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Posted: 18 years ago

#1651

Originally posted by: sanam84

navs just cud not resist, had to do it lol, hope u dont mind. great part loved it.lmao i loved reading that. too funni

Bani n pushy r just too much wot a prank to play on Ranu Bhaiya,anju helped me.. me don't got brains to think of such parts but mere Jai ne bolti baand kar di.yes my he-man did hehe.. bechara phushy cud not stand.jai se panga lene ka asar😆 and Jai now he will not let a chance to flirt go, hai na last main line mar hi diya😆 so rashi is gonna go home. "sajan ghar ana tha, sajan ghar aye tum, piya man bhana tha piya man bhaye Tum, her khushi hai ab tumhari, mughe de do gum, janeman janeman😳" thanx fo d song.. wat a nice song..

great part asusual n asusual next part pls.😆 haila wait.. yaar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1652

Originally posted by: jnawaz
yay...update...wah wha...loved it...loved thier plan...i can totallly picture ranveers face...hes all 😲 and them 😡 😡 😡 ...i was sure he was going to kick this "guys" a*s...lol...it was so funny when jai is all can i talk to you and pushy is all No...lol...im all😲 and then im all 😃 ...no one...and i mean no one...says NO to jai...except bani but uska haq hai... 😛 😛 😛 update soon
JAZ

thanx jaanu.. glad u liked it.. lol yep he was.. he was gonna kill some.. u know.. lmao yaar pushy was scared.. so he blurted out NO.. 😆 yep no one says no to jai.. no one.. will update soon thanx jaz jaanu😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1653

Originally posted by: sokkerchc

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1654

Originally posted by: sokkerchc

see i told u i wud comment by tonite and here i am

yeah ranveer is happy the rest of the ppl i dnt care abt but jw shud have yelled and pooch and amma i wud have bn 🥳but than thtz not u i knw i was hoping for too much but hey i can dream cnt i? lmao u and ur ranveer.. haila.. yes yes u can dream... 😆

i was going to tell u smthng else when i started writing i knew wat i had to say but than forgot😳😕great tell me when u remember

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1655

Originally posted by: amiee
raashi this song is for you " PAALKHI MEIN HOKE SAVAAR CHALI RE MEIN TO APNE SAAJAN KE DWAR CHALI RE , KOI ROK SAKE TO ROK LE ..........." I thought this song suited raashi's situation so well 😃

i luv that song.. weird i was listning to it yesterday.. true true... it does fit for her👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1656

Originally posted by: Miss_Diey
i'm so happy for Raashi, she definitely deserves this hapinees. yep yep she does.. bani'll get her share of happiness tooo
By the way it was so funny this story with Nishant 😆 seeing Ranveer angry and confused was so funny. glad u liked d nishant part..
He got her wife back, what a beautiful news 😃 .
Now what will happen to Bani, she will live alone and miss Raashi 😕 .
Great part 😉 thank you so much.. don't worry bani ka time bhi aayega😉
Diey

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1657

Originally posted by: ratisha
hey navs
how r u
sorry for replying after so many days. i was so sick with a high fever and a bad cough 😔
just caught up with all the parts just fantastic
👏
i loved the last part
pushkar's idea was just awesome, loved it bechara ranveer
its good for rashi going home
chalo ek to pushkar ne proper get out kar dehna hai
wait for ur next part
ratisha

hey hun.. im fine.. how u donig.. haila.. i hope ur feeling betta now.. plz yaar dont say sorry.. glad u liked d last part.. and pushy's diea.. yep raashi's going home.. lmao.. yep proper get out karna hai😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1658

Originally posted by: rooj-i
Great part navs... thank you so much hun
i love it!!!
but one thing i hope you don't mind but i didn't like the kind of joke they played on Ranveer...too serious in real life but i guess this is reel so i guess it works 😆 😆 yaar thank god it wasn't stretched so far... it started and it finished so no tension..
anyways overall it was great...
but when is Jai's turn to confess? um.. soon hmmm soon
please continue soon thanx hun.. glad u liked it😃
rooj

