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Posted: 19 years ago
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Guys...I have been thinking about ..how the story of Prem and Mukti will end????...and last night...i though of this story.Well...its not a fanfic....coz this is only the clamix of Prem and Mukti's luv story....

Okay....even after years passed away...Prem will not relaize his love for Mukti so....at last Mukti will give up ...and decide to marry someone else......Now the story begins.....

(Tomorrow...Mukti is going to marry someone else and she is in her room...thinking about all the things that happened with her in her passed days......just then perna enters the room)
Perna:Mukti....????
Mukti:Ji....choti ma..
Perna:Tum yis sadhi se khush to
ho na..????
Mukti:ji...choti ma..main bahoat khush hu..????Kabhi Kabhi lagta hai ki......main hamesha galat thi....main hamesha ye sochti thi ki...sayad ek din...kabhi na kabhi to prem bhi mujha pyaar karega...laykin nahin...Prem ko to pata he nahin ki pyaar kya hota hai....but anyway...i am really happy .I know...the only way i can forget Prem is to be someone's else.
Perna:Mukti...main samaj sakti hu...laykin ek ristey k katam hojane se jindagi nahin rukti hai..we should try to move on in life.I know...its very hard to forget someone whom we had loved but....why..???why should we cry for someone who even donot think about u..???Mukti....time will make u forget everything ...just have faith in yourself.Anyway...kal tumhari sadhi hai....i will just wish that u get all the happiness in life.Ok..its too late...go to sleep good night
Mukti:good...night

(In prem's house....)

Debonita:Prem....tumhai pata hai na ki kal....????
Prem:ya..i know...that Miss basanti is getting married tomorrow..??So,wht..??who cares..???
Debo:U care..Prem..??U really do care for her..
Prem:Who the hell are u to remind me about whom i care and whom i donot..??
Debo:Prem.....u know wht is ur problem..????Ur problem is that u really donot know....wht u want in life..??and wht u have been missin..??
Prem:Look u just...shut up and get lost...
Debo:Okay...Prem if u donot wish to know the truth than okay...but prem..u will regret ur whole life...coz just because of ur ego....u will simply lose everything in life.Prem...I know..u still love Mukti alot....and today...if u donot go and stop her...u will never get her back again in life..??
Prem:Miss...nautanki..i donot love her...i really donot love that basanti and it makes no difference to me with whom she get married or whtever..???
Debo:Ok...if u donot love her than why the hell is that tears in ur eyes....???U know Prem....u can hide the truth from urself but ur eyes speak .Prem...donot do this mistake .??U are going to lose her forever.Prem..i really do care for u coz i luv u alot but i know...ur happiness is with mukti...and all i want is ur happiness.
(Then Debo leaves the room and Prem starts thinkin about Mukti....and all the moments they spend together)

Ok...i will write the ending part soon...do comment
Hope u all enjoyed....

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Posted: 19 years ago
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super! do continue soon! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's gud but debo...... it seems kinda off.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its reli good yaar u should continue soon yaar m waitin
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesomee
i kno it aint a fanfic but plzzzz contt 😊

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