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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: btkr

Hi Nina,
I see Rooj is up to her usual stuff doling out tough tasks 😆 😆 😆 Waiting to read those answers 😉 In the meantime, some easy ones...

What is the achievement you are proudest of? (excluding raising your daughter 😉 ) Well, aside from my children I will say that the greatest achievement is growing up in a foreign country but yet maintaining my culture and heritage.


What do you miss the most about India? My family...all my aunts, uncles and cousins on my mom's side are the ones that I miss the most and of course the atmosphere of India the friendliness, the openess, the apnapan you feel even with strangers!!!

If you had your choice, ideally, where would u want to live, raise your child? you feel a sense of apnapan..a sense of being with your own even living amongst strangers!!!

Your happiest childhood memory Navratri - every year for nine days with my Dad as my Raas partner!!!

An embarassing/funny moment Passing out at the immigration office while waiting on line for fingerprinting for my citizenship!!

What do u think is going to happen to KS? Will it ever get its glory days back? If JB are ever reunited then we can get a semblence of the glory days but until then ABSOLUTELY NOT!!! I am not even going to venture a guess as to whats going to happen in KS with the stupid storyline!!!

Will be back with more later 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Ok di seeing KS is going no where i have your first task: Plz make Bani take revenge Pia in your own style! and make it as torturable as possible!
and then bump off AD and have our Bani run back to our Cuddu!
and then create a HOT an sizzling june 19th between JB in Turkey!
and then a cute scene of them as a family with krishna and athrava in it!
and then after you are done with this...write a most disturbing and as insulting letter to Basi Roti! and ekta too!!!
see how much im disgusted!
rooj

Rooj

Better late than never..

I would love to see the following scene played out leading to

Pia's demise:

Bani/DDG as has been shown pulls little stunts to make Pia and those around her think that she is losing her mind by continuing to drug her and creating situations where Pia accuses Bani/DDG for doing these things yet every time anyone investigates Bani/DDG always has a tight alibi. Bani has thought of her ultimate revenge and she pays off "loyal" Tony to put a little rat poison in every meal that Pia has. Pia begins to feel the affects of the poisoning slowly with severe stomach aches, nausea episodes, migraines etc. She becomes delusional and eventually her weakness becomes so great that she becomes confined to her room. Paranoia sets in and everywhere she looks she sees visions of Bani/DDG laughing at her. One day Bani/DDG asks Tony to let some rats and mice loose in her room on her bed. As Pia wakes up she feels the creepy crawly creatures and starts screaming hysterically but at WM no one listens to her screams anymore as they are glad she is confined to a room. Pia crawls out of bed and sees them all over the floor and backs away without being aware of where she is backing into….she backs into a window and as the curtains shake more mice and rats fall on her and as she shrieks she falls to her death from the open window. The doctor was called and stated her death was due to mental imbalance. (in the meantime Tony has cleaned up her room and there were no signs of it being infested with rats or mice which were rubber toy ones anyway. LOL) - So there you have it the end of Pia – Couldn't get any more torturous than that.

Now for the demise of Adhbhoot and the romantic JB reunion in Turkey…..

DDG/Bani having said yes to AD's MIL to marry her son, was getting ready for her wedding…she thinks today is my wedding day ….yet nothing feels right….last time with Mr. Walia despite Jigyasa auntie coercing me there was a sense of rightness as well as apprehension but today there is just this feeling of disgust as if I am doing something that will be considered a crime……she feels she needs to reach out to her past for some reason just to remind herself how her past and the people in it destroyed her and affirm her decision to marry AD….she searches for her cell phone to call Rano but can't find it…..and remembers that she left it in Ma's room when she called to give her the kangans. Bani dressed as a bride goes to Ma's room to retrieve her phone where she hears voices that of AD and Ma talking…she listens outside the door to their conversation and is shocked at what she learns…..they are talking that their plan to avenge Jai Walia is working perfectly and today the loss of the person he loves most in the world will be the final nail in his coffin……this revenge is was planned due to the fact that JW did not return AD's sisters love all those years ago which drove her pagal leading to her recklessly driving her and her pregnant Bhabhi (AD's wife and Ma's daughter) to their deaths over a cliff!!! Ad continues on how he struggled to become a millionaire just to seek revenge and found the perfect opportunity when he read of Bani being sent to the MA 5 years ago…..After he investigated he found that it was Bani's own sister Pia who was the creator of these circumstances and was making JW dance to her tunes and in order to save Bani from a prison term of 14 years which would have killed her he opted to send her to a MA and was actually planning on getting her out through his contacts once he neutralized Pia. It was then that AD said he thought of the plan to make Bani his shasthra and helped her escape before JW could…….He took Bani and brainwashed her into Durga and brought her back to se against JW…….but he saw her weaken when she saw her kids…Ma stated that she is helping his cause by forcing Bani to say yes to this marriage by pretending to have a brain tumor …once the marriage takes place the true torture will begin because JW will not be able to stand the thought of his Bani being someone else's…….Bani stands outside the door with utter shock and total revulsion. She feels the bile rising in her throat and the panic and grabs her purse to make a run for it…as she grabs her purse she knocks over a vase which alerts AD and Ma that someone was outside the door and heard them ….AD sees Bani making a run for it and runs after her screaming her name as he is afraid he is going to lose his ultimate weapon…….Bani runs into the streets with AAD after her and hops into a cab….AD runs into the on-going traffic and sees this and turns around to hail a cab as well to follow her but as he turns around he gets hit by an oncoming truck killing him instantly……..