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1659

thanx guyz.. hope u enjoy this part.. thanx fo d help samu 🤗 .. i'd be lost wit out u guyz.. sighhh .. forgive d mistakes guyz.. i had no time to proof read.. hope u liked it😳

*~*~*PART 46*~*~*

Jai and Ranveer make their way towards the table.. where their two clients were seated 😃 .. Raashi was busy talking wit bani and pushkar 😳 .. no wait .. bani and pushkar were busy saying sorry to raashi.. who hadn't forgiven 'em yet for playing such a cruel joke on ranveer.. 😆 the three musketeers did some work.. in the restaurant
Bani: raashi we should leave 😃
Raashi: wat?? already?? why??
Bani: cuz hun u have to pack 😕
Raashi: yea but
Bani: yea but wat.. u have to take most of the things.. obviously.. so we'll leave in a while 😃
Raashi: hmm ok
Pushkar: hey raashi 😉
Raashi: kya hai... 😡
Pushkar: nothing.. i was just looking around.. u know makin sure all our customers r satisfied.. 😉 😉
Raashi: haan toh?? 😕
Pushkar: i noticeddd
Raashi: whattt did u notice pushkar
Pushkar: i noticed that ur husband isn't really eating.. while everyone else seems to be enjoying bani stood there smiling cuz she knew where pushkar was going wit this.. 😆 😆 raashi stood there 😡 😡 😡 cuz she also knew where pushkar was going wit this.. pushkar looked at raashi's reaction.. as he moved towards bani.. to be safe 😆 😆
Pushkar: so i was thinking maybe u should ask ranveer.. if he wants anything and be a kind considerate wife 😉 😉 right bani raashi looked around.. so she can find something to throw at pushkar 😆 😆

Raashi: im gonna kill u.. as she picked up a pen and aimed for pushkar 😆 😆 😆 it was the only thing available.. and she did not miss.. as pushkar screamed a loud "ow"
Pushkar: dekha bani.. ab pati ji kya aa gaye.. hamari toh chinta hi nahin hai 😉
Raashi: tu ruk .. tumhe toh mein abhi batati hoon they both ran around their office table couple of times like little kids 😆 😆 till pushkar ran outside screaming.. followed by raashi.. running right out of the restaurant.. 😆

as bani made her way out of the office wit her things.. she noticed.. all eyes were at the door.. all eyes 😆.. then all of a sudden.. she noticed all eyes on her... as if they all wanted an explanation as to .. wat the hel* just happened here 😆 😆 bani just looked down.. as she rushed out of the office.. jai and ranveer sat there.. confused... but they had a slight idea of wat had probably happened.... 😆 😉 😉 as they smiled.. and went bac to their work

bani/raashi and pushkar made their way towards the apartment.. bani helped raashi wit d packing.. raashi was getting sentimental.. but then she ignored d idea... thinkin... knowin fo sure.. 😉 😉 that bani'll be there too.. in that house.. soon.. 😳 😳 they finished up the packing.. as pushkar well... he didn't really help.. he did everything but that 😆 😆

d nxt morning.. bani/raashi were at pushkar's house.. preparing for the pooja.. helping out.. getting everything ready.. the pooja was gonna start soon..and a lot was to be done.. so they all pitched in.. helping out.. taking care of everything.. bani wore a black sari.. raashi wore a salwaar kameez.. soon after the walia's pulled up at the door... everyone had come.. as promised 😳 😳 before they could enter.. rano came running inside
Rano: bani diii as she went and hugged rano... she hadn't seen her in a while
Bani: kaisi ho rano 😃
Rano: bilkul theek di.. aur aap 😃 😛
Bani: im fine.. mein abhi aati hoon.. i need to finish up the preparation.. 😳
Rano: ok di 😃 d rest of the walia's got greeted by the shuklas.. as they all talked.. rano made her way towards raashi who was decorating the pooja ki thali
Rano: raashiiii as she went and hugged her from behind.. pushkar joined both of them soon after
Pushkar: hug for ur sisters.. wat about me??
Rano: hi jiju 😳
Pushkar: kaisi ho rano.. itni der kyun lagadi tum sab ne 😡
Rano: woh kya hai na jiju.. we were taking our time to get ready??
Raashi: taking ur time.. why
Rano: cuz ranveer bhaiya was ready at like 5 in the morning.. impatient.. so we were just.. raashi stared at rano 😲 as pushkar burst out laughing..
Pushkar: kya baat hai.. aaj kal ranveer ko bahut pyar aa raha hai. 😉 😉 . raashi stood there 😳 😳 and then 😡 😡 and rano and pushkar continued to joke wit her

