FF On PRB,MT n Uma-Sudhanshu.Update pg 2

PART -1

Prerna waiting for Mr.Bajaj in a restaurant n Mihir enters in with Tulsi…..

Prerna(walks towards Mihir):Mr.Bajaj aap ne apne baal kale karwa liye aur mujse pucha tak nahi aur yeh kaun hai aapke saath?

Mihir(surprised):Dekhiye Madame aapko koi misunderstanding hui hai…Mai Mihir Virani hoon Mr.Bajaj nahi aur yeh jo mere saath hai woh meri dharma patni Tulsi Virani hai jise mai bahot pyar karta hoon.

Prerna: Acha mazaak kar lete hai aap Mr.Bajaj…aap mein yeh khoobi bhi hai muje aaj pata chala….ab chaliye muje bahot bhukh lagi hai…kabse aapka intezar kar rahi hoon.

Tulsi: Aap kyun mere Mihir k peeche padi hui hai…kaha na yeh Mihir Virani hai mere pati…hamari shaadi ko 30 saal hogaye…

Prerna(getting furious):Tum apna muh band rakho…Mr.Bajaj aap aa rahe hai ki mai Anurag k saath chali jaon…

Mihir: Sabse pehle toh aap mere patni k saath tameez se baat kijye…aur doosri aapko jis kisi saath jana hai jaiye…muje meri Tulsi k saath akela chod dijye…

Prerna: Maine Anurag ko chod kar bahot badi galti kar di..woh bechara mujse kitna pyar karta hai..Komolika se shaadi ki, Aparna se shaadi ki phir bhi mujse pyar karna nahi choda aur aap ne ek hi pal mein muje bhoola diya aur ise Tulsi ko apni patni bana diya….mai jaa rahi hoon…ab mera aap se koi rishta nahi hai….

(She Goes Away….n Mihir Tulsi r about to take dinner when Sudhanshu enters n starts shouting Uma…Uma seeing Tulsi)

Sudhanshu: Uma…tum yahan ho…maine tumhe poori chawl mein dhundha….chalo ghar chalo…..

(He holds her hand)

Tulsi: Chodiye muje…kaun hai aap…aur mera naam Uma nahi Tulsi hai….Tulsi Mihir Virani….

Sudhanshu: Uma yeh tum kaisi baatein kar rahi ho….meri bimaari tumhe kaise lag gayi…dekho mai janta hoon hamari shaadi jab hui thi tab mai aadha pagal tha lekin ab tumhare pyar ne muje bilkul thik kar diya…ab mai kabhi tum par vaar nahi karunga….

Mihir: Aap jo bhi hai please…meri Tulsi ko apni Uma kehna band kijye….yeh meri patni hai Mrs.Tulsi Mihir Virani….

(Sudhanshu again gets wild n attacks Mihir)

Sudhanshu: Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri Uma ko tumhari patni kehne ki…Uma sirf meri hai….

Tulsi: Chodo…chodo…mere Mihir ko…chod do varna mai tumhe maar dalungi…maine pehle apni saas aur apne bete ko maar dala hai…ab ise list mein tumhara naam bhi aa jayega….chodo mere Mihir ko….

Mihir: Nahi Tulsi…ise mat maarna…varna ek baar phir tumhe jail hojayegi aur phir hame alag rehna padega….Shantiniketan mein tumhare jaise dhokla aur koi nahi bana sakta….ise mat maarna Tulsi….

Tulsi(cries): Toh phir tumhi kaho Mihir mai tumhe ise pagal se bachane k liye kya karu…..chahe muje jail hojaye Mihir…par tumhe ise tarah maar khate nahi dekh sakti….(takes a flower vaas)mai iske sir mein yeh maarti hun…ise yeh marega bhi nahi aur mai tumhe bhi bacha lungi….

(She hits the flower vaas on his head n he faints)

Mihir: Acha hua jo tumne ise jaan se nahi maara…varna ek baar phir hume alag-alag rehna padta….

Tulsi: Ise chodo…ab muje Shantiniketan le chalo Mihir…hum log dinner k liye kal jayenge…aaj din hi acha nahi…pehle woh Prerna aur ab yeh pagal…..

Mihir: Tum thik keh rahi ho Tulsi…hum kal dinner k liye jayenge…abhi Shantiniketan jaakar tum mere liye Golpapdi banana aur hum dono pyar se ek doosre woh khilayenge….

End Of Part-1

BNice.......... but some thing like nehavarun's ff

DOnt mind.........

