FF: Hum bas apke hain

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi i am starting a new ff .But it is quite different FRom Others. hOpe u guys will like it. It is a college love story and end of with marraige and after that.

Jai walia-21yrs

Bani walis-21 yrs

Jai has started his engineering college career . He was tall, fail and handsome Where BAni also admitted in that college very bold and straight farward. Bani is a daling of that college due to her tom boy look and childish nature. She has got lots of friends where Jai who is calm and quiet not that much friend . But whoever are there are very close to him.There is girl named Pia who is From jai's native and claims that She is jai's Bestfriend and another guy daksha is there who is after bani

Shall i continue ??

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Posted: 18 years ago
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do continue a vry gud strt.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yes please do cont!!!

great start!!1

thanks
sanju
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz do cont
sounds very interesting


Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Tks for your appreciation Guys. I told it is completely different from other stories But there is pure love and passion . I hope u guys will like it.
SO here i am starting the 1 st part.


PART-1

Jai walia has admitted engineering colleage before somedays. Pia also joined as bothe of same place meerut So are very good friends. Thouth Bia has a boyfriend named Puskar But she hides it to everyone and tries to remain close with Jai.


Bani is darling of her friends. Due to mimic of her lecturers and due to her bindas nature. She has boy cut hair style. and Pia his her roommate. Tere is naother roommate of her is Rano. Who is from bani's place and also a good family realtion between them. All likes Rano also .She is very innocent and cute girl and studious girl.

But Bani always Roaming like a butter fly tries to enjoy her life.One day Near the hostel bani is playing with sand. She has seen Pia is talikg to a guy who is handsome and looking very matured also. First she afraid to talk to him. Then She comeout from sand and went inside the hostel. By the mean time jai also noticed to Bani and He asked Pia about her. Pia told She is her roommate and Her name is bani. Jai told She is so childish Playing with sand and laughs.
After weekend monday there is class. Bani entered the class with her friengs. the class has already started.
All are writing the notes. Suddenly a voice raised from the door may i come in sir ?? He is none other than our jai Waila. Bani up her head ad saw him. She was happy to see him. As well as she will make him a good friend of him .As she is loving to make friends and easily mingle up with anyone. Then class has alredy started. After the class finished all went to their hostel. Pia after the class called jai that she wants to meet him. (As u know guys in technical lines all wants to do time pass) Jai comes and they started to talk and By the time bani comes out of hotel with a trouser and black t-shirt and asked Pia who is that Guy ? Suddenly Pia introdused that he is jai. Suddenly Bani raised her hand and happily introduce herself " Hi i am Bani .
Nce to meet u. can We be good friend ?".
Jai laughed for her childishness. But loved the way she told. And nodded his head in agree. So bani is very happy and said U r my best friend From now.




Sorry for any spelling mistake.
Tell me guys How is it ? If it is ok the i will Continu further
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey that interesting
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so now i am starting part-2



PART-2



Jai was very happy and also surprised at Bani's behaviour . As how can a girl without knowing anyone make friendship with anyone. But still he likes her.
So after every class they use to meet each other. Within that meeting jai understood what bani is ? Though she shows sheis bindas but actually she is a very homesick girl. She used to fight with Jai. and very caring in nature. When they are going for tiffin after finishing tiffin bani use to give her handkey. If jai has big nails cut that. Very caring. Jai now use to meet BAni instead of Pia. One day Pia has seen Jai and Bani seating on a rock and Jai put his hand over Bani.


Now bani's behaviour changed. She use to remain silent. Thinking something . One day Rano asked Bani U r not that bani that we love. U become so matured. Now bani use to do little make up where before she doesn't like anything. She use to tell i am a boy not a girl that i should do make up..

One day Jai and Bani seating on a rock. Now both of them feeling towards each other. Jai can understand his love. But bani cannot as she is mingle with everone easily . So she cannot able to distingush her love. Jai asked "Bani what u feel about me ???"

Bani first felt uneasy. Then told u r a good friend and financial and moral support for me. ON that day Jai pull her hand and write his name on her hand "Jai"..
Then bani suddenly tries to remove that. SO jai asked why u r removing that. She told that if in college will see someone what thay will think . After that they returned to their respective room. But Bani was absent and thinking something. After that one day Rano teasing her that why she is not accepting that she loves Jai. by that Bani became very furious and has written a lettter to jai


"Hi jai,

Hope u can understand all the things as all are leg pulling me with your name. I don't want to blame our friendship anymore . So don't try to meet me . I am going to my native and will come back as i want some freshness. But still we will remain good friends. Don't try to meet me.

Your'r Bani"


After sending that letter she cried a lot as thinking that now noone is there for her in colleage . With whom she can share something....


Sorry guys i will continue the next part with some love between jai and bani

and pls tell me how is this part. So that i can continue soon

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