FF: AGAINST ALL ODDS - COMPLETE - Page 8

Wow...that was simply too good.... 👏
Finally he does or atleast wants to do something other than look smashing... 😉
So now both need a plan... 😳 😳 😳
DUS SAAL BAAD....itna purana hai inka pyaar... 😳

Ok now u have to continue sooooooooon... I can't bear to wait and think how these two come to talk to each other.... 😳

Poo

PS: I love those poetic lines u put in between.... 👏

Originally posted by: jigna_07

yess i get to be the first to comment on partt 4!!!!
it was awesome1!!!!
please continue soon!

thanks jigna, will post chapter 5 soon.

Originally posted by: Min_3088

👏 MIND BLOWING!!PLZ CONTINUE SOON! 😃
lol ill make sure to drop by the gym once or twice now 😆

yes min, u should do that, kya pata who is waiting there for u 😉

will post chapter 5 soon. till then take care and keep exercising 😆

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Wow...that was simply too good.... 👏
Finally he does or atleast wants to do something other than look smashing... 😉
So now both need a plan... 😳 😳 😳
DUS SAAL BAAD....itna purana hai inka pyaar... 😳

Ok now u have to continue sooooooooon... I can't bear to wait and think how these two come to talk to each other.... 😳

Poo

PS: I love those poetic lines u put in between.... 👏

hey poo, kahan ho tum ............. hope everything is thik thak.

of course bani ko bikini mein dekh ke, u can't expect him not to do anything. janamo janmo ka pyaar ...... wow na ........ aise ff's mein hi hota hain.

ab bahut sochna padega ki unko kaise milaya jaye .............. shayad kuch mahine lag jayenge sochte sochte ....... will update then 😆 😆

am glad u like the extra lines i add in bet, mujhe bhi acha lagta hain .... very diff to find the appropriate ones, lekin manage kar leti hoon.

sabs

wow dear just read other parts
awesome dear cant wait for the next part 😃
👏

Originally posted by: sabsj

hey poo, kahan ho tum ............. hope everything is thik thak.

of course bani ko bikini mein dekh ke, u can't expect him not to do anything. janamo janmo ka pyaar ...... wow na ........ aise ff's mein hi hota hain.

ab bahut sochna padega ki unko kaise milaya jaye .............. shayad kuch mahine lag jayenge sochte sochte ....... will update then 😆 😆

am glad u like the extra lines i add in bet, mujhe bhi acha lagta hain .... very diff to find the appropriate ones, lekin manage kar leti hoon.

sabs

main yahi hoon... and u say u'll think over for months......

nnaaaaaaaaaahhhiiiiiiiiiiii... 😭😭😭

itna wait...... kyu.... itna kya plan karenge.... 😕

thanks hun 😉

cant wait to see the sizzle between this jai and bani, my laptops burning up at JW's intensity - lets have a pehli mulaqat quickly pleeeeeeease!!!!!

love you loads, keep it up! 😃

Originally posted by: divya_123

wow dear just read other parts
awesome dear cant wait for the next part 😃
👏

thanks divya ............ please do read the following parts too, i will try to make it worth ur while.

Originally posted by: Cordelia

thanks hun 😉

cant wait to see the sizzle between this jai and bani, my laptops burning up at JW's intensity - lets have a pehli mulaqat quickly pleeeeeeease!!!!!

love you loads, keep it up! 😃

cords honey, pehli mulaqat is dependent on when u end my misery in ur ff 😆 ... barter exchange sweety ............ u r tadpaoing me so much, i am following in ur footsteps ........... u r my guru afterall 😆

u want them to sizzle, then make roshni fizzle out soon ........... will then make it worth ur while, laptop toh kya, u will burn up too at jw's intensity 😆

great work,sabsj.and what a location,both in the gym,swimming side by side,ahem..ahem..please continue soon. 😊