(FF) Pyar Mein Twist! Note Pg. 100!!!! - Page 57

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Here are the detail commentos as promised😉, now i betta get an update soon.

Part 25

Recap: Jai tells everyone that Mia has come out of a coma, and then he leaves to go to the office. Sahil comes in and Mia and him have a few moments together. Then Lakshya comes in and tells Mia that he is happy for her and Sahil. And lastly Shina comes in and asks about Jai. Bani comes and tells Mia that she is being discharged today. Lakshya and Sahil plan something and they both smile. How can i forget, i didn't get enough role😭



Mia: Sahil? Tum Lakshya ke saath bahar kyun gaye the? gilli danda khelne, mia kabhi toh kuch samjha karo.

Sahil: that, my dear Mia. Is a surprise! That's what i am trying to say.

Mia: oh really? No we just got bored, so we thought we will pull a fast one on you.😆

Sahil: yup

Ranveer: Would you guys like us to leave? If you want to talk about all your little romantic stuff. yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai???😉

Sahil: Sorry Bhaiyya, lekin humne aisa waisa kuch nahin kaha. Lekin karne wale the, kyun.😉

Pia: kehne wale the. I said the same thing.

Mia: Pia? You too? yep yep.

Pia: yes me too!! Aab Ranveer, hum chale? Office bhi jaana hain..... Pia you want some ALONE time with ranveer now do you???😉

Ranveer: ya, Sahil today's your day off, you better appreciate it! He will one day.

Sahil: I will bhaiyya! Thank-you! Itni jaldi aagaya woh din?? sahil tumme itni akkal kahan se aagayi?

Pia: Bani di? Aap Sahil aur Mia ke saath ghar aajengi na? Yep, kabab mein haddi.

Bani: haan....if they don't go all lovey dovey on me! tumhari samne koi kuch kar sakta hai???

Mia: Bani di?? Not Fair!!! It's okay mia, isiliye keh rahi hoon shina ke saath raha karo. woh sahi time par sahi cheesein kehti aur karti hai. 😉

Sahil: ya you guys all stop teasing my Mia!! how sweet. going all protective are we?

Bani: sahil? First of all she is my sister, you come in second! Got that? superwoman😡

Sahil: YES Ma'am!!! Don't call her mam.

Bani, Pia, Ranveer, and Mia laugh

Pia and Ranveer leave the hospital to go to Walia Business House.

Mia: Bani di? Aab hum bhi chale? Nahi, thodi der rukte hai, party warty karte hain, after all ghar hai hospital thodi.

Bani looks at Sahil who shakes his head no. you don't even know how to plan a surprise??? well i am not surprised sahil ka dimag aaj tak kam kara hai joh aaj kare ga?😆

Mia: aap dono mujhse kya chupa rahe ho? everything my dear.

Bani: kuch nahin, aab chalo Liar!!!!!

Sahil: par Bani..... shut up sahil.

Bani looks at Sahil and shakes her head.

Bani helps Mia get out of the hospital bed and helps her walk to the door.

Bani: sahil, can you please complete all the formalities? Why don't you? and leave them some alone time? seriously woman don't you know anything?

Sahil: sure

Sahil goes to the reception desk, while Bani helps gather Mia's things from the hospital.


Back at Walia House

Shina: what are you doing Lakshya? Naam dooba raha hai aur kya. I swear itni work hard karni padti hai reputation ke liye aur ye...😡

L: I'm organizing Mia's homecoming party Kisliye??? aage jake Mia ke bachchon ko babysit karo, while mia and sahil have all the fun okay? duffer.

Shina: why?? Because he lost his brain cells.

L: because she is my friend, and because I care about her? first she is not JUST a friend, and second stop acting like a wuss.

Shina: Sahil, stole her away from you!!! and he is being a loser and watching him steal his girl away.

L: di, that's not true. I lost her….it was my fault initially. Tum mere bhai nahi ho.

Shina: so now your owning up to your mistake?

L: yes, and so shud you! Shina NEVER commits a mistake don't you know that? and you call yourself her brother.

Shina: me? What do you mean? pagla gaya hai, operation ki zaroorat hai, ignore him.

L: You know Mr. Walia doesn't like you anymore! Then why don't you just leave him alone? You are right, Mr. Walia doesn't like shina, he LOVES her. happy? as for leaving him alone, shina ka jadoo ek bar jiske sar chad jaye kabhi nahi utarta, your mr. walia is day dreaming about me. Get your facts right Lakshya, then we'll talk.

Shina: LAKSHYA!!! What are you saying? He does like me, of course he likes me!!! Love baby, love. Mr. Jai Walia is madly in love with Shina. That's the attitude i want. GET IT?

L: di, you know what? You live in a dream world, where one day your dream is going to come crashing down, and that day will be the day you get the biggest shock of your life!!!! and then you will wake up and realize your sister doesn't dream but believes in reality and she gets what she wants and you will be sitting in a corner mourning.

Shina: Lakshya, you have no right to talk to me this way...just you watch. I'm going to WIN the bet with Bani!! Now that's my girl. you are going to win the bet, otherwise someone is in trouble ahem meera ahem.😆

L: bet? Kaunsa bet? Badi behan se is tarah baat? agar batana hota toh batati lekin tum us layak nahi ho.

Shina: (thinks) Shit!! I wasn't supposed to mention it, in front of Lakshya...aab main kya bolu? Use your brain honey, aur kisi ko koi safai deni ki zaroorat nahi hai. Jo karna sab ke samne karna.

Shina: bet nahin....you heard wrong, now just go and get ready for your stupid party!!! I still don't get why you're doing this to yourself! cuz he has lost his mind.

L: di, this is called true love!! and i suppose next you would want to wear a dress?

Shina: (thinks) whatever!!! I better get ready for the party tonight though! Jai will def be there, and tonight I need to put my plan into action!!! And that way, I'll win the bet, Mia will be happy, and Bani will be crying!! All my goals accomplished!! Wait since when did Mia get involved in my goals?? I need to think about myself first and then everyone else!!! Mia???? shina thinking about someone else? yeh kya hua, kaise hua, kyun hua? Shina is all ready to woo jai once again, and bring tears in bani's eyes. 😆

That's it!! I'm sorry Shina, I hope you like it!!! What is Shina's plan?? I'll try continuing soon!!! You already know how i feel. As for shina's plan, whatever it is, it will end up in bani crying.

Hehe yep i am back to being conceited!!!!!!

Continue soon.

Shina

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

shina......ur comments are soooo much fun to read!!! and yes don't worry about the bet.....you never know you might win....after all the ff is called Pyar Mein TWIST! 😆


Note: I will be continuing this ff either on Tuesday the 16th or Friday the 17th!!! 😛

Where are my detailed replies😭😭😭 I know i will win!!!!!!!

Meera i didn't know tuesday ke baad friday aata hai, yeh kaise hogaya? ya phir one day lasts from tuesday through friday???😆 Sorry had to point that out.😆

Shina

Originally posted by: lonely14

Originally posted by: lonely14

Where are my detailed replies😭😭😭 I know i will win!!!!!!! Your detailed replies are there now!!!

Meera i didn't know tuesday ke baad friday aata hai, yeh kaise hogaya? ya phir one day lasts from tuesday through friday???😆 Sorry had to point that out.😆 You know what Shina?? More teasing will result in Bani winning!!!!😆

Shina

Meera

Originally posted by: lonely14

OMG you are soooo much better than me 👏 Just read this part for now. Its great.😉👏👏

Originally posted by: aman123

OMG you are soooo much better than me 👏 Just read this part for now. Its great.😉👏👏