FF - Chori Chori - Part 20 pg. 73 - Page 51

Omg!!!! Jaiiiii............😆 bolti bandh 😆 Loved the way Bani took over and confessed her love, taking Jai by surprise and then the cell phone convo when Bani cuts him off..........😆 was soooooooooo cute and hilarious...............

Loved it hun 👏 Do continue sooooooooooooooon 😃 No no noooooooooo, a month is not allowed!!!! 😉 😆

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww
thats gr8 man cant wait 4 next 1
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont

Hi Navs,

There is nothing better than sitting behind the computer after finally finishing homework, on a rainy day, and reading your ff. I didn't knew you started a new one. But it is great, superb, fantasitc, mindblowing. (aur tareef kare???) 😉 😉
👏 👏

Bus ek baat humko bataa dene. Yeh bathroom ka kya chakkar hai?? In dono ke peth me kuch garbar hai? Shayad doctor ko dekhana parega. Jab dekho dono bathroom mein ghusse rehte hei. Actually on 2nd thought. Shayad humko bhi apna bathroom redecorate karna chahiye. Kya pata, koi handsome 😍 😍 😍 aadmi usme mil jaaye.
Your JW is just so dreamy!!! 😍

Bani is mindblowing!!! 👏 👏 👏 Please ek aur scene likh dena jisme woh Pia ki band bajaati hai. Please, pretty please

Do you mind if i skip discussing Pia, Time waste, energy waste! 🤢 Ow haan, agar usne Pooch ko dhokha de diya tab bas ek bus ki jaroorat hoogi, bus ke theek saamne kaun hogi yeh tum imagine kar lena!☺️

Last comment. Ab JW ko kehne do na. You know.... [:D/] [:D/] [:D/]Kehdo na kehdo na...... [:D/] [:D/] [:D/]the three words....... I L U!!! Hey Ram, humse nahin, Bani se kehne do. 😆 😆 I L U.

Zyaada lamba ho gaya na? Ab hum chalte hai, Please jaldi update karna. Agli baar itna lamba comment nahin likhenge, promise.

byebye,

Ranjana

p.s Sanam if you are reading this. I love your comments.

quick question guys 🤔🤔🤔 a rather long one 😆😆😆

do you want me to continue this ff -- well this is for my sake and urs..cuz i barely update (u know once a month or after a month).. and i feel its not fair.. wit respect to you guys...

im not a pro writer.. but it sure means a whole a lot to me that you guys read and enjoy my ff.. 😳😳 and as much as i try not to.. i do end up delaying the updates ... especially as of late (sorry).. so honestly i need to know if u guys want me to continue this ff

cuz here's the thing.. nxt wednesday on i'll be free 😳😳 cuz i'll have my christmas break 🥳 so with no uni/hw/exam stress.. i can update often (pakka promise).. BUT one thing you guys have to understand is

this ff of mine will be different from the other two previous ff's.. (which were really happy go lucky)... different in a sense that there will be twists involved.. twists that may or may not lead to JB separation but ill worry about that.. as story goes by.. and ur gonna have to bare wit me.. if i separate them.. cuz im a loyal die hard JB fan😳 and will always wanna see them together.. no matter wat

secondly -- if i can't write up a 'romantic' scene between JB.. that's cuz i don't know how to 😭😭 i don't.. im too freakin innocent for a romantic scene 😆😆😆 nahi but sachi.. its tough writin a romantic scene -- when my inspiration (JB from KS) are just 😕🤔 so bare wit me.. i'll put JB scenes.. as many as i can.. but the story has to move forward..😳 which will be done wit few bits JB scene -- i'll try and make 'em romantic warna cute is as far as they'll go (i hope) 😕

ahem wit that said.. let me know ur views 😳😳.. so i can start thinkin about my nxt udpate😊

p.s. i'll reply to commentos once im home😳😳.. which won't be soon as i have a long day at uni.. well long compared to the rest of my mondays 😆 and thank you 🤗

Hey
ofcourse we will want u to continue this ff its brilliant 👏
and about not updating regularly 😕 I personally think when u do update it was worth the wait so dont worry about that 😃 im sure u do have other important things to do.
and whatever u write on jaiand bani romance 😳 im sure its going to be great cuz ur a great writter

Taj

Arre whenever possible please update! bring all the twists and turns you want to...because it's the story we want to read....doesn't matter how many elements of happiness or sadness is included in it. It's your story and pro writer or not..every other person has some qualities and special things about themselves or specifically about their writing here, which is even there in your ff. So please do continue......Enjoy your holidays and try to update sooon 😃

hey
plz do cont. da ff...

Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes!! I want you to continue... 😃 😃

You can't leave us hanging!!!

Continue, when you can, the way you can, with as many twists as u want to, as long as:
1. No Pia
2. JB together in the end (even if they are 73 and 62 years old when they get together, chalega, as long as they are waiting for each other!! 😆 God, I didn't mean that, but u get the drift...

How could you even ask such a question yaar? Of course, you have to continue! Eagerly waiting for the update!

Anam