Bani keeps thinking how wrong she was about Mr. Walia and keeps berating herself that she should have trusted him more, believed her heart and had faith. Her guilt is almost overwhelming her. She reaches WM and storms through the doors shocking everyone grabs Rano and asks her where Mr. Walia is. Rano with tears in her eyes asks him why do you want to know just to see how you have destroyed him and gotten your revenge for something he didn't do !!!! Bani tells Rano everything and shakes her again asking where is he. Rano states that he couldn't bear to be in the same country let alone the city as it was her wedding day to another man therefore he went to Turkey to attend to some business!!!! Bani asks Rano to help her get to him and between Rano and Ranveer they make all the arrangements for her to fly to Turkey the very same night. As Bani boarded the plane she felt very very apprehensive and guilt ridden hoping against hope that Mr. Walia would forgive her and how would she make him understand and apologize for putting him through hell!!!

She reached Turkey around 12 am and made her way to the hotel oblivious to the beauty of the country around her. Her main thought on reaching her destination…her Mr. Walia!! She approached the reception desk and asked for his room but the clerk responded that he was not there ….Bani pleaded with thte clerk telling him that she was his wife and asked if she could be let in his room……After confirming she was indeed his wife and listening to her story the hotel manger let Bani into the room which was spectacular with high ceilings, flowing curtains, slanted roof. As she entered she was unaware of all this her mind only being on what she would say to him. The room was dark with only the moonlight streaming in. Bani noticed that the French doors were open and as it was getting windier went to shut them …. That's when she noticed the figure in black outside….he had his back to her and a drink in one head and was looking towards the sky…..speaking softly to himself…..saying how he hoped that his Bani had finally found the happiness she truly deserved and that dying the many painful deaths today and everyday will be worth it just to see her smile again. He said it's a pity I can't kill myself because that's what I am as good as dead but I need to live for our children until the day you come to get them and then there will be nothing left for me to live for…….he mused that today was her wedding night and she would truly become someone else's now…as he said this Bani noticed his hand tightening on the glass until it shattered and a pool of blood, to which he was oblivious, could be seen. She let out a scream and ran to him grabbing his hand…he looked back at her stunned as if seeing an apparition, a figment of his imagination…she had tears in her eyes and was wiping his bloody hand with the pallu of her designer pink sari………he took a step back and then reached out to touch her face to see if she was real or not….she held his hand and said yes it is me your Bani ….she was crying openly now and thorough her sobs he made out somewhat of what she was telling him how she found out the truth that she should have had more faith and trust in him etc etc…..He held her to him trying to quiet her and she clutched his jacket sobbingly. He kept telling her it was alright and to stop crying……but she wouldn't stop so he shut her up in the one way he knew worked everytime…..he kissed her, at first slow but then passionately, forcing his tongue into her mouth and savoring the feel and taste of her. His hands roamed all over her body as if assuring himself she was really there in his arms. He pulled back once her sobs stopped and noted her swollen lips and passion darkened eyes…..he started to say something but she stopped him by placing her hand on his mouth saying not tonight…we can talk tomorrow, and with that she kissed him shyly at first as she had never taken the initiative in their lovemaking before but today she felt bold, rejuvenated and powerful knowing that he loved her as unconditionally and completely as she loved him. Her kisses got bolder as she felt his reaction and her confidence grew. She kissed him on his neck while removing his jacket and slowly removing the buttons of his shirt. As she saw his bare chest after five long years she let out a moan and started kissing him…he let out a groan and went to grab her but she stopped him saying today was for him. She went back to kissing his chest and made her way down to his navel unbolting his trousers at which point he couldn't take it anymore and grabbed her up unpinning her sari pallu and desperately unwrapping it from her body. He removed her blouse and underskirt and carried her in her pink undergarments to the bed and laid her down. He removed his trousers along with his boxers and as Bani watched him from the bed she reveled in the fact that he was hers and hers alone….she arched herself in invitation and pulled him to her. He deftly removed what was left of her clothing only to replace his hands with his mouth…….leaving her shivering and wanting for more. As he was about make their union complete she stopped him and said wait now its your turn and with a smile on her face and newfound boldness pushed him so that now she was on top and he on the bottom…she proceeded to administer the same pleasure he just gave her …. At the culmination of which all that could be heard was two hearts beating as one and moans and groans which were in unison and finally a sigh of two soulmates coming together as one!!!

