FF Humera Chhaya - The End/page 6 Feb 22

First Previous

Page

Frequent Posters

divan

@divan

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#51

aimee, taz, bina, cherry, nema, preet, ranjana, mahimn thanks for the comments. It wasn't easy to write and so your comments are greatly appreciated.

mahimn - may be i will try and do another in the future and hope you will be around to read it.

Quote

Sheena

@Sheena_Row

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#52

What a sad death, Chaya dead in the hand of Ankush! 😭 Vij came too late and took his revenge, a bit late! I loved the whole story, especially the description of the haveli, the warfare and the fights in the beginning.

It is sad that Chhaya could not use any of the skills she has acquired in fighting Ankush.

Loved the story!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sangita

@sangitadas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#53

An exceptionally well written story Kanta but Chhaya's death pained me a lot. It was a wonderful story, well written, something I could see in front of my own eyes.

Words fail to describe the emotions running through Vij's head. And it is the fire he will live in till hsi death. 😭

Quote

@ragamthalam0

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Very unique ,, reminded me of greek myths,, with fight and the war going on,, the relationship between chahya and vji penned out so well, I cant believe his own friend who fought war with him did that ,, that is low,, but it was depressing becuz I think it does happen in real life,, I thought vji taught chahya how to fight ,, how she not defeat him ! k fine atleast slash him once ,, a injury ,,but vji killed him anyway ,, I enjoyed reading this a lot and will be saving it ,

Quote

1 2 3 4 5 6

FF Humera Chhaya - The End/page 6 Feb 22 - Page 6

Related Topics

Explore Topics