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Posted: 18 years ago

#991

Originally posted by: purple_penguins
Aww.. Ranveer bought her the earrings... that totally reminds me of a movie!! Now which one ..... 😉 .... ehhe... Jai bought her ice cream....cho sweet!!!..... hhe... continue soon... I want an early xmas gift! 😉 😉

**Aviva**

i don't know yaar u tell me.. i copied kyph 😆😆😆 angad sorta sorta helped kripa pick out a suit.. 😆 early xmas gift. hun xmas was over a while ago.. sorry for the delay

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#992

Originally posted by: Vedo
Awesome part!! thanx hun
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Hehe! 😆 😆 Ya Pushy I been trying to tell you they hid it all the time but you just wouldn't listen! 😛 pushkar bhi na.. kya karein
Awww the Ranveer/Raashi part was cute! 😳 😳

I'm reading double meanings into those words! 😳 😳 😳 double.. tell me tell me😉
Please do continue...I'm expecting to have a lott of catching up when I get back! 😛 a lot?? do 2-3 parts sound good😉

V. 😊

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#993

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

savin ! .... awwww !! Jaannuuu !! Thankiess for updatingg !! ....was waiting sooo eagerllyy and u knww that !! sooo thanskxx a dozen u madee me smileee !! 😃😃 ...such a tremenouslyy breath takingg updatee......and simplyyy remarkablee !! toooo gooodd !! loved it ! 👏 thanx jaanu. glad u liked it 😳😳

awwwww !! ....Pushy .. thesee Girlss r sooo sad .. they atee ur rasmalai ...aww ..tut tut .. tahtss bad ...... but o00hh welll ....u gt to eat the choc cake in the end .....which was good ! but u kwnw Navss the way u portray him is ssooo cuteee !! just loved it to bitsss !!! 😃 thanx shafaq hun.. like i said.. i alwayz pictured pushy like this.. i don't know y

awwwn ! ahheemm Ranveer i didnt knw u know how to choose... Earrings...now i bet if Raashi knew dat in KS .... we wud alwayss seee her shop ! !..butt awww tht was ssoo cuteee !! like what materss to mee is ur smileee !! haaaiiiii !! ..well Ranveer is kindaa gettin to that side sooonn !! ....😳 ....andd i cud sooo imaginee Raashi's look on that one !! 😉.. lol.. kya karein bhai.. ranveer has his romantic side😉

awww !! 🤗 for u hun ! ....... aww thanx jaan.. Thanksss tonness..... u hadd the BR choc ice cream ..whihc both of them loveddddd 😛!! awwwww !!! ia m ssooo flattered now ! nad i reallyy do havee a smile on my faceee !! 😃 ... im very glad to know that.. of course chocolate ice cream.. come on everyone loves chocolate ice cream 😉awww ... now i want an ice cream treat as well ! 😉 ... awww Jai ! .. noww to tel u the truth ..the Rasmalai ...Kheer...gajar ka halwa..and ice cream .. r wayy tooo sweett.. than anthing elsee...okiee i admit Mickey is sweeter 😳😳! .. lmao yess of course he is for u .. i know i know

butt heyy whtss thisss Kisss ..thing ! HAILAAAAAAAAA u dont' remember.. u need a lil flashback.. read this part.. which u probably forgot bout. it was d last or d last last part 😆 when they were bout to go home after the dinner.. hope this brings back some kinda memory😉

[quote=nyzbabigyal]jai walks behind her.. as he stops her by holding her pallu.. bani stops.. freezing on her spot.. jai makes his way towards her.. as he stands behind her.. he brings up his hand.. moving her hair to the side.. from her shoulder.. movin 'em to the side.. as he bends down.. placing a soft kiss on her neck😳😳(**FAINTS**).. sending shivers up and down her spine.. as he whispers in her ear

JW: i'll see u tomorrow.. good night as he kisses her ear gently😳.. he walks past her.. makin his way out of the kitchen.. then out of the house.. bani's still frozen at the spot... as she still remembers his touch.. his voice.. his scent 😉.. [/quote]

Navss hun ur innocent Kiddo didnt get that ! ....xplain in detail yaar !! 😳 .....aww Jai is ssooo sweeett ! ...ahheem ahheemm ! .....awww tht was reallyy cutee ! yaar i explained in detail.. i posted d little paragraph.. so re read it.. u'll know which kiss jai's talkin about..

