Pyar hai zindagi plz read new part added - Page 12

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Posted: 19 years ago
Awww...soooo sweeet!! Thanks so much for introducing me in this storyline Nooree!!! WOwwwww..I'm thrilled:)

Thankooo and grrrreat going!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Pyar hai zindagi continued

Everybody is enjoying the party and dancing to just chill from maine pyar kyon kiya

Noori and Sukhi are sat by the bar talking

Noori: sukhi ik baath batao aur such bolna

Sukhi: ok tell me

Noori: dida looks ill is everything ok in athens

Sukhi: ya of course everything is fine (she says nervously)

Noori: are you sure sukhi i mean you wouldn't lie to me would you?

Sukhi: no of course not (she says nervously)

Noori thinking: aisa kyon lagta hai sukhi jooth bool rey hai mujhse i have to find out whats wrong fast

Sukhi: arre noori hello (then clicks her fingers)

Noori: oh sorry sukhi

Sukhi: kya soch rey hoo

Noori: kuch nahin

then mr bajaj and rohit come up

Mr bajaj: hey jaan (kisses me on the cheek) what you talking about wait let me guess me right

Noori: uh

then rohit Interrupts noori

Rohit: no yaar they were talking about me

Noori and Sukhi: neither of you two ( then laugh)

Rohit and mr Bajaj are both shocked but then laugh too

Noori whispers to mr Bajaj: i am so tired jaan

Mr bajaj: me too jaan

HALF AN HOUR LATER all the guests leave and make their way home

Noori: thanx for coming bye

noori then sits on the chair feeling tired and falls asleep

Mr bajaj: it was a great noori hai nah

Then mr bajaj makes his way to noori and sees shes asleep on the chair and kneels beside her and strokes her hair and then gets up and lifts her up and makes his way to the bedroom and then sukhi sees mr bajaj struggling to open the bedroom door and quickly rushes towards the door and opens it for him

Mr bajaj: thanx sukhi

Sukhi: its ok rishabh goodnight

Mr bajaj: good night

then mr bajaj puts noori on the bed and then changes his clothes then he makes his way to bed and noori puts her head on his chest

Noori: rishabh mujhe kuch kehna hai

Mr bajaj: arre yeh kya your not asleep anyways bolo kya baath hai

Noori: i feel like their something wrong with dida

Mr bajaj: kya matlaab

Noori i think shes ill i mean she looks really weak rishabh and sukhi is telling she fine but i think she lying

Mr bajaj: noori stop worrying maybe sukhi's right and your just worrying for no reason now go to sleep (then kisses me on the forehead) good night jaan

Noori: goodnight

To be continued

luv noori

PLEASE POST YOUR COMMENTS PPL PLEASE
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Posted: 19 years ago
Loads of love to you Nooree for writing in this part so soon. It was really very nice. Show me flirting with my jeeju yaar;)) Lolzzz...just joking!

Keep up the good work and I hope I am not lying abt Dida in this story:)
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Posted: 19 years ago
it is very excellent well written noorie best of luck to cond other part
its is really amazing wowo kya story haii
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Posted: 19 years ago

1 MONTH LATER

Noori and sukhi are about to go shopping

Noori: sukhi i forgot my purse tum jao main abi ayye

Sukhi: teek hai

sukhi makes her way to the car

Noori: ahh mil gaya

then noori hears dida coughing really badly

Noori: dida

Noori rushes to didas room and sees her on the bed coughing really badly

Noori: DIDA

then noori rushes to the bed

Dida: beti mujhe maff kardo (she says while gasping for breath) i had cancer

Noori: kya

Dida: aur maine saab ko paata diya tumko nah paatha na

Noori: dida leekan kyon

Dida: because you would not

Then dida passes away

Noori: DIDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Everybody rushes in the room and sees dida dead on the bed and everybody start to cry

And sukhi runs in the room and sees dida dead and drops on the floor

but noori shes acting kinda mad thinking she is joking

Noori: dida wake up nah deekho nah bauji dida mazaak kare hai

Bauji: then hugs noori

Noori: arre bauji yeh kya app kyon cry karti hoo dida sirf sleep kare hai

Rohit enters

Sukhi runs to rohit and tells him

Sukhi: dida is dead

Rohit: kya

Sukhi: haan aur noori

Rohit: wait have you told rishabh yet

Sukhi: nah tou

Rohit main abi phone karta hoon rishabh si

rohit phones mr bajaj

Mr bajaj: hello

Rohit: haan rishabh ronit here um sono tum abh ghar ajjo

Mr bajaj: kyon saab tou teek hai nah

rohit: rishabh dida has passed away and noori is acting strange

mr bajaj: teek hai i am on my way

rohit: ok bye sukhi hes on his way

Sukhi: thank god

10 mins later

Rishabh sees noori acting weird

Noori then dragas rishabh inside

Noori: rishabh deekho nah dida is asleep

then tears stream down rishabh's face

Noori: oh no not you too dida is asleep

then rishabh shakes noori

Mr bajaj: she is dead noori

Noori: nahi nahi

then noori runs out of the house and gets into the car and drives off

Noori hears rishabhs voice over and over again

Rishabh: shes dead noori shes dead noori shes dead noori echoes in her ears

THEN BANG noori has a car crash

Noori is rushed to hospital

Dr mehra: arre yeh tou dr khan hai jaldi karo ICU main karo

Nurse: teek hai dr

then dr mehra phones mr bajaj

Dr mehra: hello mr bajaj dr mehra speaking

Mr bajaj; hello dr may i help you with anything

Dr mehra: actually mr bajaj unfortunatly miss khan has had an accident and is ICU

mr bajaj: Kya noori has had an accident

then everybody look shocked

To be continued

keep reading PYAR HAI ZINDAGI

luv noori
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Posted: 19 years ago
Dida died!!! Nooree had an accident!! Oh nooo!!!
But hey!! Nice story yaar! Love you loads:)
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Posted: 19 years ago
nooorie u r unbelevable wow kya story hai ii like it very much very good jodi sukhi rohit 😛
rishu n noorie 😆

sukhi noorie ne tumhare place fix kar de with rohit roy

well noorie ur story is too good keep it up n tell me later when u add the next part
bye luv u baby
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Posted: 19 years ago
Nice story noorie...i enjoyed it.
Keep it going... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
noorie ur fiction rockzzzzz 😛 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice amazing noorie keep it up wee r waiting 4 next part wod all da loves between rishabh nn noorieee

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