The next morning there was a knock on the door and as they both woke up and scurried to get their clothes on hey heard kids voices….When they opened the door they saw Atharva and Krishna with Rano who said I brang these two to make your family complete. With that she left and the kids ran inside to jump on the bed followed by Bani and Jai…..Both children grabbed one parent o hug them tightly and asked are we a family now and will it always remain as such. JB looked at each other and said always and forever…….Both Atharva and Krishna grabbed pillows and started a pillow fight with JB at the end of which there were feathers flying everywhere and giggles and laughter exploded in the room. Both JB thought that life had finally become wonderful and complete now!!!

( Probably not as hot as you or I would like it but couldn't get any more descriptive or hotter on the forum without being banned)

the letter will follow:::::

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
Hey Nina,

That was very well done yaar, and it was awesome - very steamy too!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: rivya

ok...so u dont seem to have enough tasks to do... 😆 😆 😆
So I figured I will give one of my standard tasks

1. Pick 10 FFs that you have thoroughly enjoyed reading.
2. Then tell us what you absolutely loved about the FF
3. Then tell us what you did not like about the FF
4. Rename the FF and give the write a psuedonym if they were to ever publish their work as books
5. Also cast a TV pair(try other than RK and PD) and a bollywood pair each for the lead roles in the FF.

Rivs

Okay Rivs...Here you go:

    Aditee's FanFic – had no name – I loved it because JB in that FF were the JB we fell in love with and What I didn't like is that it ended in the middle due to unfortunate circumstances…..I would rename the ff – Simply Irresistable and if published should be published under the name of Adi Jani…and how can I cast anyone else as JB aside from RK/PD they have infused life in JB and ARE JB so # 5 will be an impossible task, sorry!!!! Bitter Harvest by Armana – I loved the entire ff from the reconciliation of JB to the friend she makes during the years away from JW because that JW meets his match in that friend ….What I didn't like is that it ended. I would rename it After the Storm and she should publish it under the name of Winter Blossoms and no one can be JB except RK/PD! Ehsaas by none other than yourself because of the way that Tarun and Bani's relationship is portrayed since he is more than a husband or lover – only a friend and supporter --- What I disliked was that it ended too soon wanted to see more of Tarun's romance leading to his marriage and Pia being tortured. The fanfic can be renamed Friendship by R. T. Sablok😃! Painful Solitude by Cordelia – loved it because of JW emotions of loneliness were portrayed and subsequently his meeting with Krishna and JB reconciliation…….It ended too soon and would have loved to seen more interaction between Krishna and her father…I would rename it Akelapaan by Krissy W. Sept Away by Mistletoe – loved the fact that JB get stranded on a deserted island and discover each other. Again it was too short would have loved to see more detailed interactions between them and birth of their children once rescued and back at WM. Would rename it Discovery of Love by MT Jani. Fading Away by Sangitadas…Loved the way JWs emotions are portrayed throughout very poignant and descriptive … Hated the fact that it was a sad ending with Bani's death……Would rename it Love's Ultimate Sacrifice by Jiggy Walia 😃! Wooing Bani Dixit by Sabsj….Loved the feisty Bani and the way Jai's realization of his love for Bani is portrayed. Hated Pia – looked like the slut she is and behaved like one too……ugh!! Would rename it Break down the Barriers by Sabrina Dixit, 😃! Candle in the Wind By Sheena Row--- Love the story as it has been portrayed thus far especially Bani being shown as a disc jockey and defiant yet pliant with JW…..What I hate thus far is the death of Karan --- think he would have been a great match for Pia!!! Would rename it Winning the Race by Shobha Kapoor Try to Remember Me by Grumpy - loved the caharacer of Anjali, JW's daughter....disliked the fact that there were very little JB JDD scenes and it ended too short -- need an epilogue.... Would rename it Anjali's Gift by Angel.
  1. Last but not least love Sapne Sajaan Ke by Klueless--- What I love so far is the descriptive interactions (especially the hot spicy interludes) between JB and the fact that it is ongoing…..What I dislike is Jai's attitude regarding the Milan trip and his need to "control" Bani without meaning to……I would rename it Finding Passion by Feisty Adhbhoot 😃!!!

