FF: Ek Hi Rishtaa

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello My Lovely People!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Another FF.... FanFic #22

Ek Hi Rishtaa....


Characters:

Jai Walia: Mr. Khadoos....... His life always revolves around... work, work and more work!!!!!....... Nothing ever happens in his life.... until one day.. he lied to his Masi... saying that he was married.... which he wasnt.........

Bani Dixit... a.k.a Basanti: She's a dancer!!!! Thats her profession!!! To make that money... she dances!!..... She has an attitude.. cant cook or clean and pretty much dont like to do any house work!! Til one day...... there's an offer for her....

Aparajit Deb (AD): He's the man.. that brought Bani into this profession into Dancing!! He loves her a lot.. but she doesn't see him in that way!!!....And his #1 Business Rival is None other than Jai Walia!!!!!!!! Whom he hates!!!!!!!!!!

Masi: Masi always wanted to see Jai get married!! She always pushed it!!! Until her dream finally came true!!!!!

Ranveer and Rano Walia: Jai's elder brother and Bhabhi!!!! They are both happily married!!!!!....

These are the only people in my FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!


What happens when Mr. Khadoos and Ms. Attitude live under the same roof??? And what will happen when AD finds out that his Bani is with someone else? And what will happen when AD ends up taking everything from the Walias???

Watch the Drama Unfold in Ek Hi Rishtaa


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1

Chan… Chan…. Chan……

Those were the sounds that were coming!!!!!….

All the guys were looking……..

There was a gal….

She was coming out…

She had the dupatta over her head…

All the guys were screaming…

And whistling….

aaisi nazar se dekha usne jalim ne chowk par
humne kaleja rakh diya chalu ki nok par


The guys were going all crazy!!

Men: wah wah, kamal ho gaya

dhin tanak dina ......
dhin tanak dina ......
dhin tanak dina .....
dhin tanak dina ......


She's shaking her hips……

And all you see is her stomach!!!

U don't see her face!!!!!!!

mera chain bain sab ujda
jaalim nazar hata le
barbaad ho rahe hai ji
tere apne shaher wale
meri angdai na toote tu aaja


All the guys are like hai!!!!!!

They are drooling all over her!!!

kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
ho kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina
ho mere naina mere naina mere naina judwa mere naina
kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina


everyone is throwing money!!!!

And she's collecting it one by one!!!!!

And she's putting it in her blouse!!!!!!

They are trying to look under her dupatta

But she wont show her face!!!!

She's just dancing to kajra re

Guy: Oy Basanti!!!!!!!!!!!

Come here!!!!!

She turns around…..

Basanti: What???
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

The man gives her money..

And he dances with her

ho tujhse milna purani dilli main
chod aaye nishani dilli main


She's walking

But he grabs her hand

pal nimani dari betalab
teri meri kahani dilli main
kali kamali wale ko yaad karte
tere kale kale naino ki kasam khate hain
tere kale kale naino ke banaye hain ruh
tere kale kale naino ko duwaye hain ruh
meri jaan udas hain hothon pe pyaas hain
aaja re aaja re aaja re


And he pulls her into him

ho teri baaton main kimam ki khusbu hain
ho tera aana bhigarmiyon ki lu hain
ho meri angdai na tute tu aaja
ho kajra re kajra re tere kare kare naina


Everyone is dancing

And the song ends!!!!

And all the guys are whistling!!!!!

Basanti is sitting on the bed!!!!

What a night it was!!!

She's counting all the money that she got!!!!

And boy she got lots!!!!!!!!!

She's like this is the life!!!!!!!

She's just slouching around!!!!!!

And then

Someone knocks!!!!!!

She's like come in!!!!

And its AD!!!!!

AD: hello basanti!!!!

B: What do you want??

Ad: I am sorry!! Not Basanti!!!!

But Bani!!!!!!!

She looks up!!!

AD: Nice performance!!!!!!!!!

And he winks at her!!!!!

And she just ignores him!


The End!! (Please comment and tell me wat u guys think)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oye hoye BASANTI!!!! Nice beginning 👏 👏 👏

What a song, someone would surely be loving this 😉

So wow, sounds nice when Jai lies to his Maasi about his marriage and Bani aka Basanti takes up the offer...........am I reading it right???? 😉 😳 😆

Do update soon jaani........... 😃

Edited by cheeze - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful beginning pls cont soon........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowieeeee...one more...you end one..you start one....haila...me no complaining ben...its all good..!!!👍🏼

Wowww....a dancer...n Khadoos....hmmmmmmmm....nice combo ben..!!!😆...feels like im talking about food..!!!🤣


Please continue soon,
Pachu
Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome intro.
and the first part.
looking forward to it.
sounds very interesting.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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totaaly different from toher ff waithing to read the next part..
jb together end with lots of.. gfight..
as kaddoas and attitude comes.. revenge then love comes 😉
pls continue soon
davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

AD is like..

Why are you always ignoring me??

Bani: Becuz!!!!!

She's like

Wat do you want?

AD is like…

U know what I want!!!

I want you!!!!

Bani: But I don't want you!!

AD: I am trying to help you!!!!

But u just don't want my help!!

Bani: No!!!

AD: Like I said..

I have an offer for you!!!

You will get everything you want…

Just be mine!!!!!!

Bani: But I don't want to be yours!

AD: Why not???

Bani: Becuz!!!

Just becuz you brought me here…..

AD: Yes I brought you here!!!

Becuz u had no where to go!!!!

Bani: And becuz of you this is my job!!!!!

AD: Yeah but u can quit

And come with me!!!

Bani: But I rather do this….

AD is getting mad!!!!!!

AD is like

I want you to be mine

And only mine!!

But…

You rather do this!

And she's like yes!!!!….

He's like whatever!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

AD always liked Bani!!

But Bani didn't!!!

She just needed the money

And she was getting cash everyday

For doing this!!!

But if she went with AD…

Then he would marry her

And make her his

But she didn't like him!!!!!

Not in that way!!!!!!

AD would always flirt with her

But she just ignored him!!

of the time

he was always drunk!

But he would always come……..

And see her performance everyday

And tell her the same thing!!!!

But he knew

That one day….

She would come to him!!

And then at other times

He was there

Only becuz….

Of his business!!!

His business wasn't doing too well

And he was always losing!!!!!!!!!

And he was losing…

To one man!!!!!

And he was none other than Jai Walia!!!

Jai would always get it!!!!!

Jai was #1….

AD wanted to be #1

But Jai would never give him the chance

Which pissed him off!!!!



The End! (Please comment!)

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