FF PART 28 THRU 32 - Page 8

part 30B was awesome 👏 👏 👏
plzz continue soon!

Cant find any more words to praise your work Aditee...it is simply great...I look forward to new episodes everyday...it is 1000 times better than the actual current story line....

Sec 30B….The mighty JW a sulky patient and B being the good caring nurse wifey et al. Nice digression from the usual.

"all masculine, reeking of JW" …………. that phrase says it all

"….a softest white chikan kurta set, with the most exquisite embroidery on it, a set that had seen better days, looks nicely soft and worn now………." that was a lovely word picture.

"…….playing with her mangal sootra locket…." that was another of ur adorable detailings.

"……she pulls the covers back on him, he "ouches" violently when the blanket hits his arm............ showing her he is in "pain" ………. seen quite a few of the type

Ur ffs contantly oscillate b/w the fantasy fictional and the realistic (I can easily relate to many of the JW-B moments/dialogues.) That is ONE of the reasons I love ur stories.

Thanx Aditee and whats new..waiting for the next.//CAT

aditee,u r mindblowing. 👏 👏 just din;t have words to praise you.it is just getting better day by day.waiting for the next part. 😃

Aditee I have a suggestion...since Jai was being such a baby about the injection I think you should make Bani go to hit him on the same spot but kiss it instead...maybe you could write a scene where they are play fighting n this happens 😃 😃

sorry if it dosent fit into ur FF but I thought it would be a cuteee scene 😉 😊

Aditee didi..

i loved part 30B!

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hey Aditee, 30B was just great. i cannot wait for the next part. i check for your updates every 15 mins. 😳

Thanks a ton, Aditee for an extra long, extra spl Part 31. here's an extra big 🤗

sowmya

Wow Aditee!!! 31 was such a refreshing part, because they weren't very akward with each other, I totally loved that part!!! Please continue soon, can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Sec 31, I am totally dumbfounded. This is ur piece de resistance.

"….pushing her blanket and dupatta all tangled around his waist and legs.........…"now THAT is a frame by frame desc
"…… her face and neck sting when she splashes water and applies soap, thanks to JW's unshaven jaw.....…" OUCH &
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".... tries not to touch any meat,…" wondering why ur B is such a staunch veggie
"…I am going back to Bombay....…" I still find it difficult to call her "Mumbai"
Ur kitchen scene from the "follows her like a puppy dog (funny picture there even if unintended)
to the ginger elaichi tea" …..…….captured the gamut of hubby-wifey intimacy, playfullness, insecurities,caring ,mundanen ess, griping, et al. Superlative part
."......... hair damp and curling.…(INCREDIBLY SENSUOUS)........He looks sexy ….. he is , may be he was born with it" ………..most privileged born with silver spoon OUR man had to be born sexy too
"She wants to live in Panvel for ever. …..last minute of her existence"……..now why do I LOVE this forthright declaration.
"Curls up in HIS bed where he slept last nite…….all of two minutes to sleep......... " conveys beautifully how warm & secure B feels in J's "presence"
"B: I have a better Idea! (trembling voice........ but meeting his eyes unflinchingly) ……" Very very suggestive

Thanx Aditee for the yummy read and of course awaiting the next course//CAT