No Belans please!!!!

Nina

There are so many more wonderful ffs!! Now if only these Lurkers would grab the best JB ideas and put them on our screen (censored of course)!!

Edited by shahni4 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
Rooj

the following is the last of my tasks to complete for you ... the nasty note is what I would write to Ekta Kapoor and Nivedhita Basu:.......

Kya se kya hogaya.....What the hell have you guys done?????????.....Kasam Se under the helm of Sandip Sikand was a masterpiece with mindblowing well developed characters, actors whose enjoyment of being those characters was obvious on screen by their mindblowing performances!! It had a fabulous enthralling storyline which made you fall inlove with even the idea of LOVE all over again!!!

the two of you are primarily responsible for ruining the magic of this show with crap storylines, dialogues and direction.....This is what you call creativity??? Giving us the same boiler plate bullsh*t as your other "K" serials.....

If you lacked the creative magic SS had you should have let KS die a natural death instead of treating it like a degenrate unwanted offspring!!!

you guys really need to come to the real world and accept the fact that audiences have probably more brain cells that you do!!! they know when there is no continuity, no effort in research has been made when the damm actors are so bored and disgusted with the crap they have to act out and sometimes their co-stars to that its obvious on screen!!!!

You guys make a mockery of the indina culture, traditions and religions and should be banned from displaying your craft which is really utter garbage on TV!!!

Shape up or ship out...you have desecrated and beaten the dead horse til there is no more of a wonderful, magical love story!!!


Nina

So Rooj, that was as nasty as I could get without using expletives that would get me banned!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
To each and everyone of you:

Thanks for your Congrats and tasks that made my MOTW week enjoyable and busy....
I hope I have completed all my tasks!!!
Appreciate the fact that you guys didn't burn me too much!!!!

Can't wait to see who is next on the hot seat!!!

Nina
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
Dearest Nina:

Theres still time! On behalf of the PhDians :

1. What are your 5 fave JB scenes and why?
2.Aside from the ONS, what is the one scene you would have liked to change in KS?
3.Name 5 scenarios you would like to see between JB (Besides a second June 19th)
4.RK+PD=JB=KS. Explain this equation in detail.
5.Top five qualities about JW.
6.Top five qualities about BW.
7.Why do you love JB?
8.Describe your perfect date (ok ok I know you are married… just for $hits and giggles )
9.Which country would you like to visit and why?

Hit a roadblock for #10.. so enjoy your nine!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
di you have done an amazing job! i can't believe that you can write so well I say start a little ff for us now! come on!!! 😆
anyways great di!
im hoping you enjoyed your days here!
till next time! 😉
adios!
rooj
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: rooj-i

di you have done an amazing job! i can't believe that you can write so well I say start a little ff for us now! come on!!! 😆
anyways great di!
im hoping you enjoyed your days here!
till next time! 😉
adios!
rooj

Thanks rooj!!!

My biggest fear on writing a FF is dialogue writing and being very descriptive but maybe will think of starting a FF although will probably need help --- the stories are dancing in my head its just getting it on paper!!!

Thanks again !!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nina, I know am not on your list of favorites, but did u have to rub it in.....mujhe Sabrina Dixit bana diya 😆 when did i ever behave like any of the dixit sisters?

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