SS: Kahaani me twist (for Khushboo2006)

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Hey Ranajana,

a very nice ss,loved it.liked the role reversal here.you etched so fine.thankoo for sharing with us. 👏

preet 😳

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#12

😆 😆 😆 i sat in front of comp to type update... but ended up with reading yours...

haila... itna lamba.... 😲 poora ek ghanta laga padne mein... beech mein meri comp.... 😡 reinstall karna pada... restart karna pada... 😡 just loved it.. 😳

P.S: Cherry.... I really love u a lot... 😳 😃

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Ranjana... It was a wonderful story....You are damn good writter... 👏

I have to read your FF now... 👏

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

jiske liye likha hai... woh kahaan hai bhai???

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diana

@hooman

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

hey ranjana!
great story..
nice to read when bani is the arrogant one instaed..
inspiration!
thanks to the person who told you to write as well 😆

nadia
p.s. dont forget aboout illicit love!

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msrk

@msrk

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

HUme aur jeene ki chahat na hoti..
agar tum na hote...
excellent story..

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Sangita

@sangitadas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Ranjana, this SS is just fantastic with an excellent role reversal. 👏 👏 👏 Great idea anwd extremely well executed.

Its always a pleasure to read your FFs 😛 and this was no exception.

Hope you write other SSs and FFs soon. 😉

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Awesome SS
loved it
wonderfully written....can't have the twist any other way....love that whole idea of putting Jai in Bani's shoes and Bani in Jai's
but most of all love the ending
great work 👏 👏 👏