Awesomee updatee hun ! simplyyy fab !! loved tt yaaarrr ! ... noww pleaseee updateee sooonn !! will be waiting eagerllyy for it !! Thanksxxxx !! ...soon matlab soon yh ..ASAP ! ..... andd Soryy for being such a pain ! 😳😳

Thanksxxxx...!

Shafaq ! 😛 thanx jaanu.. glad u liked it 😳

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#994

thanx guyz.. im so sorry for the delay.. hope u enjoy this part 😳😳😳

and for those who don't know my name.. its navneet or navs .. cough ANJU cough cough cough 😆

*~*~*PART 27*~*~*

they all made their way towards a restaurant to enjoy some lunchh.. as there was still half a day left for more fun 😉 after enjoying their lunch in the restaurant.. couple of hrs of shopping more.. and then they all decided to head home.. wit lots of shopping bags.. today had been a blast… whether one wants to admit it or not.. raashi couldn't stop blushing the whole time.. cuz of wat ranveer had said.. and he was always walkin around wit her.. which she did not mind at all 😳 .. bani was a bit nervous cuz of wat jai had said.. but forget d shopping..she had enjoyed the ice cream the most.. after all chocolate ice cream.. who can resist 😉😉 as they all head out of the mall..

Sahil: so guyz wat's the plan now??
Pushkar: now.. sleep
Sahil: what pushkarr
Pushkar: we've been walking since d morning.. then lunch.. I think I ate too much and now I wanna get some sleep 😃
Sahil: pushkar ur soo lazy
Rano: actually im very tired too
Pushkar: thank youu
Sahil: but guyz its our last day of vacation.. then we're bac to Mondays, boring work.. office
Rano: sahil when do u go to the office on time.. that ur so worried bout Mondays 😆
Sahil: rano I was just saying
Rano: shut up sahil.. it's the rest of us who have to worry about Mondays more than u
Pushkar: ok so how bout we head home now.. and then
Anu: then wat??
Pushkar: um.. well since sahil still wants to do something how about.. in the evening. Everyone at our place

Sahil: sounds gr888… wat r we doing??
Pushkar: hmmm something bollywood ishtyle 😆
Rano: whattt??
Pushkar: antakshri 😕
Rano: antakshri... Pushkarr 😕
Pushkar: no u know how in that movie.. uh.. that movie
Rano: which movie??
Pushkar: that movie.. hum aapke hain kaun.. they have that pillow music thing
Rano: um.. yea 😕
Pushkar: we'll do that
Rano: hmm sounds like fun.. weird but fun
Sahil: whatttt?? Pillow music
Pushkar: u have any better idea 😡 😡
Sahil: um.. no sounds gr8 😊
Pushkar: cool.. in d evening then
Sahil: ok but at our place
Pushkar: what difference does it make??
Sahil: I don't know but our place
Pushkar: fine fine.. let's go now im so tired they all head back home.. goin to their houses.. pushkar dropped himself on d couch and he was out.. zzzzzz.. counting sheep 😆 .. as he was really tired.. 😆😆😆 bani/raashi did a bit of their packing.. as they were leaving tomorrow.. now they were nervous to go to the other house.. in d evening.. but they thought d night'll pass eventually and tomorrow they'll be back to their lives.. work work and more work.. then who knows when they'll see each other.. 😉

