seeing you on after such a looooong time as well!!! How have you been? Why thanks hun. Will put up the second part really soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29

Who isnt smitten by Mr Attitude Vikram Aditya Mehra 😳 😳

@Nainu: Thanchu , ur rite abt Adi😳

Niki: Dont thank😳 Am glad u liked it cant wait for next chapter


Luv,

Shagun(JD)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Okies then, here are my other characters that will be present in my fan fic. Each of them play an important role. I hope you enjoy reading their parts.

Mukti Deshmukh Kasturi s' one true friend.

Also known as *CID chushhmish* coz of her firey attitude. But is kind, caring and a very loyal friend. They meet at college and become friends easily. Mukti's always there to help Kasturi out of any tight spot she gets into. Always there for her through thick and thin.

Kritika Sabbarawaal Robbies' youngest sister

Oh just as bad as Robbie. Just because she's the sister of a v. famous brother she throws her weight around everywhere she goes. Not nice to anyone. Has a click of 'loyal' girls that hang around with her just because she's the rich and famous-for controversies. Also has a huuuuuuuuge crush on Adi. Sucks up to him whenever she sees him. (Adi being the 'playboy' he is takes it in his stride and plays along 😉. Another thing which Robbie HATES!)

Shivani Sabbarawaal Robbies other sister.

A year older to Kritika, beautiful but just as bad. Both go to the same Law College as Adi and hang out together. (Obviously- wherever Adi goes Kritika follows and Shivani... well she's there for a reason.) Shivani has a very rocky past with Adi... you'll find out what that is soon enough. Adi hates her now.

Bharat Aggarawaal Adi's infamous side-kick. (i.e partner in crime!)

As I've described him, been very good friends since their childhood days! He's always there to help him out of a tricky spot and vice versa. 😛 Most of the time Bharat is at Adi s' house chilling out.
Has a MAJOR crush on Kritika, has that charm that girls fall for. 😛 😳

I think that should do for now. These characters are in my second and third chapters, so here's me introducing them as it'll be easeir for you to visualise! Will post these on the first page as well.
I hope you'll enjoy the second chapter. 😳
Edited by Niki_18 - 18 years ago

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