FF: The 19th...... Will I Be Yours??

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yes i am back again!!!!!!!!! and that to with...Fanfic #18!!!!!!!!!!! (nibu.. dont faint!)

Titled: The 19th....... Will I Be Yours............

Jai Walia: 3rd and Youngest Son in Walia House! The biggest Business Tycoon ever!!!!!! He is everyone's Dream Guy!!!! The one thing about him is that he will never EVER lose his cool for anything!!! He's a carefree guy!!

Bani Dixit: Rich Spoiled Brat...Whatever she wants she gets!!! Loves her Boyfriend Tarun and wants to settle down with him but Tarun says just wait a little and i will sort everything out!! Has the biggest attitude ever!!!

Rajesh Dixit: Bani's Dad.... Wants her to get married and settled down because he hasnt been keeping up with his health and he already has a guy in mind for her... His best friend's Son!!!!

Masi: She wants to see her youngest Nephew to get married and settled down! And wen she talks to Rajesh........

Other Characters:

Adi & Jigyasa: Adi is the 1st Child in Walia House Eldest Son they have 2 Kids.... 5 year Old Sahil and 4 year old Anu

Ranveer & Rano: Ranveer is the 2nd Son in Walia House and married to Rano (No Kids)

Pia and Pushkar: Both are happily Married!! Bani's only sister and is older to Bani! She is more understanding and they have a 5 year old Son Alok Nothing like the Pia in KS!

Tarun: Bani's Boyfriend! (Just read about him as it goes)

Here are the 1st couple of parts... Enjoy and Please Do comment and let me know what u guys think!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

There's a huge mansion…….

Come inside…

The cooks are cooking the food…..

The servants are cleaning!!

Tony is putting fresh flowers in the vases……..

And then

You hear the sound of a ringing bell….

And you go into the mandir….

And there you see Masi

Doing her morning Aarti with Dadi!!!…

She is singing her aarti in the morning!!!

And then

They both turn around….

And Masi smiles

She sees her 3 sons standing right behind her!!!!

And her 2 bahus!!!!

Adi with Jigyasa……

Ranveer with Rano…..

And Jai!!!!!

Masi gives everyone prasad!!!!!

And they all take her blessings!!!!!

Everyone is sitting at the breakfast table!!!!!

Sahil and Anu who are Adi and Jigyasa's kids!!!

Sahil is 5 and Anu is 4….

Both of them are something else!

Cutest little kids!!!!!

They are always fighting and telling on each other!!!!

Everyone always gets a kick out of them!!!!!!

Anu is more bossy!!!

And Sahil always end up listening to her!!!!!

But Anu's favorite was always Jai!!!!!!

She loved him!!!!!

Anu: Chachu… don't forget… .my chocolate!!

Jai: Yes I know!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

Jigs: Jai… you always spoil my daughter!!!!!!….

Jai: Hey there's nothing I can do! She's soo cute!!!!

Adi: U knw wen she grows up she's in ur hands!!!!

Jai: Why she's ur daughter???

Adi: But wen does hse listen to us??? Its always her jai chacha!!!!!

Sahil was more closer to Ranveer!!!!

Sahil loved Ranveer!!!!!

Ranveer would also spoil him….

And if he never listened to Adi or Jigs….

He would always listen to Ranveer!!!!!

Masi loved this!!!!!!

Seeing her whole family together

But she always told Jai….

When would he settle down!!

He was 24 years old!!!!

And still no girl in his life!!!!

Masi always wondered

If he would ever get married!!

Anyone would want to marry him!!!!

He was the biggest wealthiest man!!!

But the one thing that was about him was that….

He never had a temper!!!!

He never loses his cool!!!!

Even at work….

If anyone do anything wrong…

Or if there was a mistake..

He would always tell them in a calm matter!!!!!!!

He was the perfect man!!

Who ever would marry him

She would be one lucky person!!!!!

Masi always told him!!

But Jai is like I will!!!

Don't worry!!!!

When the time is right!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

Next scene shifts….

Its another huge mansion………..

Cooks are cooking!!!!…..

Servants are cleaning!!!!

They have a butler…..

And he's putting flowers in the vases!!!!!!!

And then

U see someone coming down the stairs!!!

And they are wearing..

Jeans and a top!!!

They sit down at the breakfast table

And they are yelling

Saying how come

The food isnt here yet!!!!!!!

The servant comes!!!

She starts eating

And she's like

Wat is this?

