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Part one
Mohini: Shweta, Shweta, hurry up, aren't you getting late for
college.
Shweta:No mama, anyways I have to go, Anjali's waiting for me outside.
Mohini:Atleast have breakfast and go.
Shweta:I'll have it on my way, saying this she takes an apple and
leaves.
Shweta meets Anjali outside, who's waiting by the car with the driver.
Anjali:How long do you take to get ready, I've been waiting for
hour for you.
Shweta:Sorry, you know I have to look my best for Karan.
Anjali:Ok, ok lets just go.
They reach the college where Karan has red roses in his hand.
Anjali:Looks like Karan has a surprise for you.
Shweta:Probably red roses as usual, he's so predictable, he never changes, always the same red roses.
Anjali:Shweta, your impossible to please.
Shweta:I know, but its still nice to get something different once
in a while.
In the meantime, Karan comes and gives the roses to Shweta.
Shweta:Thanks.
Karan:No need to be so formal.
Anjali:I think we should get to class, we're getting late.
All the classes have finished for the day. Karan is insisting
that Shweta come and see a film with him. She keeps refusing stating
she's wishes to have an early night. As their talking they reach
Karan's car. At this point, Shweta and Anjali get shocked to see their brothers Akshat and Rajeev.
Shweta & Anjali:When did you arrive?
Akshat & Rajeev:Just come from the airport, thought we'd stop by to pick you up.
Shweta turns to speak to Karan but he's already left.
All four of them get into the car to head home. Rajeev, Akshat
enter with Shweta and Anjali. Parents are shocked to see them and
also disappointed that they went to meet their sisters first.
Later, in the evening Shweta stops by Akshats room to talk to him. Akshat sees her and tells her to sit, whilst he says on to the
person on the phone he'll call back.
Akshat:Shouldn't u be doing some work?
Shweta:It's a Friday night and besides can't I come to talk to my
brother. By the way, didn't you bring any gifts for me?
Akshat:Always asking for gifts, and gives a teddy bear and simple
heart pendant set.
Shweta:You're my big brother, I think I have some right to receive
gifts. Anyways, I'm feeling really tired, I'm going to head off
to sleep.
Shweta turns to leave when Akshat calls her.
Akshat:By the way, who was that boy with you?
Shweta really shocked:What?
End of part one