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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

hey Navs ............ just read alll the 10 parts..........

was busy with some work all these days..... got some time so started reading ur ff........ OMG i really loved this one..... specially three musketeers........ its' awesome...............👏
aage kya hoga????????

Munni

hey jaan... how u been.. haven't heard from u in longest.. thanx.. glad u like it and the three musketeers yep yep.. aage kya hoga??? wait till d nxt part.. it should be up tomorrow fo sure
Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
its very good please count soon 😉 😳 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: morlen

its very good please count soon 😉 😳 👏

thank u so much.. bout to write d nxt part
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Posted: 18 years ago

sorry fo not updating yesterday.. btw u know the new bond is not cute.. james bond is suppose to be HOT.. the last one.. this one's not 😕 k im done

a lil note - ranveer was never violent wit raashi.. he was just annoyin and rude - just verbally rude.. not physically .. just wanna clear that up

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hope u guyz enjoy this part😳
u know i must say the new bond is NOT cute.. dude... james bond is suppose to be hot... this one's not .. hmm.. anyhow .. ahem enjoy
side note guyz - ranveer was neva violent wit raashi in this ff.. just verbally mean.. and rude.. not violent.. and NO wig - good lord NO
*~*~*PART 11*~*~*



The three musketeers are standing in the front thanking everyone.. as everyone was busy congratulating them..
Pushkar: im so happy
Raashi: yep me too
Pushkar: no i mean ye im happy cuz its been a month since we opened the resturant but
Bani: but what???
Pushkar: nothin im just lookin around and im happy that most of the customers here are our regular customers.. and im glad we got to celebrate this day wit them

Bani: that's true cuz witout them we wouldn't have been so successful
Raashi: i completely agree
Pushkar: u know from the looks of it.. i think the walia's and chopras are gonna be regular customers too
Raashi: i knowwwww im shocked to see 'em here.. they were just here 2 days ago
Bani: did u see the looks on their faces..
Raashi: i know.. you were right pushkar.. i mean jigyasa has been raving on and on about our restaurant and if she had known that we are the owners we'd be hearing nothin but BS..

Bani: yep i think that's all DONE wit now.. how i wish i could look at them right now.. cuz the look on her face is priceless
Pushkar: i know wat u mean
Bani: u know i would look but i think im gnna end up laughin.. and laughin too hard.. 😆 so i'd rather not take my chances
as the three share a laugh.. the manager joins them.. tellin them its time to cut the cake.. the three stands before the table.. pushy's standin in the middle.. wit bani on his left side.. raashi on the right.. pushy has his arms around 'em.. one of the workers is takin pictures.. of them and everyone else.. the cake looks beautiful - choclate.. yum yum.. there's only 1 candle on it - as its 1 month anniversary.. of their restaurant

Pushkar: ok guyz ready
Bani: yep yep
Pushkar: my count - on 3
Raashi: ok
Pushkar: ONE
raashi/bani r waiting.. cuz pushy's takin his time
Bani: hurry up pushkar
Pushkar: TWO
the three get ready to blow the candle
Pushkar: ONE they were both about to blow the candle but stop... lookin at pushkar who was laughin along wit everyone else
Bani/Raashi: pushkarrrrrrrrrr
Pushkar: ok ok im sorry.. there's a reason y i failed math so many times
Raashi: ya ya
Pushkar: ok three
the three blow out the candle.. as they take the knife... cutting 3 pieces..raashi's bout to pick up a piece..
Pushkar: i want to eat the one wit the flower bani/raashi look at pushkar as the three pick up the pieces.. bani feeds raashi the cake.. while pushy feeds bani and raashi feeds pushy.. all together.. as a picture is taken (its a KODAK moment.. i tell u 😉) as bani whispers to pushkar and raashi

Bani: someone should take a picture of jigyasa and pia
Raashi: i know right.. cuz i think they're still sitting there like statues
Pushkar: u guyzzzzzzz stop it
Bani: i think they both have the look as if someone just slapped 'em across the face REAL hard
as bani/raashi burst out laughing.. and pushkar's lookin at them unbelievably..as the three go and meet greet wit the shuklas

