SS: Oh Really! Part 2 of 2 on Pg 3 - Page 5

Mioewwwwwwww my Pyaari Billi…sowieeeeeeee…for coming late here with my comments…IF ki galiyon se gayab thi this week. But yeh kya…I was waiting for ur other ff's updates…aur tum ek naya ff lekar agaye!😲 Wow!!! U seem in a very happy mood dear.

Loved the title of this ss story…Oh Really…I can so imagine Jai saying that. In fact it reminds me off him only😳…remember that episode where Bani had over slept and Jai was getting ready and she was telling him not to go work today😳 Jai was "Oh really" 😉 (i loved the way he said that!😍 😆 )He was gonna say something to her when that Pia butted in😡😆 (loved that scene…anyway going off track here back to the update)

Very interesting story. Really wish Ekta Mayi followed such a storyline…jahaan Jai gets a mouthful from Meera…and she storms off leaving Munna for Munni. I liked how he played games with her…made her jealous... annoyed her…he knew she was lying to him about being in love with Daksh, just wanted her to fess up! 😉 😉

I hope Jai does something like this in KS…Bani par bahut gussa aya tha uss din😡 Jai par double gussa aya tha when he failed to even think for a moment that she is lying to him…godammit…its getting too much now.😡 Next week there better be something positive in this story..really had enough of the nonsense now.

The legendary fertility line cracked me up so much yaar… pait mein dard ho raha hai 🤣 That was just too funny!😆

Great ss dear…aur bhi likhti jao…happy mood mein raho😃🤗

Tazoo

Oh my awesome ss.wish same happens in KS which I doubt.

Hey Sheena, awesome ending! Loved how Jai made his wifey jealous. The conversations between them were funny 😆 Hope you're always in a happy mood to write such great stories for us 😉



Maro 😛

Preet (Coolgurl_2005): Hi Preet, doing well, back from a vacation. How are you buddy?

Johnangad, Jeenal_20, Sangs (Yes, I am still in a happy mood, don't know why?), Kamy, Taz, Hritzfan, MB101 (Maro): Thank you all for the wonderful comments.

Tazoooooo: I wonder if JW has blank pellets or real ones these days!! LOL! Glad you liked some of the dialogues. I am really hoping that JW would come up with a plan to show her, he knows that she loves him... 😳 😳

Originally posted by: sanam84

Haila Sheena...itna brains de dala bechare ko...kya yaar i wish u were the writer of KS...kitna shanti rehta...aare not in KS but hamari life main...

n My dear i saw u took quite a lot of digs at Munna 😆 😆 parathe khila ke kya bata rahi thi 😉 😆 u r too smart...apna kaam bhi kar liya aur kisiko bura bhi nahin laga 😆 😆

everything was too good...agar iska adha bhi KS main ho jaye to maza aajaye...i wud luv to see JW makin Bani J 😉 that wud be so wicked 😳

He he, the parathas and the giant warehouse, I couldn't resist, There is a place called men's warehouse or Gent's warehouse for clothing, so I made the Gent's to Giant's...😉😉

Anyways, poor Munna, duh?? Made us all suffer with his MS on Meera and searching all over for her etc. So I couldn't resist the digs at him...

But yeah, I would love to see Munna raging at Bani and making her jealous, in a cute way!😳😳

i think the KS wrter should read this and copy it lol 😆

Excellent update. Loved all the dialogues, finally Jai made Bani accept her feelings. Really wonderful writing. Loved the aloo paratha scene, it was hilarious. Jai making her jealous was so sweet, and what she really needed.

You are a really gifted writer, the ending was just great....did I ever say I loved the title?

Okay, now that you're done with this one, start another.....one should maintain balance at all times.😆 (and no....one you are currently writing doesn't count 😉)

BD

Omg!!!! Jai is soooooooooo naughty 😳 ☺️

Loved it soooooo much! 👏

Perfect.......😳 ☺️