Hey....nice one!!Kinda like Neha's ff but i like it 😃 Please cont soon!

yeah it is inspired by Neha...hope u all liked it.. 😉

OMG this is ROFL stuff!!!
Too good Devu, I am like laughing my head off n my family members r thinking I hv gone crazy!


This is better than what I wrote 👏

"Komolika se shaadi ki, Aparna se shaadi ki phir bhi mujse pyar karna nahi choda"

Uma…tum yahan ho…maine tumhe poori chawl mein "dhundha….chalo ghar chalo….."

"Chodo…chodo…mere Mihir ko…chod do varna mai tumhe maar dalungi…maine pehle apni saas aur apne bete ko maar dala hai…"

"…..chahe muje jail hojaye Mihir…par tumhe ise tarah maar khate nahi dekh sakti….(takes a flower vaas)mai iske sir mein yeh maarti hun…ise yeh marega bhi nahi aur mai tumhe bhi bacha lungi…."

😆 I need the yahoo ROFL icon here!

Sorry Devu didnt reply to you here.. replied in the kyunki section- it was fantabulous and REALLY enjoyable!!

Gr8 stuff!! 👏

WOW ~ Awesome 👏
good job yaar!!

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WOOOOW Devu this is soo funny....mein ne apni saas aur bete ko mara hai....
Gr8 FF do conti...... 😃

gr8 fanfic...do cont soon 👏

Part-2


Mihir n Tulsi return back to SN…..Next day in the morning….Tulsi n Mihir in their room….

Tulsi: Mihir utho…kam se kam aaj k din toh jaldi uth jao…muje bina pareshaan kiye….

Mihir: Kyun Madamji…aaj koi khaas din hai jo mai jaldi uth jao aur who bhi bina pareshaan kiye…..

Tulsi: Kyun…tumhe yaad nahi hai aaj kya hai…?????

Mihir: Haan yaad aaya….aaj tumhe Kesar k yaha jaana hai…right?

Tulsi: Nahi patidev….aaj muje kahin nahi jaana….hey Ram…kaise ho tum Mihir…khud apna janam din bhul jaate jo….

Mihir: Ohhh…toh aaj yeh baat hai….Madamji isme muje yaad rakhne ki kya zarurat hai…tum hona yaad dilane k liye….

Tulsi: Acha ab baatein banana band karo aur utho….phir mandir bhi toh jaana hai….aur uske baad muje bahar jaana hai….Uthooooooooo…..

Mihir: Acha baba thik hai…..

(Mihir gets ready for office n before b4 to office Mihir n Tulsi go to temple n from there Tulsi goes to buy gift for Mihir)

Tulsi in shopping mall….

Tulsi(to salesman): Koi achi cheez dikhayiye…..yeh ghadi bahot achi hai….ek kaam kijye muje yeh pack kar dijye….

Salesman: Sorry Madam yeh toh already kisi ne kharid li hai….aap use Madam ko dekh rahi hai…unhone li hai yeh watch…..

(Tulsi goes to tht woman….)

Tulsi: Suniye zara….

Woman turns around….Tulsi is shocked to see…….

The woman was Prerna….

Tulsi: Tummm…..

Prerna: Haan mai….kyun tum ise tarah se kyun react kar ho jaise koi bhoot dekh liya ho….

Tulsi: Tum dekhna bhoot dekhne k barabar hi hai……

Prerna: Tumhari himmat kaise hui muje bhoot kehne ki….how dare u….ek toh Mr. Bajaj ko apna pati bana diya aur uske baad muje bhoot kaha…(getting furious)

Tulsi: Khabardar agar mere Mihir ko apne Mr. Bajaj kaha toh…..woh sirf aur sirf mere hai…..tumhare jaise aur kitne aa gaye jo mere Mihir ko apna kehte the….

Prerna: Kitni badi galatfemi hai tumhe…..jise tum apna Mihir keh rahi woh Mr. Bajaj hai….mere pehle aur teesre pati…..kal jab mai vaha se chali gayi uske baad unka fone aaya tha muj par….

Tulsi: Jhoot mat bolo…muje jhooth se sakt nafrat hai…kal Mihir mere saath the aur Meera hame pareshaan kar rahi thi isiliye unhone apna mobile bhi band kar diya tha…..

Prerna: Woh sab mai nahi janti…Mr. Bajaj ne muje phone karke kaha unki koi majboori hai isiliye unhone aisa kiya…..isiliye woh mere saath dinner par nahi aaye….

Tulsi: Tum pagal hogayi ho….mere Mihir ki koi majboori nahi….woh mujse kuch nahi chupate…bhale mai unse sab kuch chupao….