Masi/dadi/adi uncle/sahil/rano were among the ones who were really happy.. Dadi for one was having a hard time controling her laugh cuz of jigs.. how dadi wished she could take this moment and taunt jigyasa forever 😆 😆 😆 Adi proceeds forward from the "specific" table.. takin the mike from the manager.. as he makes a little speech... gaining everyone's attention..congratulating the three musketeers on their sucess
Adi: guyz i don't know about anyone else.. but i think me and jigyasa are gonna be regulars here for sure 😉 the three musketeers look at adi uncle 😲 as they turn to look at jigs who's lookin at adi 😡 as adi walks towards jigyasa wit the mike
Adi: arey jigyasa yeh kya.. u've been going on and on about how much u luv this place.. and now ur here.. u've met the owners.. and ur not even congratulating them.. come on jigs is lookin at adi like.. ur DEAD.. dead.. adi uncle just smiles.. tagging jigs along wit him.. towards the three musketeers.. who r trying.. TRYING not to laugh.. dadi/masi/sahil/rano and even jai is tryin not to laugh.. cuz they know much jigs LOVES bani/raashi
Adi: come on jigyasa say somethin.. as he puts the mike by her face.. whispering in her ear.. NO taunting be nice
Jigyasa: well what can i say.. CONGRATULATIONS u guyz have done quite well
pushy/rashi/bani: thanxx.. glad u enjoy our service 😃
as she leaves fo the table in a fuss.. the three musketeers take aashirwaad from adi uncle.. who once again congratulates them.. and goes to his table..

Aside from jigs.. pia was also fuming.. FUMING.. jealous.. as alwayz she didn't know wat she was confused of.. her sister's success or her clothing 😆 😆 😆 as she stares at the three musketeers talking and laughing.. just as she hears two HOT lookin guyz 😉 in the back.. talkin among themselves.. but loud enough for pia to overhear
Guy 1: now that's wat i call successful women (they're talkin about raashi/bani)
Guy 2: i know wat u mean.. they're modern yet cultured.. every guy's dream as pia hears this..she's burning wit jealousy..

much to bani's shock.. the only person who didn't seem shocked or jealous or angry at the table was jai.. he had just sat there smiling.. yepp u heard right SMILING.. he was happy.. happy for bani.. he wasn't shocked cuz he knew bani would do somethin big fo sure.. at least start.. he had that much belief in her.. cuz he knew bani could do it and he knew she would 😉 and here she is.. she did it.. she started.. didn't she..

Raashi's busy talkin to some of the workers.. as pushy's chillin wit the shuklas.. bani's helping one of the workers wit somethin just as she hears someone.. she knows its him.. it is.. cuz it is..
JW: Congrulations Mrs. Walia (whoa dude.. u go jai.. mrs. walia.. aye haye.. kya baat hai) jai had gotten up made his way towards bani to personally congratulate her😳.. bani takes a deep breath turning around.. she can't even walk past him.. as everyone's there.. bani turns
Bani: mr. walia aap??
JW: Congrulations
as he brings his hand forward.. bani looks at him in disbelief.. as takes her hand forward..a little nervous and shaky
Bani: thank you as she shakes hands wit him.. only to notice.. jai raising her hand.. jai's lookin right in her eyes.. as he plants a kiss on her hand.. bani's standin there STATUE.. pushy/raashi who r watchin this are 😲and they're not the only ones as EVERYONE at the specific table had the same reaction.. pia could've just jumped out of the window.. wit that much jealousy... 😆

bani tried to take her hand back but he was holdin her hand too tightly.. no chance of letting go... bani's standin there lookin at him.. and he's standin there comfortably lookin back.. raashi rushes to bani's side.. cuz she knew bani would kill her.. if she didn't
Raashi: um.. bani.. can i talk to u for a second??
JW: congratulations raashi
Raashi: um.. thanx m
that's all she got out.. thanx M.. before she could continue further.. jai continued
JW: mamaji raashi looks at him mamaji - as she was gonna say Mr. Walia by now jai had let go of bani's hand.. now the two grlz r tensed while jai's standin there quietly..
Bani: um.. well congratulations to u too mr. walia
JW: for??
Bani: well we heard bout ur.. successful business deal
JW: which one bani??
Bani: um.. the one u were
as bani's at loss of words.. jai knows exactly which deal she's talkin about.. but he continues wit his weird questions makin bani nervous.. and she decides to stay quiet.. raashi's just standin there quietly.. thinkin kahan phas gayi mein
JW: bani
Bani: ji
JW: thanx
Bani: huh
JW: well ur congratulating me.. so thanx.. i know which deal ur talkin about and bani u know me.. im jai walia.. wateva i decide to achieve i get successful no matter what..
bani and raashi just look at him.. again at loss of words.. suddenly mr. tandon joins them (just some business man)
Mr. Tandon: congratulations breakin the intense stares and the tension
Bani/Raashi: thank you
Mr. Tandon: well u guyz must be good and successful.. one of the most successful business man.. mr. walia himself is a regular here
as they both look at jai.. and jai's already lookin at bani 😉 😳
Mr. Tandon: so have u guyz thought of partnership.. i mean mr. walia also runs a food chain bani/raashi look at each other.. jai's also waitin fo an answer
Pushkar: um.. actually no we haven't... not yet..