This isnt what I want

Get me something good!!!!!

She's like

What do I have to do

To deserve good food around here!!!!

She makes them make something else!!

And they end up making it again!!!!!

And then….

The proper food comes out!!!

And she starts to eat it!!!!

She's like

This is more like it!!!!!

When you see the person's face…

Its none other than Bani herself!!!!!!

She's eating!!!!

And then her dad.. Rajesh….. He comes!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4

Bani is like

Good morning dad!!!

Rajesh is like Good Morning!!

Rajesh's Health hasn't been too good!!!

He has already suffered a heart attack!!!!!….

If he gets one more….

Then it will be bad!!!

Bani gets up

And she's like

I am going bye dad!!!

Rajesh is like

Where are you going?

I wanted to talk to u!!

Bani is like

Next time….

I have to meet up with someone!!!

Rajesh is like

Cant this wait????

Bani is like nope!!

Bye dad!!

And she goes!!!

Rajesh is like….

Whne will this girl learn!!!

Bani thinks

She's all that!!!!

She is one spoiled gal!!

She gets whatever she wants

Whenever she wants!!

And she wont tolerate anything!!!!

Rajesh wants to see her daughter…..

Married off!!!!!!

And go to a good home!!!!!

He just wants the best of it

Bani knows…. That everytime he wants to talk to her…..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5

Its about her marriage

She avoids him all the time!!!!

Bani goes…

She tells the driver….

Where she wants to go!!!

Meanwhile……

Someone is waiting at a caf….

And they are looking at their watch!!!

Guy: Man she's late!!!!!

And then

Bani's car pulls up!!!!

She gets out of the car!!!!

She goes….

And when you see the guys face..

Its none other than Tarun!!!!!!!

Bani hugs him!!!

T: U are late!!

Bani: I know I am sorry!!!!!……

They both talk!!!!

Meanwhile….

Jai is at work!!!!

And something wasn't right!!!!

So he called the sec

And told him

Wat is this????

I didn't ask for this!!

Sec is like I am sorry!!

Jai is like its okay!!

And he explains

How he wanted it!!!!!

Jai will never lose his cool!!

No matter what will happen

He will never snap his twig!!!!!!!

The sec leaves!!


The End!! (Please Comment and let me know how it is!!)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg kripa!!! beat me...but krips hun youpost in inbetween..so techinically...technically....im first...after gulios posts ...lol....guli jaanu...ff #18...congrats 👏
story kafi twisted hai...jai youngest son...RR and no kids...adi and Jigs with sahil and anu only 5 n4...so cute...haila...cachu ki jaan ms. anu...aww...chocolate...mujhe bhi chahiyeh...😃...massi get those wheels working...jai ke shaadi ka umar aagaya hai...theen bete aur only doh bahu's...nahin chalega 😉...cant wait for next update...better be tonigt...varna...BELAN!!!...see u soon babe...🤗
JAZ
aur haan...iss mein bhi buttons aagaye toh tujhe koi nahin bacha sakta...😡...haan one more thing...teri finals hai naa..chem...tu IF pe kya kaar raha hai...STUDY!!!...😉

Edited by jnawaz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start jaan, but Bani and Tarun 😡 comeon... but then its just the begining looking forward to reading more. Continue soon hun
Kripa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jnawaz

omg kripa!!! beat me Jaz i was first..but krips hun youpost in inbetween..so techinically...technically.no me first me first...im first...after gulios posts it doesnt matter but i guess i'll be nice and share it with you😆...lol....guli jaanu...ff #18...congrats 👏
story kafi twisted hai...jai youngest son...RR and no kids...adi and Jigs with sahil and anu only 5 n4...so cute...haila...cachu ki jaan ms. anu...aww...chocolate...mujhe bhi chahiyeh...😃...massi get those wheels working...jai ke shaadi ka umar aagaya hai...theen bete aur only doh bahu's...nahin chalega 😉...cant wait for next update...better be tonigt...varna...BELAN!!!...see u soon babe...🤗
JAZ
aur haan...iss mein bhi buttons aagaye toh tujhe koi nahin bacha sakta...😡...haan one more thing...teri finals hai naa..chem...tu IF pe kya kaar raha hai...STUDY!!!...😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wooooooooooooooow lovey ff guli.........baniz really stubborn.....and jai hes so cool and not short tmpered .......interesting ff .......continue soon 😊

angelrockz 😊

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