Rishi-Prerna & Prem Mukti ff pg 16

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I didn't watch the duppatta scene coz my computer didn't want me to, coz when the duppatta scene came on the video went back to the start, and I didn't want to see the torture all over again, mujhe mein itni sahen shakti nahin hai.

I am a hardcore Rishabh Bajaj fan, and a good enough Prerna fan. But the way she was listening to Anurag's I lost my love crap on Monday's episode. She was listening as if she is hurt that she lost Anurag too kinda look. That has made me mad, I am kinda doubting Prerna's love for Mr. Bajaj now. So yea well that's not the point of this topic, the point is my perspective on how Rishabh will react to the whole Prem Mukti and Kul triangle. And what is he gonna do about it. Let's take it as a sort of fan fiction.

Rishabh Bajaj has made his entry, he has been ignoring Prerna's love, meaning being very cold to her, and Prerna is very frustrated, and doesn't know what has gotten into him. RIshabh is back with all his wealth and even a bigger business tycoon than before. He has changed Sneha back to normal, and he managed to get everything from Prem that belonged to him. Rishabh still loves all his kids and behaves the same with all the kids as he used to, besides Prerna and Anurag Basu. In fact he has become friendlier with Sampada, coz they both are sailing in the same boat, the only difference is Bajaj has been on there for the past 30 something years. Prerna and Anurag are jealous with the proximity between Sampada and Mr. Bajaj, they look at it as if they are having a romantic relationship. But at this age nobody can be as shameless as Anurag and Prerna who look at each with the looks that teenage lovers give each other, even Prem and Mukti don't go that far.

So yea it is the night before Kul and Mukti's wedding. Everybody is involved with the wedding preparations, especially Prerna which is why she doesn't say anything to Mr. Bajaj, she is desperate for his love. She decides to wait after the wedding.

Anurag as a failure is just crying that he couldn't do anything about this whole situation, and Prem is just sulking on the kabhie na sukoon aaya thing and Mukti is too.

Rishabh Bajaj on the other hand goes to Kul's house.

Kul: Aare Bajaj uncle aap.

Kul's father: Yes, Mr. Bajaj, aap yahan aur iss waqt.

Kul's mom: Is there a problem, Mr. bajaj?

Rishabh with his usual gentleman self first gives them a namaskar.

R: Yes there is a problem, I don't want this marriage to take place.


the whole khanna family is shocked, they have no words to say.

R: Kul, you know very well that Mukti loves Prem.

Then in the background, Rishabh justifies himself to the Khannas and they agree, Kul agrees not to marry Mukti, but nothing will be revealed to anybody yet, this plan is just known to RIshabh and Khannas.

Rishabh asks the Khannas to attend the wedding and all and act like this conversation never existed. They agree to Mr. Bajaj's demand.

Bajaj comes back home and sees the preparations going on to the fullest. Rishabh looks at Prerna, she looks at him, she is looking for answers in those cold eyes. They are basically living like husband and wife who don't have any relationship, no matter how hard she tries, RIshabh doesn't react to her love. He just lives like he is a relationship that is just namesake.

It is the day of the wedding, in fact the time for the wedding. Prem is upto something, he is planning to elope with Mukti but by the time he was about to leave, there is somebody at the door. That somebody is none other than Rishabh Bajaj.

Prem is shocked to see his Daddy Cool, at the door.

P: Look Daddy Cool, u have taken everything from me that belonged to u, now u have taken ur revenge, now don't stop me from what I am about to do, I don't want something wrong to happen from my hands.

R: Is that a threat, but tell me, when have u done something right, remind me of one such good thing that u have done, coz I can't recollect any.

Prem is dumbfound, he is about to leave when, Rishabh asks him to stop.

Rishabh has a bag in his hand, and he gives to Prem.

P: What's this?

R: Get ready, we are going to the wedding.

Prem is shocked and opens the bag, he sees a sherwani and see the outfit of a groom at an Indian wedding. He looks at Daddy Cool.