bani/raashi thank god fo sendin pushy.. as pushy explains to mr. tandon how they just started their business right now its a lot on their plate.. once they get used to this.. and know they're ready fo more... then they'll think of partnership and so on.. as they continue to chat.. after a while mr. tandon leaves.. jai also gets ready to excuse himself.. goes back to the table.. the three musketeers just stand there quietly.. as pushy takes 'em away..they go in their office

Bani: water waterrr raashi hands her water also drinkin some..
Pushkar: u both ready to go outside again
Raashi: yea
Bani: yea yea let's go
they all make their way back outside.. bani/raashi go meet everyone at the specific table - well everyone meaning.. masi/dadi/sahil/rano/ - rano hugs 'em along wit sahil congratulating 'em.. they get aashirwaad from masi/dadi.. just then pushy joins.. he gets aashirwaaad.. then bani goes to some of their known customers.. talkin to them.. raashi's chattin wit someone.. little does she know RIGHT behind her.. is ranveer.. they both have their back towards each other.. they both don't know about the other


Mrs. Agarwal: (um.. just some lady) Mr. and Mrs. Ranveer Walia both ranveer and raashi turn lookin at her.. like HUH.. suddenly they see each other.. they're both lookin at each other quietly..
Mrs. Agarwal: wow i haven't seen u guyz since ur wedding.. how've u been??
Raashi: um.. we're ok
ranveer's standin there quietly observing raashi.. who's talkin to the lady.. answerin her questions.. finally the lady leaves.. not before she mentioned that they both look cute together 😉 which leads to raashi lookin at ranveer again.. who was already lookin at her.. after a couple of seconds.. raashi leaves - trying to find bani.. once she finds bani.. bani sees raashi who's all they both look around fo pushy..they finally spot him

Pushkar's chatting away wit some ppl.. pia's sitting there staring at him (ermm i don't know y 😕 ) just then pushy starts walking towards pia.. he's smiling - lookin cute😉.. pia stands up smiling.. pushy walks towards her and then he's gone.. he walks right past her .. pia's standin there in disbelief.. to see pushy talkin to two little grlz .. they're 7 yrs old.. pushkar's sweet talkin to 'em..
Pushkar: and u guyz didn't congratulate me?? the grlz r priya and tanya
Tanya: aap ne choclate nahin di
pushy laughs hearing this..
Pushy: oh ho toh yeh baat hai.. u guyz should be giving me choclates.. as he takes out two choclates and gives 'em to the little grlz.. who smile.. thanking him and hugging him
Pushkar: and i still didn't get my congratulations
Priya: congratulations uncle
Pushkar: uncle?? uncle.. mein?? UNCLE.. chalo uncle hi sahi.. ab is uncle ke liye aunty toh dhoondh lo😉.. warna mein aise hi boodha ho jaoonga
makin the grlz laugh.. he laughs along 'em.. just as pia's watching all of this.. she's smiling.. thinkin how cute he is wit kids just as she sees these two grlz checkin pushy out - cuz they were watchin him wit d kids.. as so on.. pia's fully jealous and irritated now.. as she looks at pushy who's smiling away totally klueless.. as bani/raashi join him


Bani: pushkar
Pushkar: yea
Raashi: let's go
Pushkar: where???
bani: movies
Pushkar: i thought we were going tomorrow
Raashi: no we're going now
Pushkar: but
Raashi: no buts now..
Pushkar: ermm ok.. change.. unless we're going as professionals
ok he TRIED to crack a joke which didn't work... so both bani/raashi go to the office to change.. they have clothes there - fo emergencies.. a full bathroom - so on.. they both go to change.. after a while.. they leave.. the three bid their good byes to the shuklas.. tell the manager they're leaving for the night.. as the three make their way outside

everyone goes back to their dinner.. jigs is fuming but continues to celebrate anu's bday.. why not.. she paid so um.. y not..




dat's it fo now.. hope u guyz enjoyed... next part tomorrow
Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
i hope u guyz enjoy.. its LONG!!!!!!!.. sorry about that 😕 😕 nxt part tomorrow
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Posted: 18 years ago
Jai ko kya hogaya hai... 😕 Is Bani still married to him? Confusion there..? Hopefully will be cleared in the coming parts Navs... gr8 part.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nian

Jai ko kya hogaya hai... 😕 Is Bani still married to him? Confusion there..? Hopefully will be cleared in the coming parts Navs... gr8 part.... 👏

jai ko kuch kuch hota hai😆 yep bani's still married to him.. no divorce.. raashi's still married to ranveer.. they left the house.. NO divorce .. thanx jaan
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Posted: 18 years ago
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um its never ever ever too long!
its still short 😉
dude i think Pushkar is hillarious in here!
continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
jai go and get bani
its good keep going

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