Everyone's in d walia mansion.. tired.. jai heads upto his room.. to rest from a long tiring day.. a smile across his face.. cuz today had been mindblowing.. and d evening.. who knows wat could/would happen 😉.. Bani and raashi are sitting watching some tv.. while pushkar's sleeping.. just then their phone rings and raashi goes to answer it.. while bani continues to watch tv.. after a couple of minutes raashi joines her..
Raashi: bani.. voh
Bani: kya hua raashi
Raashi: nothing vijay just called
Bani: why? What happened.. just then pushkar woke up.. now sittin on the couch.. as he rubbed his eyes.. to wake up (vijay is their manager.. their restaurant's manager)
Pushkar: is everything ok at the restaurant???
Raashi: haan everything's fine
Bani: so wat happen?
Raashi: remember the wedding we're booked for
Pushkar: whose? We have so many weddings.. to cater for
Raashi: sonia and karan's..
Bani: haan kya hua?
Raashi: remember how it was suppose to be in Mumbai
Pushkar: yeaaaa
Raashi: well now its in Goa
Pushkar: what??
Raashi: yep its in Goa
Bani: so wat?? Did they cancel us??
Raashi: no.. the thing is now they want us to go to Goa just to cater.. I mean
Bani: Goa??
Raashi: ye they said they don't want any other caterers but the ones from our restaurant
Pushkar: yea but who'll go.. I mean
Raashi: well our cooks and waiters are prepared.. they're ready to drive to Goa.. they just need our permission
Bani: well then its ok I guess.. and we can't turn down sonia and karan
Raashi: exactly but one of us needs to be there.. to make sure everything goes right
Bani: but isn't there wedding..
Raashi: ye someone has to be there tomorrow
Pushkar: tomorrow.. I won't be able to. I got a business meeting to attend to.. very important
Bani: same here.. I have a presentation
Raashi: well I don't have anything I can go.. but
Bani: but.. u gonna go by urself
Raashi: well yea.. I can manage.. I just gotta get there.. and once im there.. I know everyone from the restaurant will be there so I won't be alone
Bani: that's true.. so when are you gonna leave
Raashi: tomorrow.. u guyz head out to Mumbai.. I'll leave for Goa
Bani: um.. ok. Ye that's the only way
Pushkar: yea.. ok so that's settled.. last minute changes.. so irritating..
Raashi: tell me about it.. just then the phone rings again.. it was sahil.. telling them to come over..

Pushkar: guyz freshen up.. get ready.. we gotta go
Raashi: already??
Pushkar: yepp.. let's go.. im gonna go freshen up as pushkar leaves for his room.. bani/raashi following behind.. make their way towards their room.. as the three get ready.. after about half an hour .. they all head out.. makin their way towards the neighboring house.. bani/raashi are wearing salwar kameez.. pushkar's wearing casual.. jeans and shirt.. they knock on the door.. to see rano at the door.. waiting for them
Rano: ab aa rahe ho tum log.. kab se intezaar kar rahen hain
Bani: sorry baba
Rano: its ok.. let's go.. everyone's outside everyone makes their way outside.. there were pillows on the floor.. in a circle.. everyone was busy talking.. ready to get seated… pushkar made his way towards sahil and ranveer..

Rano: tum log baitho.. mein abhi aayi
Raashi: tum kahaan chali
Rano: pakode aur chaye leen
Raashi: is waqt??
Rano: haan demands of the members in this family.. tea and pakodas.
Bani: we'll help you.. raashi and bani made their way towards the kitchen to help rano.. as pia/anu also made their way outside.. joining everyone else.. jai was still in his room.. when he made his way downstairs.. going straight to the kitchen.. he knew the neighbors had joined 😉 as he made his way in the kitchen.. raashi and bani were talking to rano.. and they were telling her that raashi has to go to Goa.. and so on

JW: hi guyz
Rano: mamaji aap yahaan kaise
JW: rano I want pakodas
Rano: aap bahar chaliye.. hum abhi laate hain
JW: can I get one.. at least one.. just one pakoda??
Rano: nooo.. outt..
JW: acha acha.. why are u yelling… u see raashi.. kya kya sehna padhta hai mujhe 😭😭😭
Rano: maine kya kiya.. 😭😭
Raashi: tum dono ka kuch nahin ho sakta
JW: waise ranveer kahaan hai.. I need to talk to him about something
Rano: he's outside wit everyone
JW: waise Goa ki kya baat ho rahi thi
Rano: voh raashi di ko jaana hai kaam ke silsile mein
JW: oo ok.. so go wit ranveer
Raashi: WHAT???? Whyyy
JW: 😕 cuz he has to go to.. rememba I went fo that business deal rano.. they called.. they want another meeting.. and then we're finalized..and I was planning on sending ranveer
Rano: heyyy ya.. u two can go together 😃
Raashi: nooo that's ok. I can manage
JW: im sure u can manage.. but im not sending u alone
Raashi: im not a kid u know
JW: I know that.. phir bhi.. goa alone.. no way 😊 as jai picked up couple of pakodas… Made his way outside wit raashi following closely behind him.. telling him that he betta not tell ranveer that she's going.. cuz she's not going wit him.. but jai was too busy enjoyin d pakodas.. to listen

