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Tellywoodaddict

@Tellywoodaddict

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Breezi11197
You totally nailed it !!! The emotions were beautifully written loved how god sent bajaj to her when she needed someone the most ..please do write more on them

I will thank you 💕

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Tellywoodaddict

@Tellywoodaddict

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Advaymerijaan
Very nice OS . I m feeling so positive after reading this ..Most of all I love the song chosen❤️❤️ Keep writing

I'm so glad you felt that way . Thank you for reading

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Tellywoodaddict

@Tellywoodaddict

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi
Awww, so so lovely!
I love song fables and I loved how to placed the lyrics so carefully. The entire description was on point.
He's always there for her
Even though they're not meant to be...
Amazing OS! Hitting at the right note of lost love and found companionship!
❤️

I love this comment so much. Thank you for the lovely feedback and I'm so glad I could make you feel that way.

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Tellywoodaddict

@Tellywoodaddict

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: daisydee425
Nice update

thank you so much

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Tellywoodaddict

@Tellywoodaddict

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Moushumi
Nice.do write more.thanks

thank you so much

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Hey have edited and posted my comments on page 1...😊

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Opsora2090

@opsora2090

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

your emotion and the song just showing me the every sceneright now.. just love love love this stor dera .. pls write up more

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Pain, comfort and then love. This is how I will describe this piece of work. You flawlessly merged the lyrics with Prerna’s emotions. And then comes my knight in shining armour

Lovely❤️

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Tellywoodaddict

@Tellywoodaddict

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Sometimes when the clouds are dark and the fog of misery is thick, a individual tends to drown and the same thing is happening to Prerna..Stranded and alone she has fallen in the mire of misery..She is hurt and broken but yet as they say there is light at the end of the tunnel and her light was Rishabh Bajaj...As he came to her rescue the mist of fog cleared paving way for PreRish new beginnings...This was wonderfully expressed and written...This PreRish tale had subtle but powerful emotions overflowing...Very good...👍🏼

thank you so much for this detailed review. I'm a sucker for such reviews and I'm so glad I could express what I meant to and you all loved it. I love every word you just said. Thank you so much