Prerna: Acha tum raho apni galatfemi….agli baar jab Mr. Bajaj mere saath honge toh mai tumhe bataungi…khud apni aankhon se dekh lena….

Prerna Sees Mr. Bajaj entering the mall…..

Prerna: Mr.Bajaj aap aa gaye…

Tulsi: Mihir…tum…iske Mr. Bajaj bhi ho….peechli baar maine tumhe maaf kar diya tha jab tum Mandira k saath pakde gaye the….lekin ise baar mai tumhe maaf nahi karungi…..

(She goes away 4m there crying n completely broken at heart……)

End Of Part-2

Part-3

(Heart broken Tulsi walking inbetween the road inspite of heavy traffic thinking of Mihir)

Tulsi(to herself):Kyun Mihir….kyun kiya tumne aisa mere saath….maine pehle bhi tumhe maaf kiya tha jab tumne Mandira k saath apna rishta joda tha ise umeed se ki tum aisi galti phir nahi karoge lekin tumne mera bharosa ek baar phir tod diya…..kyun Mihir….kyun?

Suddenly a car cums 4m behind n dashes with Tulsi……

(Prerna n Bajaj in mall)

Prerna: Mr. Bajaj aapki aisi kya majboori thi jo kal apne Tulsi ko apni patni kaha aur woh bhi apna naam badal kar…

Mr.Bajaj: Prerna maine kab kaha ki meri koi majboori hai…..

Prerna: Iska matlab aapki koi majboori nahi thi….apne sach mein Tulsi ko apni patni banaya hai…..

Mr.Bajaj: Tum kya keh rahi ho…muje kuch samajh nahi aa raha….

Prerna: Lekin ab muje sab samajh mein aa raha hai….mai janti hoon aap hamesha mujse jalte the ki mera affair Anurag k saath hai…isiliye badla lene k liye aap ne bhi meri jaan k bahar affair rakha…….

Mr.Bajaj(getting angry): Tumhe jo samajhna hai tum samajho…muje koi fark nahi padta….tumhe samajhana mushkil hi na mumkin hai…..pata nahi Anurag tumhe itne saalo tak kaise seh paya hai….

Prerna: Anurag kaise seh paya matlab? Shayad aap bhul rahe hai ki mai 30 saalo se aapke saath reh rahi hoon…..

Mr.Bajaj: 30 saalo se tum mere ghar mein reh rahi thi…mere saath nahi…..tum toh hamesha Anurag k saath hi thi…..jabhi tum gayab hojati ho tab tumhe dhoodhne k liye mai Anurag k ghar hi jaata hoon….aur hamesha tum uske room mai ya phir uski god mein hi milti ho muje….aur agar kabhi galti se tum mere saath hoti ho toh bhi Anurag aur apne use nayalak bete Prem k baare mein hi baatein karti rehti ho….bolo ab iske siva kabhi bhi tumne mere baat ki hai…..

Prerna: Maine apni zindagi k itne saal aapke ghar mein kat dale….aur aaj aap muje yeh sila de rahe hai…..muje naa Anurag k saath hi rehna chahiye tha….galti ki jo maine aap se shaadi ki….lekin mai jaa rahi hoon Anurag k paas….aap rahiye apni Tulsi k paas….

(She goes away leaving Bajaj alone)

Mr.Bajaj(to himself): Maine zindagi bhar tumse beinteha pyar kiya hai aura age bhi karta rahunga….bhale hi tum zindagi bhar Anurag k paas raho…..Hey bhagwan…woh kaunsi ghadi thi jab aap ne muje Prerna se milvaya aur mai use mar-mitta….use galti ab muje zindagi bhar bhugatni padegi…..khambakht yeh dil Prerna se pyar karna bhi nahi chodta….

(Mihir In Office….get a call 4m Hospital)

Mihir:Hello...Mihir Virani speaking….

Nurse(4m Hospital): Sir! Aapki wife ka accident hogaya hai….

Mihir(shocked): What!!!!!!

Nurse: Jee haan Sir…hume unke mobile phone se aapka number…aap jitni jaldi ho sake yaha Life Care hospital aa jaiye…

Mihir: Mai abhi poohchta hoon….

(Sudhanshu who was beaten by Tulsi is admitted in the same hospital…..n Uma reaches there)

Uma(to receptionist): Dekhiye mere pati ko yaha admit kiya gaya hai…..unka naam Sudhanshu Jajodiya hai…aap zara muje bata sakti hai woh kis room mein hai…..

Sudhanshu cums 4m behind n shouts Uma….Uma towards him n meanwhile Mihir enters…..

End Of Part-3