the pooja started and finished.. everyone had enjoyed.. now raashi was leaving.. bani and pushkar were happy and sad.. they couldn't express their feelings.. vice versa .. neither could raashi.. everyone decided to leave them alone for a while.. as the three shared a group hug and just talked.. till raashi left.. not before jai invited all of them for dinnner 😉 😉 and d shuklas couldn't say no.. cuz well they couldn't.. 😆 😆

rano had welcomed raashi and ranveer both in.. as per tradition.. it was as if .. a newly wed bride was coming home 😳 😳 it was special for them.. it was special for her and ranveer... special for raashi cuz this time she actually belonged and was wanted 😳 😳 in this house of hers.. then the whole day raashi and rano had been busy in the kitchen.. cuz d guests were coming..
Raashi: where are you guyz??
Pushkar: so u do miss us 😭 😭
Raashi: pushkarrr
Pushkar: we're coming raash.. patience..
Raashi: well hurry up
Pushkar: kya yaar i have a car.. not a plane.. aur traffic bhi hoti hai
Raashi: give d phone to bani.. not talkin to u anymore 😡 😡
Pushkar: well too bad.. u don't talk to me.. u dont' talk to bani..
Raashi: pushkarrrrr 😡
Pushkar: baad mein chilana.. open the door.. we're outside raashi ran opening the door.. the walia's were sitting there waiting for everyone.. as they greeted them..welcoming them in 😳 😳 .. bani couldn't believe she was here again.. fate.. destiny.. wateva it was.. she continued to come walking thru this door as if she belonged here 😳 😳
Pushkar: raashi
Raashi: haan pushkar
Pushkar: kuch poocho gi nahin
Raashi: kya
Pushkar: if i want something to drink or not pushkar looked at raashi 😳 😳 😳 while raashi looked at him 😡 😡 as raashi smiled tumhari bolti toh mein abhi band karti hu bachu

Raashi: right right of course.. where are my manners
Pushkar: exactly 😃 😃
Raashi: aarti pushkar stared at raashi.. as bani and rano looked at raashi.. as he whispered to raashi
Pushkar: aarti??
Raashi: haan 😳
Pushkar: kaun aarti
Raashi: pushkar.. tum kya kisi aur aarti ko jaante ho 😉 😉 just then aarti made her way outside wit drinks for everyone

Raashi: aunty yeh hai aarti.. anu ki dost..
Aaarti: namaste aunty..
Sarlaben: namaste beta as raashi whispered to pushkar..
Raashi: aur pushkar ki girl friend 😉 😉 😉 pushkar upon hearing that comment.. started coughin.. and was now red
Raashi: arey pushkar.. aarti give him some water too.. bechara aarti made her way towards pushkar wit water.. as raashi tried to control her laughter along wit bani/ranveer and jai 😆 😆 😆 .. seeeing pushkar give a cute sweet smile to aarti 😉 😉 as he took the water from her..
Raashi: manners kahaan hai tumhari.. say thank you now it was pushkar's turn to look at raashi 😡 😡 😡
Pushkar: thanx aarti smiled nodding.. whispering a "ur welcome" as she went bac in d kitchen..

