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Posted: 19 years ago
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Arre Switzerland wala story ka kya hua?Can I continue that 1 too;))
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yaar sukhi .prerna4rishave ,amali,ronitfan(if any1else i dont remember sorry)u guys r simply rocking,its the most amazing topic tahnks takshila(hope spelling is rit)u gusy story is just too good ,i think u guys should replace all the riters in ektas land πŸ˜† πŸ˜† and make ur own serial,coz i wil be it biggest ans most avid fan πŸ˜› ,i m simply luving ur stories,compared to taht stupid track going on in kzk
keep it up and btw i m compiling ur story and will make a proper format and post it as 1 story,i hope u guys dont mind,do tell.its worth the story to be read as one
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
WOW...thaksi this is such a gr8 idea πŸ‘ .i loved it.
and guys...you ppl are doing fab job.its so much fun reading all these stories. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
wow .. u guys rock man .. proud 2 be a ronitian
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok ill try to continue the switzerland wala story.

In the morning prerna wakes up and sees that Rishabh is not there beside her and thinks wheather where has he gone so early...its not even his office timeing yet...then she hears someone coming...the door gets opened and she is surprised to see that Rishabh has brought her breakfast...Rishabh is holding a tray in which there is a plate of omlate,which is a bit uncooked and toost slices which got too much toosted πŸ˜† and a cup of tea which seems fine(wo tu peene ke baad hi pata chale ga πŸ˜† ).
Rishabh sees that prerna has waken up...so he gives her his very cute usual killer smile and wishes her moring.he comes closer to the bed where prerna is sitting and keeps the tray there on the side table beside the bed and then he goes to prerna and holds her neck and gives her a sweet kiss on her forehead 😳 ... he then sits with her and asks her if she liked the surprise...n prerna is like...omg Mr Bajaj why did u do all this...on listning this Bajaj slides his hand very silkly on prerna's hand n grabs them n kisses them.and says: Anything for my lady love...he then puts his hand behind him n takes out a fresh red rose from his back pocket and slides it down from her forehead to her lips and gives it to prerna...and says: main chahta hun ke tum hamesha is gulab ki tarah mehkti raho aur hamari zindagi main iss ke rang bikhair do. 😳...after saying this he pulls her gently towards himself and slightly n passionately rubs his cheeks on hers n gives her a hot!! kiss on the cheeks(mods will ban me if i make him kiss somewhere else πŸ˜† )n hugs her tightly that they can even feel each others raised heart beats and worm breaths on their shoulders. 😳Rishabh dips his face between her neck n shoulder and starts kissing her....prerna feels this immense feeling of love from her man and respond equally to it by hugging him more tightly.... while Rishabh is busy kissing her on the shoulder and neck prerna is thing that she's got the best HUBBY IN THE WORLD.....


Phewwwwuuu ...waise i have never written a story like this so i hope u ppl like it.i know i cant write the way u ppl write but still i gave my best shot πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† now someone continue this one ...


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Posted: 19 years ago
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πŸ˜› .......DAMN GOOD MAN IT'S ROCKING............PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE YAAR THIS IS JUST DAMN GOOD. WOW. I
BUTTERFLIES IN MY STOMACH MAN ......... πŸ˜›
PLEASE CONTINUE

πŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
KYA YAAR TUM LOG KAHA HO?????????????
PLEASE CONTINUE THE ROCKING SCENES!!!!!!!!!!!

ARE U GUYS SLEEPIN' ??????
WAKE UP.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CONTINUE..............4 MY SAKE?????????????????
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
MERE SE BARDASHT NAHIN HOTA I CAN'T WAIT PLEASE CONTINUE OR ELSE...........
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nuts4kzk

yaar sukhi .prerna4rishave ,amali,ronitfan(if any1else i dont remember sorry)u guys r simply rocking,its the most amazing topic tahnks takshila(hope spelling is rit)u gusy story is just too good ,i think u guys should replace all the riters in ektas land πŸ˜† πŸ˜† and make ur own serial,coz i wil be it biggest ans most avid fan πŸ˜› ,i m simply luving ur stories,compared to taht stupid track going on in kzk
keep it up and btw i m compiling ur story and will make a proper format and post it as 1 story,i hope u guys dont mind,do tell.its worth the story to be read as one

yes most interesting parts Ekta hide. I wanted to dig it. Am enjoy it too, your writings. Yes Ekta's writers can get some influence from these. Thank you so much for writing very worm ,heart felt mind blowing story. thanks. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Fav.story yaar,Now I can understand that all the Ronitians and Bajajians r so romantice.......including meRomance iz at its peak now !!! so here I countineus...........
Bajaj iz buzzy in kissing Prerna on her neck and then Prena fills more romantic and hold his face in her hands and then they starts to luk in 1another's eyes so romanticly and remembering the gud times they have spending 2gether,then suddendly prerna gets emotional and hugs him again and holds him as tightly as she can......and bajaj realisez aftersome time that Prerna iz crying 😭 😭 bajaj gets confused and asks her that wat happens prerna?(and weeping her tears)prerna nodded her head in no..............nothing !!!nothing happens Mr.Bajaj!!!then y r u crying?
prerna gives him a lovly luk and says "no,Iam not crying Mr.Bajaj............these tears r bcoze of happiness,wich u have given me 4ever!!!(then gets up of the bed)U have fulfil my dreams and make my life a paradise"b4 u I had faced many problems(turned 2 him)but I had faced them bcoze u were wid me all the time.U supported me,standed by me when I needed ur support"And now after marring u I seems 2 b the most fortunate woman of this world..........Iam proud of u and I luv u more than anything in this world" (Bajaj was also getted emotional,during her luv speech)and now weps his tears and says "Prerna............u r so ....,(then luk @ the breakfast)ur breakfast is as I had prepared it!!!
plz.............countinu............ SUKHI................GUDDI............PLZ,GUYZ.........CONTI NE............ NA!!!
Edited by ronitfan1 - 19 years ago

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