An alternate ending

Hello...I am not any professional writer but I got many stories in my thoughts which I want to tell...I have a small fiction story as a different ending to kzk2..

I consider it from point before leap and base is- anurag and prerna got to know truth of komo and they ran after escaping her goons and reach a estranged bridge...

My story will have this premise- just a little teaser-

Komolika shoots both anurag- prerna and they fall off the bridge in small river but suddenly a red duppata flows over her and she sees it is from a nearby temple,She scream not again and tries to shoot it also but got disbalanced and gets hanged from bridge..

Next prerna is in a home with 2 new people,they say- although We don't want to use her but we don't have another chance and next there is anurag passes by prerna , they look each other and moves forward..

So please let me know any thoughts on this.. suggestions are welcome 🙂

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.from what point ? Jahan se raita failaya? 😆 Well a simple suspense would do..anurag changes into an irritable man, post bridge kaand. Audience are speculating for 2 to 3 weeks as to why he did it. He is alone , aloof from everyone .

After all the drama , he confides in anupam or someone close to him...play fake revenge with pre..towards the end , a week before it ended , pre learns the truth somehow...she confronts anurag and questions him as to why he couldn't trust her.. mr bajaj proposes pre. Pre is double minded. Anurag tries to convince her afte getting rid of komo. Pre finally chooses anurag over bajaj. Bajaj accepts her decision and goes away from.her life as a friend.

Itna simple aise legendary writers se na ho paata. Isko to audience bhi dekh leti and acting bhi ho jaati.

Ismain hospital, police station aur 100 parties nahi hai par. Kaise hota yeh KZK main?

On a side note what about Komolika? Uska jalwa kahan dekhne ko milta?

Originally posted by: _charu_

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.from what point ? Jahan se raita failaya? 😆 Well a simple suspense would do..anurag changes into an irritable man, post bridge kaand. Audience are speculating for 2 to 3 weeks as to why he did it. He is alone , aloof from everyone .

After all the drama , he confides in anupam or someone close to him...play fake revenge with pre..towards the end , a week before it ended , pre learns the truth somehow...she confronts anurag and questions him as to why he couldn't trust her.. mr bajaj proposes pre. Pre is double minded. Anurag tries to convince her afte getting rid of komo. Pre finally chooses anurag over bajaj. Bajaj accepts her decision and goes away from.her life as a friend.

This sounds extremely dull Charu. Sorry, but it is way too much like real life!

And completely out of character for Prerna to even consider a proposal of marriage from Mr. Bajaj, especially after she learns of the truth behind Anurag's actions. She didn't give Mr. Bajaj's feelings any attention, even when she thought Anurag was a baddie who tried to murder her. Why would she suddenly think she needs to choose between Mr. Bajaj and Anurag? That doesn't sound like Prerna. Prerna is all about Anurag and only about Anurag.

And as a passionate viewer of this show, I need my fix of traditions, rituals, weddings, fancy dress, hospital scenes, police station, kidnappings, love, hate, angst etc.

I thought the ending was perfect! Almost as if I wrote it myself.😃