Tony: dinner's fixed.. u guyz can come eat now..
JW: let's go everyone jai was happy bani was here.. he was thinkin about how to move their relationship forward 😉 😉 😉 .. even though raashi was here.. it hadn't made much difference to him... cuz now he was thinkin about how bani's living alone 😭 😭 before there was raashi but now 😭 😭 they all had dinner.. all d ladies.. had helped wit d serving.. and then.. everyone ate and enjoyed.. jai didn't get a chance to talk to bani.. or even anything else..

he needed to do something.. dinner was over.. everyone was already going home.. this day was going super quick. at least that's wat jai thought.. bani was so busy spending time wit raashi/rano/anu and aarti - well all d ladies.. jai got no chance to even talk to her.. not even in d pooja this morning and not now 😭 😭 😭
Mahesh: thank you for the lunch mr. walia.. we had a great time
JW: plz.. its our pleasure.. we're just celebrating.. and its been a while.. since we had company over
Mahesh: we'll take ur leave now.. chalein?? everyone got up ready to leave

Anu: pushkar bhaiya, can u drop aarti off?? 😉 😉
Pushkar: me??
Anu: haan u have a car don't u.. u guyz came in two cars
Pushkar: haan lekin
Mahesh: pushkar hum chalte hain.. u drop bani and aarti off 😃
Pushkar: ji bhaiya 😃 😛 saying that the shuklas made their exit.. as bani and pushkar got ready to leave.. it was getting rather late

Pushkar: bani jai sir will drop u off.. right jai sir?? jai looked at bani..
JW: sure i don't mind
Pushkar: thank u thank u.. bani plz yaar.. i have to u know
Bani: u have to wat huh..
Pushkar: aarti.. plz plz plz plz plz 😳 😳
Bani: go.. go go.. pagal 😆 😆
Pushkar: thanx bani.. see u tomorrow 😃 as he hugged her.. he went outside where aarti and anu were waiting.. bani said bye to sahil/ranveer/raashi/rano.. as she made her way outside wit jai 😉

they both sat in the car..quietly.. not talking
JW: so bani.. u wanna come to this lounge wit me.. its before he could finish 😭 😭
Bani: nahin woh mujhe ghar jaana hai jai looked at her
JW: u still don't trust me bani do u??? bani looked at jai.. as he looked straight driving.. waiting for an answer
Bani: after wat u have done, how can i??
JW: Why dig up d past??
Bani: Its too difficult to move on.. wit out looking back 😭
JW: well things happen bani.. and u have to learn how to move on.. but then its another thing.. when u don't have trust in me
Bani: its not that easy.. 😭 😭
JW: it is easy bani if u try..
Bani: and i do trust u... like i said its difficult.. 😭 😭 trust can't be built up over night u know
JW: i know.. that's why i need more time with u bani 😳 ..but if ur so stuck wit the past memories.. even God can even help u 😡 bani looked at him.. as her sad expression changed into one of an angry one 😡 😡 😡
JW: don't give me an angry look bani.. im tryin to work this out and move forward but obviously i can see ur not ready to let go off past memories.. 😡and u talk about trust 😡
Bani: what is that suppose to mean?? 😡 😡 😡
JW: i think u know exactly wat it meant... and frankly right now i don't have the time to sit here and explain to u wat it means😡..cuz i thought u'd be smart enough to know.. but i guess not.. and wit this.. we'll never move on😡 not if u continue to dig up d past.. and never let go as jai pulled the car to the side near bani's apartment.. bani couldn't take it anymore..she had tears in her eyes.. more so.. she as angry.. how could he.. how could he even say such a thing..

as bani got out of the car.. banging the door.. she went in her apartment.. as jai sat there quietly yet angrily watching her 😡 😡 .. as he made a fast turn and drove home pissed off.. bani went in her apartment... crying.. confused about wat had just happened.. where did all of this come from all of a sudden 😭 😭 😭 .. as her phone rang..

hope u guyz like it..

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago