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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Hey Kanta!!!
Fabulous as usual!! Jai encouraging Bani to sing was so touching and heart warming!! Bani is so sweet and innocent not to see Pias ploy!!
(Or maybe we all have started to think the worst about Pia😆)
I hope Jai will support her like tjis, but I dont think he will do that as this story will be a bit like Abhimaan.
It also reminded me of the movie Aaina. I hope Jai will have more traits of Jackie Shroff in Aaina then Amitabh Bachchan in Abhimaan.

Thanks for the update!
BYebye

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Swathi

@swathi

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Looks like JB have to face multiple issues, ego clashes and Pia. Abhimaan had only ego..anyways I was thinking that possibly you may adapt to have Bani taking the corporate ladder...but then you made her a singer and set the base as Walia women never work so I guess that was a good starting point. The other thing being Jai sounds so sure and confident of himself possibly Pia would be the one who will be placing the seeds of doubt in Jai's mind...??!!! ok I digress to what may possibly be the future and that is definitely not my forte and will leave it to experts like you...Good part and loved reading about the slow growth of Bani the singer in this part !

Swathi

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#53

JBs relationship has been beautifully penned down..Jai encouraging Bani to sing is really touching..Bani is very very innocent and naive..she is got Pia into her house who is going to destroy her home.
Bringing Pia back is certainly a major twist. I think she is going to seed in the doubts in Jai's mind against Bani and her fame n popularity. Of course then we will see the complex n ego issues as the story is based on Abhimaan..
Looking forward to the next part dear...
Rama

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Was waiting for you to update this ff! Very nice - so you have Pia here now wanting to cause trouble. Nishikant should come haul her a** back home. Jai happy so far with the acclaim his wife is getting...
👏 👏 👏

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Sangita

@sangitadas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

Kanta

Only one word FANTABULOUS. 👏 👏 👏 I am enjoying this FF so much. 😊

Jiggy is so good over here and they all project such a loving family.

Good thing Jai realised fast that he was attracted towards Pia's outer shell, while in reality he is in love with Bani. 😳

Post the next update soon.

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tam2

@tam2

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#56

Hey ... Lovely update! ... Nice to see such a good relationship between JB... 😳 ... liked their part very much... Now Pia entered! ... not a good sign!... the situation of this FF also reminds of Aaina too... anyways... looking forward to next part... do cont soon... 👏 ...

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.noone.

@.noone.

Stunner

Posted: 17 years ago

#57

Kanta very very very very ba..d nah nah its gud kanta di
I am happy just because jai let Bani sing in the concert But why pia is back and why she ran away????..
Anyways di cont soon

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Pooja

@kripa0521

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

Great part... its so sweet of Jai to encourage Bani to sing, magar yeh rang meh bhang dalne Pia kahan se aa paunchi..i just hope she wont cause trouble between Jani she is giving me bad vibes.... please continue soon and get rid of Pia..
Kripa