R: Yea Prem that's right, u r gonna marry Mukti, Kul won't.

P: Are u kidding me?

R: That's up to u to decide.

Prem believes his Daddy Cool, and also thinks that he doesn't have another choice.

He dresses up like a groom and puts the sehra on too. Kul doesn't reach the wedding but his family does.

Rishabh and Prem reach the wedding, obviously with the sehra on, everybody thinks that it is Kul.

Mukti reluctantly comes to the mandap and her eyes are searching for Prem, she is thinking how come Prem didn't come and create a problem.

Prerna and Anurag look at each other when Rishabh walks in with Prem (Kul- is what they think)

Prerna smiles, Anurag is flaring his nostrils with anger.

Part II comin in 15 minutes.

Edited by Garv_Kumud_4eva - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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great story plz write more 👏 👏 👏
and yeah dont get upset bez there are 15 viwes and nobody replied/ showed the appreciation bez this is how they are............................
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kya fanfic hain, lajawaab!bohot aacha sammie beta, zindagi mein kucch to accha kaam kiya pm ka fanfic likhkra, tumhe mera aashirwaad 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Prem believes his Daddy Cool, and also thinks that he doesn't have another choice.

He dresses up like a groom and puts the sehra on too. Kul doesn't reach the wedding but his family does.
Rishabh and Prem reach the wedding, obviously with the sehra on, everybody thinks that it is Kul.
Mukti reluctantly comes to the mandap and her eyes are searching for Prem, she is thinking how come Prem didn't come and create a problem.
Prerna and Anurag look at each other when Rishabh walks in with Prem (Kul- is what they think)
Prerna smiles, Anurag is flaring his nostrils with anger.

Mukti is crying and is very upset, kabhi na sukoon aaya, Komolika and Debo are smiling and are enjoying this wedding to the fullest. Prerna, Anurag, Sam, Komo, Debo and all the other folks are wondering how come Prem is not here.

RIshabh tells them that he is in jail, for the night, he won't be able to get out.

ANurag is angry, and is about to give Rishabh a bhashaan…

R: Mr. Basu, hold it… it's just for tonight. Prerna and Mr. Basu don't worry nothing will happen to ur son. I have special treatment available for him in jail, just like he is at home.

Prerna is hurt with his comment. Rishabh just walks away towards the mandap as the pandit is about to start. Prem holds Mukti's hand, Mukti thinks he is Kul, and remembers the moments she spend with Prem, and kabhi naa sukoon aaya. Lol.

They are taking the saath phere, and they are now married, Mukti is damn upset.
Prem finally opens his sehra thing, and everybody is shocked.

Prem and Mukti look at each other, Prem gives her a cute smile and Mukti is so happy but shocked. She doesn't know what to say, Prem looks at Rishabh, Rishabh gives him a thumbs up. Kul comes to the wedding and Rishabh welcomes him.

Prerna Anurag are shocked.

Prem: Thanks Daddy Cool, and I am sorry for everything that I have done.

R: Don't thank me Prem, I didn't do u a favor, I did myself a favor.

Prem and Mukti come and take his aashirwaad.

Rishabh blesses them. The whole family waits till the guests leave, they don't wanna embarrass Mukti and all yet. The Khannas are the only ones who stay back besides the basus and the bajajs.

PART III coming in 30 minutes… hopefully the last part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wah lajawaab kya fanfic hain-sahmein maza aagya sammie-desperatelyw aitin for part 3 😳 30 minutes ka intezaar kisliye-oh chaa khana pina khane ke liye-no rpoblme, sab khakhe pike aana 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg how wonderful is this..waiting for part 3 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sammie its just awesome.i am really waiting 4 part 3.rishabh is as cool as always in ur fanfic.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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im waitn for part 3 sammie, plz mere bhaiya aur mukti ke scenes bhi dikhana 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool! waiting for the 3rd part..Mr B rocks!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i am waiting
keep it up

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