Fanfic Part 12- B-P Confrontation!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok guys, finally part 12 is here. Recap- Bajaj and Prerna have split finally. Bajaj's daughter Vishakha wants to marry his competitor Mr Mehra's son. Bajaj is against it, while Prerna decides to support the two lovers. As Rishabh and Prerna take two different stands on this issue, will it instigate them further against each other?

:::Part 12:::

Mr b is working in his cabin. Prerna comes there. Mr b is irritated to see her. he says "NOW WHAT PRERNA JI? Ab maine kya kiya?"
prerna says "mr bajaj, i am here to discuss vishakha and amit's marriage."
"what?tumhe kaise pata-"
"mujhe yeh sab bohot pahle se pata hain. mujhe amit pasand hai-"
mr bajaj laughs n says "ohh..to tumhe amit BHI pasand hai? aur anurag bhi pasand hai?"
Prerna is angry. she says "MR BAJAJ ! main yahan vishakha ki baat karne aayi hu. Vishakha loves amit, and they should get married. amit accha ladka hai."
"Nahi prerna. Mehra ke bete se meri beti ki shaadi nahi hogi."
" mr bajaj, lekin woh dono ek doosre se pyar-"
"Pyar !!! prerna, aakhir yeh pyar kya hota hai? aur tumhe kya lagta hai, yeh..yeh vishakha aur amit jaante hai pyar kya hota hai? TUM khud jaanti ho, pyar kya hota hai? tum..-"

Prerna cuts his sentence. "Pyar...AAP MUJH SE pooch rahe hai pyar ke baare mein? Mujh se milne se pahle, aap khud kya jaante the pyar ke baare mein? Kisne sikhaya aap ko ke pyar kya hota hai? MAINE. Kisne kiya aap se pyar- aap ki berukhi ke bawajood? MAINE. Aur ab aap-"

Mr Bajaj says quietly "Nahi Prerna. Tum ne kya sikhaya yeh to yaad nahi hai, lekin maine itna hi samza hai ke saccha pyar to sirf ek DARD hai...pyar ek aisi saza hai jo insaan ko chupchaap sehni padti hai aur woh insaan 'uff' tak nahi kar sakta..." Mr B looks at prerna..she stares at him..

A song plays on them-

Yeh bata de mujhe zindagi, pyar ki raah ke humsafar, kis tarah ban gaye ajnabi...yeh bata de mujhe zindagi..phool kyun saare murza gaye, kis liye buz gayi chaandni..yeh bata de mujhe zindagi

They stare in each other's eyes..there's pain in his eyes..but in a moment he looks away, shrugs his shoulders n says " but why am I telling YOU all this? tum kya samzogi! " He says wryly, smiling as if he suddenly realizes the stupidity of it all.
"main sirf itna samzti hu ke agar yeh shaadi nahi hui to vishakha ka aanewala kal-"
"uske aanewale kal ki fikar tum mat karo prerna. Uska baap abhi zinda hai. tumhe jitni uski fikar hai, us se kai jyaada mujhe hai. tum APNI fikar karo. Vishakha ki nahi."
"Main uski ma hu"
"MA THI. Ab nahi ho. Ab tumhara mujh se aur mere bacchon se koi rishta nahi hai."
"Mr Bajaj why don't u understand? they are both above 18. they could have married w/o ur permission. But they are waiting for ur nod-"
"My daughter will not marry any1 without my permission."
"Jaanti hu. Lekin, aap ko lagta hai woh khush rahegi? Nahi..woh bohot dukhi hogi. aur uske zimmedaar AAP hoge. aakhir aap ko pyar karnewalon se kya problem hain? jab dekho, aap do pyar karne walon ko alag karne ki koshishon mein lage rahte hain? Aap logon ko dukh dene se thakte nahi hain kya?"
"prerna, agar tumhari bakwas khatam ho gayi ho, to tum ja sakti ho. Yeh mera office hai. Mujhe bohot kaam hai. tumhari yeh faaltu baatein sun ne ke liye mere paas waqt nahi hai."
"mujhe bhi aap se baatein karne ka koi shauk nahi hain. I just want to say- get vishakha married to amit. they both love each other. and regarding mr mehta's rivalry with u, that is thing of past. Aur jab mr mehta ko koi problem nahi hain to aap ko hi kya problem hain?"
"dekho, yeh mere ghar ki baat hai. baharwale interfere na hi kare to accha hain. vishakha meri beti hain. uski shaadi kab aur kis se karni hain, yeh main decide karoonga. Just Leave my family alone. As it is I have enough problems in my life. You don't add- "
Prerna says angrily "Mr bajaj, main vishakha aur amit ko alag nahi hone doongi. Main doongi unka saath. Aur aap KUCH nahi karenge un dono ke khilaaf."
Mr B laughs and shakes his head. Then he looks at her with a sweet smile on his lips. and says very sweetly, as if he is talking to an unruly child-
"Prerna, tumhe kya lagta hai?tum meri hi beti ko, mere hi khilaaf bhadkaogi, aur main chup chaap dekhta rahunga?"
Then the smile disappears , and he continues in cold and slightly irritated voice-" maine tumhare BACCHON PE taras khaake tumhe baksh diya tha. Maine anurag ki company kya lauta di, tum to mere sir pe chad ke baith gayi ho. bohot 'pyar' karti ho na anurag se? to suno, AGAR tumne meri beti ki zindagi mein interfere karne ki koshish ki, to main anurag aur uske parivar ka woh haal karunga, ke saari duniya unpe taras khayegi. Ek baar to sadak pe la hi chuka hu usko, is baar to sadak ke bhi kaabil nahi rahega woh. Soch lo ! do u want anurag to suffer again because of you?"
Prerna is shocked. Before she can say anything, Mr B's cell rings. It's the man he has sent to follow vish everywhere n spy on her. The man says "sir, I saw vishakha n amit going into restaurant." Mr B takes restaurant address from that man. Prerna is hearing the conversation curiously. Mr B opens his desk drawer, takes his car keys and rushes out . Prerna gets suspicious and follows mr b's car.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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woooooooooowwwwww

thanx !!!
i bet dat tok u a long time 2 write šŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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That's our Rishu- the Knight in the shining armour. No matter in how much distress he is and no matter how adverse the situations, Rishabh Bajaj really remains THE MAN!

Brilliant job once again Tulip and I congratulate you for sticking to the original characterization with full realization as to how difficult it is. I was just about to log off when I read this part. It's AWESOME!

Thanks!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks!

It took me some time to write it, not long!

thanks again 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It really was worth all the time you took to write it!! Ammmazing stuff!!!
Kewl yaar, just too kewl!


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Posted: 19 years ago
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šŸ‘ i just <3 it! u should do a serial! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tulip i m big fan of ur story,hey why dnt u audition for the riters post in ektas compony
they keep on having auditions
seriously i luv ur story
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yeahh Tulip!! it's just too kewl!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks a lot every1 for liking my story..the next part will come soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey I had not seen this...its fab!!!!!! Keep it up tulip!!!!

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