Bani/rano followed behind.. wit the tea and pakodas.. as jai went to talk to ranveer.. as sahil/pushkar fixed the music.. everyone else took their seats.. jai talked to ranveer.. telling him about d meeting before their deal gets finalized.. ranveer agrees to go..
JW: raashi
Raashi: ji
JW: come here ranveer's looking at jai confused as to y jai's calling raashi.. while raashi's looking at him 😡 😡 😡 as she makes her way towards them
Raashi: ji??
JW: so its settled.. ur goin wit ranveer tomorrow
Raashi: no its perfectly..
Ranveer: kahaan??
JW: Goa
Ranveer: Goa?? why are you going to Goa??
JW: she has a business thing for their restaurant.. so since ur goin... And she's goin tomorrow.. u both can go together
Raashi: but I can
Ranveer: fine wit me as raashi looked at ranveer 😡
JW: perfect its settled then.. u two are goin together.. now let's go.. everyone seems to be waiting for us as jai smiled makin his way towards everyone.. while raashi looked at jai.. as if she would kill him any second.. ranveer smiled.. as he could tell raashi was pissed.. he smiled makin his way past raashi..as he joins everyone else.. raashi stands there fo a couple of seconds.. then finally manages to make her way towards everyone.. jai was lookin fo a seat to sit at.. he wanted to sit nxt to bani 😳 .. that's all that mattered.. and the seat next to bani was empty

But before jai could think of makin his way towards there.. raashi ran and sat down.. much to jai's disappointment.. jai looked at her 😔… while raashi gave him a million dollar smile back... That just read the words "payback".. jai sulkingly found a seat across from bani.. while bani looked at him wit a confused look.. as he threw another 😡 look towards raashi.. ranveer was sitting by sahil and rano.. as they all sat down.. ready to play

Pushkar: so are we ready??
Rano: yeppp
Sahil: ok wat r we doing??
Rano: I thought we were passing the pillow around.. and when the music stopped.. the loser does something
Pushkar: wat does the loser have to do
Rano: anythinggg we tell them 😈
Sahil: sounds good to me
Pushkar: really???
Ranveer: how about we just play antakshri.. straight out.. I don't trust u guyz..
Pushkar: what is that suppose to mean?? 😡
Ranveer: u know very well wat I mean.. kya pata.. kya kehdo.. I can't take any chances sorry
JW: im gonna have to agree wit ranveer.. let's just play antakshri
Sahil: chickens 😆
JW: wat'd u say?? 😡
Sahil: I said.. who's starting??
Rano: I'll start.. give me a letter
Sahil: S
Rano: why S??
Sahil: for sahil😉
Rano: that's so dumb
Sahil: why is it dumb??
Rano: it just is… no one starts antakshri like that
Pushkar: can u both stop fighting and start..
Rano: ok ok S it is as rano starts off the antakshri..

dat's it fo now.. hope u guyz enjoyed.. it looks LONG enough 😳

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago

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NaV

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Stunner

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Posted: 18 years ago

#995

hope u guyz enjoy... i tried 😳

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Treasure

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Dazzler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#996

OMG...Jai Walia is becoming a royal flirt...I like it...please cont soon!

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timepasskar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#997

Navs....

Gr8 part as always....Raashi and Ranveer ek saath Goa ke beach pe....thats a thought......kya kya ho sakta hai... 😉 😆

Looking forward to reading how the game shapes up.....

Nidhi

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Treasure

@Treasures

Dazzler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#998

part 27 was so cute...loved it... 👏 👏

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Pooja

@kripa0521

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#999

Finally you updated, good one gosh when will Jai and Bani be alone.

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Meera

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1000

Navs....part 27 was awesome!!!! I really enjoyed it!!

Poor Raashi, got stuck with Ranveer.....even though she wanted to, deep in her heart... 😳 😳 😳

Please continue soon!! 😆 😆

Luv ya hun,

Meera aka. Mrs. P. Sariss! 😳

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