FF:Jeevan Sathi (Last Chap pg 69)

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here i m back with my new FF. hope you will like it as much as my old FF...

intro:

Jai Walia - 29 years old. the only heir of walia group of hotels .UnMarried. Loves his mother alot.

Krishna Walia -Mother of Jai Walia. after her husband's death she is the only support for jai.

Aditya Bali- 32 years old Jai's Best Friend and their neighbour. works with jai and mostly spends time in walia mansion

Jigyasa Bali 30 years old- wife of aditya bali. treats jai like her brother and krishna as her mother.

Billo Sharam- Krishna Walia's elder sister and jai's massi's loves jai alot. currently stays at chandigardh.

Bani Dixit- 23 years old, Daughter of late nishitkant dixit and kiran dixit. leaves in mt abu. recently finished her studies and now finding a suitable job.

Rano Dixit -20 years old. bani's only suport now. studies in college.

The FF is mostly based on JB so there wont be much role of other characters..

Chap One

Mumbai

Today Walia Mansion was quieter then it usually was. Krishna Walia the Heart of the Mansion was illl. the Doctors had given the last words. She just has some few days to live..

After her husband's death krishan used to get ill offently but this time her illness got more. she suffered from a heart stroke and now was laying her room . it was her wish to spend her remaining days in her house intead of some hospital.

There in her room stood her only son Jai. His eyes never leaving her mother. in the age of 20 his father died leaving a huge empire for him to handle. he forgot everything about his own life and got himself into work and only work. his mother has always been his strength and today seeing that strength weaking his heart cried. but he didnt cry he knew his tears would hurt his mother more then himself.

Krishna smiled weakly and held her hand out towards her son.indicating him to come closer. Aditya moved aside giving way to jai. Jai knelt down holding krishna's hand he sensed that she wanted to teel him sumthing.

Krishna stroking his hand with her weak voice said"beta i need to tell you sumthing... sumthing me and your father had hidden from you.." Jai looked at his mother letting her continue.

"Beta its.. its about your marriage.. Tumhari shaadi bohot sallo pehle kisi se tay hochuki hai. tumhare papa ke purane dost ki beti ke sath. tum bohot chhote the aur tumhare papa apni is dosti ko rishtedari mein badalna chahte the...par phir waqt badla aur hum yaha mumbai mein agaye....Beta i know you must be feeling angry par jai meine bohot intezaar karliya abh aur nahi. i want too se my bahu.. jai mujhe tumhara ghar baste huwe dekhna hai.. plzz jai meri bahu ko iss ghar me leawo "

Jai didnt knew what to say. here he was shattered heraing about her mother's illness and now this. "bahu.??" he asked still not believeing all this . Krishna trying to smile said "ha bahu. Bani... Bani Dixit woh Mt abu mein rehti hai...Apni behen ke sath.. Jai beta please mujhe usse milna hai.. please.."

Jai's mind not working he stared at Aditya who kept his hand over his shoulder and spoke behalf of jai "ji auntyji.aisa hi hoga." giving an assuring look to jai he added "uska adress yah phone number hai apke paas.?" Krishna noded"uska phone number meri blue diary mein hai."

Aditya noded taking the diary he dialed the number. getting the first ring he handed the phone to jai......

Mt Abu

Early Morning with sun rising Bani Dixit stepped out of her room clad in sky blue color churidar. She was rushing towards the kitchen to prepare sumthing for her beloved baby sister.

As she made some parathas she heard her Rano caling her "di.. morning. ajj subha subha , kahi jarahi ho kya.?" rano asked

Bani switching off the gas turned flashing asweet smile said "haa job ke liye. abh tum yeh nashta karlo thik hai.." saying so she started to go out of the leaving room when the phone rings... since rano was still in the kitchen she decided to pick it......

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Jai on the other hand was holding the receiver waiting for someone to pick the phone. he turned to get alast look from aditya when someone picked up the phone. and the next thing he heard was a soft "Hello"

Bani shifted the receiver from one side to the other repeating herself "hellow..".Jai as if coming out of his trance finally spoke "B.Bani.. Bani Dixit.?"he asked. Bani found the voice strange "yes.. app kaun..?" she asked.

Jai looked at krishna and said "ji. wait there is somone who wants to talk with you. just hold one." he passed the receiver to krishna. Bani who was going to say sumthing stopped in her track as she heard a faint "Hello." of some woman.

"hellow bani.. bani beta mein krishna bol rahi hu. krishna walia tum logo ke purane parosi. yaad hai tumhare papa aur mere pati uday walia..." she got cut off as bani remembered about them "arre ha aunty app kaisi hai. itne saalo baad. "

Krishna sighed and told bani about her illness "beta mein tumse milna chahti hu..meine nishikant aur kiran ke baare mein sunna. janti hu tum abh akeli ho plzz beta yaha ajawo. i want to meet you."

Bani didnt knew what to do"par auntyji woh rano ayah pe akeli.." "beta usse bhi sath lekar aja. mein aditya ko kaal bhejungi tum dono ko lene ke liye tum awogi na beta.?" krishna asked hoping that she will agree...Bani not wanting to hurt krishna agreed for it.

Krishna smiled looking at aditya she said "woh ayegi. tum usse kaal jake leawo. "Aditya noded he looked at jai he wanted him to come with him but then right now krishna needed him he most.

Aditya left with a driver for Mt Abu after his lunch...He will be returning back tomorrow morning.

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Next part will be longer then this pakka

chap 2 pg 3

chap 3 pg 6

chap 4 pg 9

chap 5 pg 12

chap 6 pg 15

chap 7 pg 18

chap 8 pg 22

chap 9 pg 25

chap 10 pg 27

chap 11 pg 30

chap 12 pg 34

chap 13 pg 37

chap 14 pg 40

chAP 15 PG 44

chap 16 pg 46

chap 17 pg 50

chap 18 pg 54

chap 19 pg 57

chap 20 pg 62

chap 21 pg 64

chap 22 pg 67

chap 23(last chap) pg 69

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moonlitnight thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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1st 😃

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what Dav di. mere ankhe khuli thi to mai kya karu.😳😉 they changed time. but my sleeping time to nehi change hui na😕. stop complaining. u r constantly coming 1st in other FFs. 😆😆

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woooppiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!

u r back.

gr8 start. waiting for JB to meet 😛

plz cont soon

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tropa....😡it msut alte jagar soen ki abche meri first place leli😭😡

well it was a great start.. yipepe cant wiat for enxt aprt.. kab mielnge jb/?

wowo shadi their hai.. too jai gki koi girlfriend to hogi na.. woo akah hai?😆

spl contineu soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very interesting. Nice beginning! Looking forward to how this story unfolds. 😃
Edited by Indian_Goddess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Divya,

super happy to see you starting a new ff,very nice beginning.lookin forward to the next part. 😛


preet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi,

Nice part. Like the storyline. Looking forward to JB 😳

Continue soon.

Cheers,
meena
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Posted: 17 years ago
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A very interesting star. Can't wait to see how JB will react when they see each other for the first time 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Divya....Glad u started ur new FF... 😃 ....

very nice and lovely storyline... 😃 😳 😳 ....

seems really interesting...will see how love develop between these two strangers... 😳 ....

Most of all loved the title...😳....

Do cont soon... 👏 👏 👏
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I love the way the story has started .. and I can already tell it will be beautiful to see Jai and Bani discover each other and grow to love each other
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wwooww!!!! stupendous start!!!! 😊

love the storyline.......totally different!!!! can't wait for bani to come and meet jai and krishna!!!

very interesting!!! cont soon!!! can't wait 👏

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