New Fan-Fic Prem and Mukti! - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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well i didn't get that many replies 😕 doesn't anyone like my fan fic 😭 i try really hard you no and this writing is very hard, but i do it only for you guys 😭 😔
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Posted: 19 years ago
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whawha wha wha hw ahswwha hwwhawhahw

kya baat hai

aachi hai

Why dont u become's ekta;s writter
it is awesoem
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
ur fan fic is rely gud
do please continue
PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Mukti and Prem go inside the restraunt, they enter and take a seat and order their food.



Prem:tum kuch bol kyun nahin hoon? i thought your those bakauv type. Mukti's irritated and doesn't feel like saying anyhing, which makes prem even more mad.
Prem thinking:why isn't she saying anything? kya meine kuch zyaada kardiya?

Prem:okay...okay i'm sorry Few girls enter and prem starts looking at them and whistles at them and they turn around and smile, mukti watching all this doesn't care and continue's to eat,prem again irritated not to see mukti's reaction
Prem:mera hogaya mein jaraha hoon
Mukti:mera bhi hogaya, chalo
Prem:basanti...tum...i
Mukti's phone rings
Mukti:hold on premprems irritated
Mukti:hello...haan choti maa, voh mein aur prem berakfast karne aayethe...kya! sach! tik hain hum aabhi aathe hain
Prem:what..what happened kya hua, kya kaha mother india ne?
Mukti:tum chalo tu sahin mein gari mein batathi hoon
they go in the car, and as soon as they sit
prem asks: now tell me, kya baath hai?
Mukti:woh sneha ku dekhne ladke waleh aaye hain, aur humme jaana hai.
Prem:reallysmiles i'm really happy for sneha
Mukti:mein bhi, sneha ne kya kuch nahin saha aur aab usse khushi mil rahi hai i'm very happy for her

they reach bajaj residence and inside they find the ladke wale sitting inside and prerna & bajaj talking and laughing with them

Prerna:loh yeh dono bhi aagayeand introduces them prem aur mukti.they greet each other, mukti rushes into sneha's room, sneha is sitting by her dresser getting ready and helps her get ready, when prem enters
Mukti:i'm so happy for you,Akshat tumhe bohaat khush rakhega
Prem:haan sneha i approve him, he's handsome,smart,ache khandan ka hai aur voh tumse college se pyaar karta hai.
Sneha:thanks prem
Mukti:Ready?
Sneha:takes a deep breathHaan
Mukti and Sneha enter and prem behind them,they sit Sneha serves tea to everyone, no audible everyone's smiling and talking and finally
prerna says:tho yeh rishta paka
they leave while everyone's happy Mukti hugs Sneha and Prem looks at them happily

That Night:
Prerna enters mukti's room


Prerna:Mukti kal raat meine jo tumse pucha tha...
Mukti:haan choti ma voh mein...
Perna:dekh agar tujhe yeh rishta manzoor nahin hai to tik hai, yeh tumhara faisla haismiles and turns around to leave
Mukti:Choti ma mujhe yeh rishta manzoor haiprerna turns back and is surprised by her answer and smiles and goes towards mukti
Prerna:mein aaj bohaat khush hoon
Mukti:par choti ma aap prem se pehle puch layeh,mein nahin chahti ki prem mujhse majboori mein ya koi dabaav mein shaadi kare
Prerna:tik hai, mein abhi jakeh puch thi hoon leaves and goes to prems room and he's deciding his outfit for the engagement and keeps throwing the ones he doesn't like on the bed when prerna enters
Prerna:prem yeh kya kare ho?
Prem:woh mein sneha ke engagement ke liya kapde dekh raha tha, but i'm thinking of just making a new one-ek naya kharidlu you know
Prerna:yeh chor, dekh prem mujhe tujhse kuch baath karni hai
Prem:please not another bhashan, because i'm really tired right now tho hum kal baat karte hain
Prerna:mein tumhare aur Mukti ki shaadi ki baat karne aayi hoon, par agar tum nahin chahte tho tik haiturns around and begin to leave
Prem:Tairyeh kya kehna chahti hai aap turns around smiling
Prerna:kya tu mukti se shaadi karega?
Prem:mein...aur mukti se never!
Prerna:magar mukti tho kuch aur soch thi hai
Prem:kya?...what'd she say i mean mukti ne kya kaha aapse
Prerna:yahi ke usne bhi dekha ke tum badal gaye ho
Prem:usne na kar diya?
Prerna:nahin, shayad who tumse abhi pyaar karti hai jo usne haan kardi
Prem:kyaexcited

oh yeah i posted a pic of akshat on the first page as Sneha's husband or to be.

Sorry guys i gotta go now, hope ya liked it i will update soon!😊
Edited by SFatima328 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
wow ur fan fics r pretty cool. they r loads of fun to read except
wats a drama without a problem?? nyway plz keep ritin its
really good!! 😊 😉 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
dat was rely gud
please do continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
wow realllyyyy well written had fun reading it please continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
hey this is really gud!pls continue sn.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue.....great fanfic.....im so excited to read the next part!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
That is really good plz continue fast.

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